GUZARISH-- final part in 35

hey guys m smrithi here and just want to write a random idea which popped up in my head dunno if itz gud or bad  but u guyz can tell plz😭😭😭 comment on it if u find it worthy😊

INDEX

CHAP1-1
CHAP2-3
CHAP3-5
CHAP 4A-7
CHAP 4B-9
CHAP 5-12
promo pg 14
CHAP 6-16
Edited by smritiz - 10 years ago

heey smrithi welcome to the forum dear,,,,,,

The scene background is like ven Deepali poisons  everyone including RK against Madhu...
The police are here to arrest her and all of them are looking at her in disgust ...
NOW AS THE POLICE ARE TO HANDCUFF HER...

"HOLD ON INSPECTOR" boomed a voice from the entrance...The inspector looked up to see  an old man walking in with a walking stick.Deepali was irritated."Oh god now what " she thought.
Old man-"Iam sure she did not try to kill Rk and so better don't arrest her."
Police-"May i know why she would not do it?"
Another voice-"that  is because she's here to protect RK and not harm him."
The person at the entrance moved forward to show his identity and as he did all were shocked beyond words ...he looked like this:

SO SHLD I CONTINUE???????? PLZ DO COMMENT ...FASTER U COMMENT ,FASTER THE UPDATE...

Edited by smrithi1234 - 11 years ago

Welcome to mb forum dear..:)
nice start

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 1st , Welcome 2 MB forum dear. Start is interesting.I m w8ing fr next .

double act ...maza ayega... count me in dear...

IS ANYONE THERE WAITING FOR A SECOND PART?

M WAITING DEAR UD SOON DEAR...

welcome to the forum dear.very nice start.