Originally posted by: ...navina...
Now that's called "fast moving" . It's only chapter 2 and already so much happened. Uday discovered where he knew Manyata from and their frienship is already back on track. I also enjoyed the relationship of the siblings - it was nicely written!
Awesome work Sanjana. Loved it. Continue soon.
Originally posted by: zinayrules
it was an amazing update dear! i loved it so finally the two friends have met! wow waiting for next chappy and for more love shove!😆😆
nice update. waiting for the next.
Originally posted by: ...navina...
Fabulous.
Loved it. Uday is already affecting Manyata - NICE😳. ( comment is for ch 1)
LOVELY UPDATE 👏 👏
INTERESTING ONE !!!!Loved it ...ur da boy am da girl dialogue was so CUTEEE 😊
Originally posted by: anushruthi
AWESOME ss
i found it very goodits very well writtendo cont soon and PM me if possible
Originally posted by: MAHI1198
<font color="#FF0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">EEE KADAAAKKK HOTA...
I MEAN KHUP BHARI HOTA...
MALA NHAVTA MAHITI TU ITKI BHARI WRITER AHES...
HMM...
KAY BOLU...
NO COMMENTS..
FIRST I THOUGHT TO CUMMENT IN ENGLISH...
MAG MHANLA APAN PUNEKAR TAR WHY NOT USE OUR LANGUAGE HEHEHEHE...
ANYWAYS AWESUM UPDATE...
ANI HO UPDATE SOON...
AND PM ME...
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