JEENA ISI KA NAAM HAIN |updated 13 on pg 37|*NEW*

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hey guys.. i actually was planning to srat on 21st dat is d most auspicious day for all dek writers.. but i cudnt wait. so thot dat if i reverse 21, it becums 12.. dats today.. so lets start from today.. hehehe. njoy d peice.. n ya do suggest a name...
 

MANYATAS POV
Wats happening 2 me??? Ye kaunsi jindagi jee rahi hu ?bas mere liye ye mera jahan sirf mere mumma aur dadaa hain' yaha aur sirf kuch frenz hain' college main jaane wali 17 saal ki ladki hu' kehne keliye freedom hain.. par wats d use if u r not free in ur freedom'.. sab kuch karne keliye azadi toh hain.. par ek khule hawa main udne wale panchi ki tarah ajadi nai hain.. har waqt kuch karne se pehle lakh sawal poocha jate hain. Aur mere zindagi ki sabsi badi paheli'. Mere rishtedar nai hain?? How d f**k is dis possible'
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She was roped out of her thoughts by her mother's sweet voice..


Komal: manyata beta' kaha reh gayee aap?? Neeche breakfast keliye jaldi se aaiye. College keliye der ho rahi hain..


Manyata: jee mumaa' abhi aaye hum..


Closing d door' Komal ended the conversation heading downward'


Manyata..again roped in her thoughts


Manyata: sheeesh'. Wat is dis aap n hum stuff' all my frenz say main aur tum aur even tu.. dis is awful.. uughh' I am growing up with all these values and suddenly I hav started hatimg dem.. wateva its getting late for college


She cums down and has breakfast wid her mumma and dada' she goes out of d house wid d same thoughts hovering on her mind' she closes d door wid the name plate written "mr. brijraj singh and mrs. komal singh" behind her.


She raced wid her car to the college. parked it in the parking lot' still d thoughts hadn't loosen their grip over her mind''


"I need sum1 to just help 2 sort out my life'. Ek aise suraj ka uday hona ab humare zindagi main imperative hain(lit. meaning now it is necessary for a such a sun 2 rise in my life)"


Pooommmppp'' d horn ringed so harshly dat closing her ears manyata was pulled out of her thoughts'


"Excuse' miss. Whoever u are'.. agr marne ka itna hi shauk hain toh kahin aur jake maro' dis is a college..aur kisi aur ke gadi ke neeche jake maro haan nai toh'"


At first she was just looking over d seductive voiced guy' but as soon as he said haan nai toh her neck just turned wid a full speed on his chikna face escorted wid a who-the-hell-you-are?? look' her mind said"HAAN NAI TOH'.. o teri ye toh mere shabd hain dey r mine'.. how does he noe dem???" as if dey wer invented by her'.


"Hey' r u gonna budge now atleast'???" he said wid a u-are-insane look.. she apologized wid a very 10 tonned heavy mind and moved ahead'.


Manyata and uday's thoughts' "have I seen him/her before??? I felt a strange affection and a feeling of closeness' as if we r old friends'."

She was made to live in the world where she did not belong, made to accept the world which was never made for her'. Why was she there' Where was she from' did she really have any family except her mumma and dadaa'did she really knew dat carwaala guy'who was he...how did he now haan nai toh'wer dey really d best of frenz?? To solve these mysteries'stay tuned guys'


Phew'u came 2 the finish line of d prologue'I donno how was it?? Was it really gud 2 continue'plz tell a genuine reply'I just don't wanna bor u all wid my idea


Agr aap sab ki ijajat ho toh hi main aage post karungi'. It s my first try' n yes' plz just suggest a name for it' I am confused.


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*~:INDEX:~*

Chapter 1:  (Page 3)

Chapter 2:  (Page 5)

Chapter 3:  (Page 7)

Chapter 4:  (Page 10)

Chapter 5:  (Page 12)

Chapter 6:  (Page 15)

Chapter 7:  (Page 17)

Chapter 8: (Page 21) 

Chapter 9: (Page 21)

Chapter 10: (Page 27)

Chapter 11: (Page 31)

Chapter 12: 85143704
Chapter 13: 89204648 
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Posted: 11 years ago
GOOD START  DEAR ...CONTINUE , BUT I DINT GET CLARITY ...DOES SHE BELONG TO ROYAL CLASS? 

17 years ...so young

It was nice ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Originally posted by: puggyy

GOOD <font size="5">START <font color="#9900ff">DEAR ...CONTINUE , BUT I DINT GET CLARITY ...DOES SHE BELONG TO ROYAL CLASS?</font></font>


<font size="5"><font color="#9900ff">17 years ...so young</font></font>

<font size="5"><font color="#9900ff">It was nice๐Ÿ˜Š</font></font>


for dat 2 noe...i hav 2 continue.. if der is no response i'll pm u d plot. hehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago

nice start๐Ÿ‘

 

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Posted: 11 years ago
Love it was great...
i didn't felt like you are new writer
so do continue:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh man it was awesome.Cont soon yaar n ty 4 the pm:D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome start ๐Ÿ‘.
 
Do continue soon!
 
I would love to read more.
 
 
A title suggestion from me is :     " DESTINY " 
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
great start!waiting for chappy..
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was amazing!
its an awesome start u should continue it u will rock!
so its kinda mystery well i love mysteries! so they feel an unknown bound to eachother!
thats interesting!
well manyata and uday both say HAN NAHI TOH! great!
she thinks the words only belong to her!
the storyline is wonderful i am eager to read more from u!
do continue it seems awesome!
and don't forget topm me!
update chap 1 soon!
Best of luck! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs_kapoor

<font color="#0000ff">nice start๐Ÿ‘</font>


thnx... will surely continue...