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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Awww dat was so lovely i enjoyed reading it a lot glad 2 c d changed Sharon and am Happy dat SwaRon declared dere relationship official And d gangs reaction was hilarious...
To b honest am a SwaRon fan never felt any thing 4 KriYaansh but still after Sneha's exit when i think abt D3 it seems dis is not d same d3 wid which we fell in love wid...
If Sneha was d Heart of d Show den Shakti was d backbone of D3 d show is incomplete without both of dem
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
thanks a lot guys for all ur encouraging comments...here i am updating the next part..hope u guys will like it πŸ˜Š ..n plzz do comment n hit the like button..

Part 3

next day morning all are again in the bb court.. nil rey sw are playing bb n others r upset unable to go to clg without their besties..after few mins sharon comes..bt no one reacts..they were really upset..she clears her throat just to get attention from them..every1 looks at her bt again kept quite..so she thot of telling every1 abt her plan..not in detail bt atleast she thot she can tell them that she is planning something so that they can feel relieved a bit..

sh: guys come on..ho kya gaya hai aap logo ko..??i mean i told u na that ye suspension ko seriously mat lo?? dont u guys trust me anymore?? maine aise hi nahi bola tha guys..i am really working on it..n if u guys behave like this how can i proceed with my plan??

listening this sw rey nil also comes to sh along with the gang..

rey: what r u upto sh??
sw: exactly..tum karne kya wali ho??

vicky: jo b karne wali ho main tumhare sath hoon sh😊..

all others(rinni smmi neha bharat amar) : hum bhi..

rey : guys stop it..its not a game..its really risky..i dnt want hammare waje se aap sab probs face kare..bcoz as we all know avp tho wait kar rahi hai hum koi galti kare..wo kuch bhi kar sakti hai..

sh : rey plz dnt panic..iss bar jo main karne ja rahi hu, it will b something very big..clg wale tho soch b nahi payenge ke kya hogaya ye sab..plan fail hone ka chance hi nahi hai..n agar ho bhi gai tho prob hamme nahi clg walo ko hi hogi..n plan success ho ya fail, aap logo ka suspension tho jaroor wapas liya jayega..

sw: aisa kya karne wali ho tum sh??

sh: i cant tell u d whole plan..bcoz plan tho completely muje b nahi pata hai..

all: what??

sh: guys relax..q ki plan mera nahi kiddo ka hai..n main sirf usse info de rahi jo wo puch rahi hai..bt trust me guys jo jo info usne collect ki hai na aap charo ke baare mein, hammare geoup ke bare mein, utna tho muje b nahi pata tha hum sab frnds ke bare me..

all are confused..how can sh;s sis plan all this?? how she knows all of them??

rey: par usse hum sabke bare me kaise pata??n wo q ye sab kar rahi hai??

sw: han agar kar bhi rahi hai tho how will she execute it??

sh: q ki wo b hammare clg join ki hai..

all again : what??

rey: seriously..??tumne bataya q nahi sh? kiddo b hammare clg join ki hai..yar abb tho milado usse

sh: no..i cant

sw: par q sh?? wo hammare liye itna sab kuch kar rahi hai hum usse q nahi mil sakte?? aakhir baat kya hai..??

sh is really feeling difficult to hide the truth from her frnds..bt she had promised her sis that she vl not tell them until she herself comes infront of them..kiddo wants to face them personally n directly..not through sh..or not as sh's sis..bt sh has to ans her frnds without breaking her promise to her sis..

sh: guys i cant tell u anything ryt nw bt..

rey cuts off her sentence : listen sh..kiddo itni badi risk nahi lesakti..i mean she just joined the clg n she is going against the clg..it will b very risky..u just stop her..

sh: stop her?? sh thinks " yeah ryt stop her..as if she listens to me..uske liye tho ye do or die situation ban gai hai..rey ke lala land se niche uthare, tab wo meri bath sunegi na..bt no..jis insaan ke lie wo maut ke muh se nikal ke aayi hai, usse aise taklif mein todi na chodegi woh"

sw: sh come on kya soch rahi ho?? rey is ryt..

sh: guys guys..plz trust me..i promised her tho i cant tell u guys anything..but whatever she is doing is a full proof plan..fail hone ka chance hi nahi hai..i have seen all the info she has collected n plan..no chance of failing..n she knws all of u..so aap unske lie strangers nahi hai..

vi: kaise?? how does she know us??

sh: dance...

simmi rinni: dance??

sh: ya dance..she is also a dancer..n she saw us in competitions..

sw: do we know her?? he has strong feeling that they knw sh's sis..something sh z hiding..

sh: nope..i mean how do i knw..?? 

rey: ok ok..leave it..bt jo b karo aap dono, ek bar fir se soch lena..ok??

sw: exactly..

sh: dnt worry..aap dono ko lekar wo koi risk nahi legi..after all aap dono uske (freak..she just said almost everything..)sh is afraid now how to cover up the matter..she said it..

rey: wht do u mean?? hum dono uske what?? sh wat r u hiding from us??

sw:haan sh..wo q hum dono ko lekar koi risk nahi lena chahti..

sh: well...u c..wo meri sis  hai ryt?? yeah.. tho she knows aap dono mere lie kitne imp ho..i mean i told her everything..tho obviously mere close frnds ko bachne mein meri help tho karegi hi na wo..

rey thinks muje aisa q lag raha hai ki ye kria hai..q ki wohi ek thi jo mere aur sw ke lie kuch bhi karne ke lie ready rehti thi..bt kria aur sh ki sis?? aise kaise hosakta hai?? looking at sky "baatcutter ki universe ji..plz help me..plz me jo soch raha hoon usse sach bana do..plzzz"

sw thinks kuch tho gadbad hai..i mean aise smthng big planning aur wo b akele hi..ye tho ek hi insaan kar sakti hai jahan tak mein janta hu..kria..kya sach me kria wapas agayi hai??..kya kria hi sh ki.." hey universe ji plzzz ye baat sach banado..agar aisa hua na tho kria ke sath mein b aapke follower list me shamil hojaunga..plzzz"

vicky thinks jis tarah se sh explain kar rahi hai, waise tho 1 hi insaan fit ho sakta hai as long as i knw..kria..kya ye ho sakta hai kriya sh ki sis?? o god..no no.."oh kria ki unverse ji..plz ye bat sach banado..mere dost ki lyf ban jayegi..pehli bar usne kisi se itna pyar kia hai..uska 1st love..plz plz plz"

neha thinks "universe ji kya me jo soch rahi hu wo sach hai..agar nahi hai tho plz sach bana dijiye na..kria hi ho sh ki sis..plzz..agar aisa hua na tho me aapko sau(100) naarial chadaungi..plzzz"

rinni wispers to rinni: kria hosakti hai kya??
simmi: how do i know??

amar bharat nil also have the doubt that there is somthing fishy abt sh's sis..

all are busy in thier own thoughts..sw just want to confirm abt his doubt so 

sw: rey 1 baat puchu??smthing personal..if u dnt mind

rey: yeah sure..

sw: agar..i mean suppose achanak se kria tumhare samne agayi tho(looking at sh) tumaraha reaction kya hoga??

sh listening to this became serious n eagerly looking at rey now..

rey smiles n says: meri reaction..?? πŸ˜Š

sw: haan tera reaction (again looks at sh)

rey: blank..

sh: what?? blank??

rey: han blank..bcoz meri baatcutter ko meri blank expression bilkul saha nahi jata tha..i mean she always wants ki me kuch kahu ya atleast uspe chillau..naa ki chup rahu..so wo itne cute cute tareeke try karti thi mujse muh kulwane ke lie..i just used to luv those tricks of her..sply wo buterfly kiss..

all: butterfly kiss??

rey realises what he said just now..so in serious tone: haan i mean..usne ek baar muje hasane ke lie ek butterfly ko pakad kar usse kiss kia tha..han..

all :ohhoo

sh looks at sky folding her hands : thank u universe ji..which did not go unnoticed by sw..so he goes near sh n whispers in her ear " so she is back"..sh was shocked bt happy ki sw understood her so well..so she just smiles..after few mins of chit chatting on few random things,

sh: ok guys i gtg..i need to help kiddo also..n yeah 2mrw gonna b very big day for all of us..so sab bb court mein rehna..i vl b in touch with u guys through msgs..n when everything is ready i vl call u all to inform..n plz dnt ask me anything..n yeah koi b kuch b clg mein aaj discuss mat karna..naa meri kiddo ke bare n naahi plan ke bare me..plzzz..so bye..c u all 2mrow..



done for now..i think this update is lil bit boring..bt for the next part i mean on kria;s entry, this part vl help me to express each of gang members reaction..so sry..n plzz do comment..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
boring are u kidding me 
this was an amazing update
i mean awesome yaar
gang  ko aaj universe ji baadi yaad aa rahi thi 
sharon and swayams bond superb
pls update the next chpter soon
thnaks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
Wow dat was another awesum and wonderful update eagerly waiting 4 Kriya's return
one request can u pls. give us sum SwaRon's moment...
update soon and am 101%Sure dat next Update will b even more wonderful
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Amazinnn update !!
Ermmm.. Bt wht krisha r upto?? Info abt d gang?? Bt wht info jisse if plan fail b hota h thn only clg wud suffer??? Reyam since d begginin has dis feel abt kriya.. Thts y they r agn n agn askin sharon abt it.. Poor sharon.. She has to lie agn bt isnt she alrdy perfect at it?? I mean swayam se b toh apni feelings se relatd itna jhoot bola !!

Evry1 is excited bt nw confused if its kriya o nt??
O.. So kriya wants to face dem personally instead thru sharon.. Hmmm!!

Ermm.. Chaalu swayam.. Que b aisa pucha jisse uske sare doubts clr ho gye !!

D best ws Reyaansh's ans.. I wud stay blank !!
Coz then kriya will manaofy him.. Hehehe 😊

Sbke brains r pointin towards one person only buh evryone has thr own reasons..+pov's..
Universe g ki toh lottry lg gyi..

Awwieee.. Swayam so well understands sharon :p

Buh wait.. Did sharon say maut k muh se nikal k ayi h????
Hohhh.. Wht hs hpnd wid kriya??? Thk toh h na????

N evn dat ws gud.. Smjhau toh tb jb wo Reyaansh k lala land se niche utre.. πŸ˜†

Cnt wait to read d nxt part..!
Kriya's Entry.. Gang's reactions.. KRIYAANSH meeting... Eee..
Update real soon !
Waitin!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
awesome update...
waiting for kria's entry...
loved the update...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
such an amazing part... totally loved it... 
awww swayam can understand sharon soo well... 😳 
i loved that line.. samjhau toh tab jab rey ke land se bahar aaye.. hayeee i went in kriyaansh land.. heheπŸ˜† 
really waiting 4 next part.. kriya's plan seems interesting.. so udate veryy soon.. pls.. cant bear the suspense.. 

thanks 4 the pm.. 😊 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
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Posted: 11 years ago
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whole gang are praying to universe ji that it should be kria...
swayan caught sharon red handed... that she is back...
above the chapter cannot express my views...
happy and shocked and suspense build some in thing between heart and mind...
awesome and amazing... good and loved its...
update res of the chapter soon waiting early...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
nice update..., pls next part kriya entry