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meerubzara thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
nice concept
feel sad that ur finger got burned
tc of urself
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Wow awesome start. I am wondering what kind of game is this and how it will affect their lives. Plz update soon. Hope ur finger is fine now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
interesting story yar
starting of the story too gud
so both meet each other
memorizing their faces huh abhiya
soethg strange game hmm
so piya is in trouble now?
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14


chapter 2
At home arnav was very waiting for piya.he was very worried for her.piya entered at home..
Arnav:piya where have u been...how many times i told to not to go outside alone.do u know how much i was worrid for u??
Piya:papa chill.i was nearby...and stop worring for me like that..i'm a big girl now...
Arnav:ok ok my big girl sorry for shouting ...now go and eat something...u must be hungry..
Piya:but where is misha??
Arnav:i think she is sleeping...
Piya:what still sleeping!!i'm going to wake her up..
Arnav:ok go...

Piya left...and arnav was looking sad..piya is just like her mother.that makes arnav feel very sad...after his and madhu's devorce he took care of his daughters from heart and soule...he also loved his wife.but fate didnt smile..madhu didnt want to stay with him anymore..she even didnt want her daughters also...they were realy small..till then arnav was their father also their mother.
But sometimes he things that if madhu would be with them maybe she could take care of their daughters more.

Piya went to her room.she saw misha was sleeping there..she was sleeping she had not slept for a month..piya went to her and started to shake her...
Piya:misha...misha wake up...common misha...u r sleeping from 4 hours...now wake up...
Misha(sleepy voice):piya..go...dont disturb me,...
Piya:please misha...wake up na...i want to tell u something important...
Misha:oh god piya ...u r too much..tell me what happend.
Pia:not now..go get fresh.then we'll eat something then i'll tell u...
Misha:ok ok... 

misha go up from the bed and went to wash room...after getting fresh they both went downstair...and started to shout..

p,m:papa papa...where are u??
arnav:yes my dolls i'm here...what happened??
p'm;wwe r hungry papa...
arnav:ok...lets have our dinner...here is the dining table..

piya was having her dinner silently...where misha was continuously talking aboud the new place...she was saying that this place is like a set of a horror movie..the place i haunting her blah blah...arnav took it as joke...but piya thought misha was  right...there is something wrong with this place
after dinner piya and misha said goo night to their father and went ot
their room..
misha noticed that piya was silent for long...so she broke the silence

misha:hay piya...what happened to u...u wanted to tell me something right.
piya:mish do u remember the last Halloween party????
misha:mmm oh yea..she said u r different there is something in ur hand..u r in trouble blah blah blah
piya:thats the problem..
misha:what!!dont tell me u believed her..
piya:today when i went outside for walk...i lost my way..a stranger helped me to
reach home...but before going he said the same thing what that lady told me...
misha:what did he say??
piya:he said i should not come here..i'm in danger..but he i with me...
misha:wait...ur stranger is a phico,mad,freak...
piya:but
misha:only a phico can tell this...
piya:but he is not a phico mish..he is so handsome..(piya blushed)
misha:u cant know anyonens mentality to see face..but i'm sure onething
u r definitely mad..u had a crush on a stranger???
piya:he is not a stranger a all..he told me his name...
misha:so
piya:so ur head...
misha:piya go to sleep..maybe u r tired thats why u r talking
this weird things..
piya:ok...good night..
mishaa:ya gn

piya went to sleep but she could not...she was only thinking about what happened to her that day..
but she didnt know that someone was standing outside the house looking at her window..
he was none other than abhay...  

abhay(in mind):piya u dont know how many dangers are around u.
u have stuck into a dangerous game..but dont worry i'm in ur side..
i'm  a good player i told u...

ahay smiled and went away from there...


finally i finished it...actually it was the part of chapter one ...but it  was deleted...so i had to write it again..
let me know u guys liked it or not...


Edited by ririrararaatry - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Its okk dear👏Arnav,pia,misha conversation lovely but update sooo little😛plzz continue asap😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

awsome update...👍🏼

thanx for pm!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
nice update
try to continu soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend in your next part of your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
lovely concept plz do count soon and pm if possible
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
awesome yaar but yeh game hai kya?😕