~Yrkkh Ki Diwali,Duggu Ki Zabani:VOTING ROUND#1~

Posted: 11 years ago

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So urm, guys.. Thank You for your entriesπŸ€—
It's a bit late, but let's begin with the Voting Round of the Contest.

. R u l e s .
Vote for only 1 entry.
Do NOT vote for your own entry.
Do NOT create Multiple IDs to vote for your entry.
Do NOT advertise your entry.
Last date to vote is, 4th December, 2o12.

Happy Voting!
Posted: 11 years ago
. E n t r i e s .

#1


Dun B worry Only b happy

Main hun nanah ta Lajkumal
Naksh hain mela Naam

I thot to tell u a tale,
which will make u Gale.

Dadi maa thi happy happy,
Diwali thi jo aane waali.

Mummy papa wal vely sad,
How to tell dat thamthing iz bad.

Sab bale khoob roye,
dab unhe pata chala hum pual ho daye.

hum daye chote se ghal mein,
mummy noticed tension face pal chabke.

Mummy boli:'dun b sad only b happy'
lets celeblate diwali, leavin all ul wollies.

Choti si langoli banayi, deeye aur baati se sajaayi,
Papa laaye thode se clackers,Sab ne mil diwali manayi.
Mummy boli:'Money is not impoltant, Love only matters'

Inn chabko happy dekh, 
Maine aur Ranbil uncle ne Daana daaya,
"Innni thi hanti, Inni thi Khuchi, Inna tukla chaand ta,
Thwabon k tikon pe, aayon dhunde Aachiyan'.

#2

" Hello all pehechana mujhe????? main hu aap sabka pyaala NAKSH yani meli dadi ka Lalla meli nani ka chiku aur meli mamma ka duggu...mele mummy papa ne bahot sali diwali celebrate ki hai pal mela favorite diwali hai ramlila wali...hehehe

us waqt meli mamma papa se na naraz thi...wo gandi buli sneha didi unke beech me aa gayi thi na...mere papa ne mamma ko manane ki na puli koshish ki...mere papa god Ram bane tha aur meli mamma Sita ma bani thi...wo dono na bahot sweerlt lag lahe the bilkul meli tarah...aul phil Ramlila hone ke baad na mamma aul pappa phil se ek ho gaye...aul happily diwali manayi...mele mamma aul papa ek dusre se bahot pyaal kalte hai aul main bhi unse bahot pyaal kalta hu...tooo apko bhi na meli taraf se sweet wali diwali...bye"


#3

*Garibi walli dibali (diwali ) *
The warmth I felt , on the very first day , when i arrived in this world , though not  physically , but my presence was marked , was just  special , in fact more than special . My mother , may i should say , The best mother , bestowed her Love and protection on me  from that first day till the day   i cried for the first time in this world . 

She cried , laughed  in those Nine month's  and i accompanied her  , I cried with her , I laughed with her , I loved My mother , Kicked her , make her believe my existence and my touch .

My mother , 

The world's best mother !

The world's strongest mother !

Meli mumma shabshe pyaali ! shabshe niraali , shabshe shundar , shabshe pyaali - meli mumma 
 
Taariii raa rum , taa reee raa rum ....  She calmed me even when she was in pain  ! 


That tragedy ,  We lost our home .
Yet she gave me same love as use to give me before .
She smiled , and celebrated Diwali , in her special way .


Vo agarbatti ki smell  ,  Vo ladduo ka jalwa ,     Vo rashugualle jo  padose walli bengalan aunty layi thi ! * sneezes*  Yumm , kash mai aur kha pata , mumma kitna kam khaati hai , achche se taste bhi nahi karne diya muje !


Haan chuluat mai chab udaash the  chote ghar mai dibali manane ko ! Pal meli mumma shabshe beshat !

Unhone itni achche se dibali manayi , shabko khush kiya ! muje bhi ! Eco-friendly dibali !   phoolo se sajawat kiya tha ! yellow , pink , pink ka bhai color purple , red aur red ka bhai color orange che bhi  ghar ko sajaya tha ! Bot shaare diye bhi  jalaye humne ! haan nahi to kya !  Shabka aashirwaad liya ! shabko kush kiya ! Me and mumma besht jodi !  fatako she mai darta hu abbi , sab chotte bachche darte hai ; Papa bhi masht hai ekdum "vo kya bolte hai ..." bindaash ! Papa ne mere aur mumma ke sath poooja ki , mumma ke shath romansh bhi kiya , dono samjhte hai muje romash ka matlab nahi pta hehe ! But mumma ka duggu shab janta hai ! Duggu Locksh ! 
 Dibali waaj oshm ! Angergi mai bole to ! Dibali was khaas !  Shabko khush karne walli dibali ! Meri dibali ! Shabki dibali !
Edited by -Stutz- - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
tfs...

entry 3😊
Edited by sadia_naksh - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
entry 1

superbly writtenπŸ‘
Posted: 11 years ago
all are super awesome and cute β€οΈ
i would vote for entry #3
Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Entries friends

All d best to participants 


i m voting for #2   πŸ˜Š
Posted: 11 years ago
entry # 1
it was lovely... even the remaining were good.. 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
All the enteries are are written superbly.
My vote goes to entry #3
Posted: 11 years ago

all entrys are greatπŸ‘

but my fav is entry number 3 πŸ˜ƒ

so I vote for entry num 3😊

Edited by Saraella - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Entry 1! all were good but I liked this one the most...
good luck to all the partcipants!


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