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Posted: 11 years ago
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simply awesome.loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
wowww interesting.. loved it...cont soon :)
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Khamoshi''lakin kab tak

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He: aaj to mein tujhe chodunga nhi

She: phle pakdo to shi

She show thumb to him and run here there.

After few minutes, she disappears.

He : kha chup gyi

She: kya hua?

He: shilpa, 


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wo badmash fir khi jha ke chup gyi

Mujhe hand pe cut kiya, then khi bhaag gyi

shilpa: tumne jaroor kuch kiya honga

He: maine kuch nhi kiya

Phle usne mujhpe pani ger diya

Aur ab ye

shilpa: pani

Kab

He: mein aaram se so rha tha

She came near to me, aue mujhe jagane lagi

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She: utho na

He: cutto , mujhe sone de please

She: nhi

Mere sath khelo na

He: mujhe nind aa rhi hai cutto

She: par mujhe khilna hai

He: aur mujhe suna hai

She stand on bed and placed both hand on waist and said "aap uth rhe ho ya nhi"

He: nhi

She (mummer): nhi

Now, you face Miss Sia khurana.


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She take jug full of water and ''' splash on him'

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He: kitni badmash ho gyi hai

Shilpa: hmm

He: tum mera mjak uda rhi ho

Shilpa: mein

Meri itni himmat, mein karan Khurana ka mjak udhayu

She laughs on him.

Karan: tumhe to baad mein dekhta hu

Phle is sia ki bacchi to aaj gyi

Sia: phle pakdo to shi

karan: badmash tu ruk, kitna dodayengi mujhe

Shilpa: thoda workout kr liya kro Maan veerji ki trh

Abhi se budhe(old)   lagne lge ho

     

One voice came from back.

He: ye kya ho rha hai

Ye ghar hai ya playground

Sia came near to his foot and pulled his pant.

He takes her into arms and said "aaj kya badmashi ki apne, jo armaan chachu ase tumhare piche bag rhe hai".

Sia: oh ho

Papa maine kya kiya

Jo kiya chachu ne kiya

karan: Bhai maine kuch nhi kiya

Is badmash ne mujhe sone nhi diya

He: tumne time dekha hai

Kya huya Hai

Shilpa: veerji, kha dekha honga unhone

karan: bhai , wo raat ko meeting mein se  aane pe deri ho gyi thi

Bs isliye

He: hmm

Jayo , jaldi tyaar hoke niche aayo

Sia smiles.

He: aur tum sia

Asi badmashi firse ki

To'

Sia: to?

He: to aapki chocolate bnd

Sia: no

She make baby face.

She looks towards Shilpa.

 Sia: chachi

Shilpa: veerji bachi hai

Maaf kr dijiye

Sia : sorry papa

He: Sorry chachu se kho

Sia: hmm

She hugged him by neck.

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On dining table

Daadi: aaj kiski class li hmari cutto ne

Sia: chachu ki

Both giggled.

Shilpa: daadimaa, kya mast jagaya karan ko isne

Bechara next time kbhi "No" nhi kahenga

Daadimaa: asa kya kiya is Shaitaan ne

Sia: cold water daal diya

Shilpa: wo bhi is shardi ke mausam mein

One man came and sits on head chair.

He: aap sbko ye mjak lag rha hai

All denied.

He: sia tumne chachu se sorry  kha

Sia: no

He: abhi tak kyun nhi kha

Shilpa: wo abhi nha rhe the na

Bs wo abhi aate honge

Tb kh dengi

karan came here and wish to all Good Morning.

Sia came near to him and say sorry chachu.

Karan: it's ok cutto

Bs next time thande pani ki jgh gharam pani gherna

Nhi to meri ek din kulfi jhm jani hai

All laughed together.

He kissed on her cheek and give to her chocolate.

Sia: chocolate

Karan: hmm

She kissed on his cheek "thank you chachu"

Karan: welcome cutto

He: ye kya hai Karan

Tum isse bigad rhe ho

Karan: bhai

He says something into her ears.

Sia go near to him and sat on his lap, make baby face.

Sia: papa

He: hmm

Sia: aap apni sia se gussa ho

He:

She kissed on his both cheeks.

Sia: abhi bhi

He:

She hugged him by neck, her tears flow down.

Daadi: maan ye kya hai

Apne sia ko itni choti si baat pe rula diya

He cupped her face and kissed on her both eyes.

Maan: don't cry sweety.

Papa sorry hai

Don't cry

He wiped her tears.

Now smile'.

She smiled.

Daadimaa: maan asa kyun kiya aapne

Maan: daadimaa sorry bs

Mein usse rulana nhi chahta tha

Sia: daadi, aap mere papa ko kyun data rhi ho

Karan: ye lo

Ek to iski side lo

Aur ye madam ulta hume hi bhol rhi hai

Shilpa puri dal bdlu hai

Sia: papa

Maan: now enough

Koi ab kuch nhi kahenga meri sweety ko

Sia: love you papa

Maan: love you too beta

Ab koi badmashi mt krna

Chup chap apna holiday homework complete kro''.

Fir hum sb gumne challenge

Sia: really papa

Maan: ha Sia

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Daai maa: itne saalo ka baad aaj yha kaisi aayi beta

She (Geet) rested own head on her lap, she caressed her hairs.

Geet: daaimaa, kaam ki wajh se

Daaimaa: kaam

Kaisa kaam

Geet: abbu ne bhut baroshe ke sath ek project mujhe diya hai

Daaimaa: malik ne

Geet: hmm

Daaimaa panch saal (5 years) lag gye'.unke vishwaas ko phirse pane mein

Abbu ko waps to paya'..pr bhut kuch kho diya

Daaimaa: geet bhul ja usse

Tera nikaah phle hi kissi aur ke sath teh ho chukka hai''

Geet: Daaimaa kuch puchu aapse

Daaimaa: hmm

Geet: mere yha se jaane ke baad kissi ne bhi mere baare mein kuch nhi pucha

Koi aaya tha kya'..mere baare mein puchne''

Daaimaa(D):- nhi'..

Geet(think): ek baar bhi unhone ye jaanne ki koshish nhi ki ''.mein kyun chli gyi

Galati to meri hai''.

Geet: daaimaa mujhe nind aa rhi hai

Daaimaa: hmm

She goes towards gate and turn to see geet'. "mein janti hu ''tum kiske baare mein puchna chahti ho"

Wo sayad aaya tha,,,,,yha pe''maine uske aankho mein whi dekha to jo tumhari aankho mein aaj bhi hai'.pr usne ek lafz bhi nhi kha''wo is ghar ke samne wale park mein aata''.aur na jane kb tak''.intzaar krta''aur chup chap chla jata''.ek sabd bhi to nhi kha usne''

Us waqt mujhe kuch smjh nhi aata tha''.kaun hai ye '.jo har roz yha aata hai'.na jane kiska intzaar hai isse''..

Par aaj tumhare ek sawal ne sb jwab de diye'''..

Sayad usse tumhara hi intzaar tha'''

 

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
waiting for update
pm me too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
nice update 
loved it
Sia is so cute
Geet is guilty
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

update...😳

keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE:  SORRY FOR THIS TOO SHORT COMMENT AS MY NET IS IT"S CRTICAL CONDITIONAM..don't know when it'll be fixed & also MY EXAM.. 

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
lovely update
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wait he has a daughter so who is the mother
and what really happened that geet is so guilty
god things are pretty confusing
what happened five years ago that she is so guilty of
hope you let us know what happened
cheers for pm
god that sia is so cute naughty and adorable
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
maan has a daughter , what about her mother ? geet asking for someone... maan ?... update fast pl...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...