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Posted: 11 years ago

How will i live without you? Introduction

Inrtroduction,Pt:Pg1
Pt2:pg2
pt3:pg3
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Pt5:pg4
Pt6:Pg5
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Abhay Kapoor:A loving husband and a caring father.
Kkusum Kapoor:Wife of Abhay.She is a loving mother and a loving wife.She is stylish and modern.
Namrata Kapoor:The eldest daughter of Abhay and Kkusum.She is known as Nimmo to everyone.She is working in an office.She is a cheerful funny girl who does'nt believe in fairy tales.She is not at all romantic.
Heer Kapoor:The youngest daughter of Abhay and Kkusum.Nimmo and Heer are best friends also.Heer is beauty conscious.She is a very ambitious model.She believes in fairy tales.She always sees a fairy.She is romantic at heart.
Prem Juneja:A romantic guy.He is a sincere officer.
Kunal Sehgal:A funny rich handsome business man.
Pari:The beautiful fairy
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Posted: 11 years ago
Jasmine 🤗

Thanks a lot. Glad you posted the 1st part. Looking forward to see the update.
Let me know when you have the next part 😃

Pari is interesting. 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
Really nice concept and eagerly waiting or you to continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is just an introduction.Will post the 1st part soon

Originally posted by: AASUS

Jasmine 🤗


Thanks a lot. Glad you posted the 1st part. Looking forward to see the update.
Let me know when you have the next part 😃

Pari is interesting. 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
jasmine... nice start...👏. waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thnx 4 pm
its nyc story
i think i've read it before
nyc concept
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
very nice start ...
waiting for the next ...
thanks for the pm ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

How will i live without you? Part 1









Nimmo is waking up from the bed.She is still yawning.
Heer enters the room:Hey Nimmo.Now only you woke up?
Nimmo is surprised:Heer!How come you woke up so early?
H:The whole night you were snoring.Then how can i sleep?
Nimmo is embarassed.
H:Get ready fast.Don't you remember that today is mummy daddy's wedding anniversary?We must celebrate it.We should do all arrangements for the party.
N:Ya...sure.

Nimmo and Heer go for shopping and buy clothes and other stuffs.
N:I will take care of the food section.
Nimmo enters the kitchen and takes wheat.
N:Why is this looking like this?
Heer laughs:Nimmo...it is like that.
Nimmo continues cooking.
N:Heer...please take all purpose sour from the shelf.
H:Ok.
While taking it,the bottle slips off from Heer's hand and the cap gets removed.It falls on Nimmo's head.
H:Oh Nimmo...i'm so sorry.It was not closed properly.
N:I will not leave you.
Nimmo chases Heer.
Kkusum sees it.
K:What is this?
Heer and Nimmo are silent.
K:Nimmo...what is this?
N:Mom...while cooking...
K:What happened today?Today both my daughters are in the kitchen.Wonder.
N:We thought we will make special items for you both on this special day.
H:Nimmo...you spoiled our plan.Mom...we wanted to give you both a surprise in the evening as today is the wedding anniversary.
Kkusum smiles.
Abhay comes.
K:Look Abhay..do you know today's speciality?
A:No...what is the speciality?
Kkusum smiles:We both forgot our wedding anniversary.But our daughters remember that.
Abhay smiles:Really?
H:Mummy daddy are not at all romantic.Nimmo is also unromantic.
Nimmo is making naughty faces at Heer.Heer does it back.
Abhay and Kkusum laugh.
Heer gives clothes to them.
H:We have arranged a party.You both should wear the clothes we bought.
A:Sure.

After some time Heer and Nimmo hear Abhay-Kkusum fighting.
Abhay:You wear pearl set for the party.
Kkusum:No...i don't like it.I will wear only silver.
Heer and Nimmo close their ears.
H:Here we are struggling hard to make the party beautiful for them..but they are spoiling the romantic situation by fighting.Stupid.
N:Heer...romance happens only in reel life.Not in real life.
Heer becomes dull.

Heer goes to her room.The fairy appears.
H:Hi Pari...
P:Yes..me.You are sad about your parents' fight?Don't worry..it happens among lovers.
H:Now i feel that like Nimmo says romance is only in films.
P:Nothing like that.Wait and see...they will be romantic soon.
Pari disappears.

Heer wears a beautiful pink Salwar Kameez which has crystal embroidary work on it along with simple gold ornaments.Nimmo wears a simple white saree which has black design.She wears dangling diamond earrings.Abhay comes to the party hall wearing a white suit.
H:WowDaddy..you look so handsome.
Abhay smiles.
Kkusum enters the hall slowly.She has worn a grand sky blue saree.Abhay notices the pearl ornaments she has worn.He smiles.Slowly Kkusum smiles.
Abhay has fallen completely.
A:Kkusum..you look very beautiful.
She smiles.
K:What you said is true.Pearl ornaments look better on me.You know what looks better on me.
He smiles.
Heer and Nimmo go near them.
H:You both were fighting.Right?Suddenly became romantic?
K:We are always like this Heer.We always had cute fights in our life.But we can't live without each other.
Heer and Nimmo smile.
A:Kkusum..shall we have a dance?
Kkusum holds his hand with a smile.
The song is played:
"Pyaar humko bhi hai, pyaar tumko bhi hai
To yeh kya silsile ho gaye
Bewafa hum nahin, bewafa tum nahin
To kyoon itne gile ho gaye
Chalte chalte kaise yeh faasle ho gaye
Kya pata kahan hum chale
Pyaar humko bhi hai, pyaar tumko bhi hai
To yeh kya silsile ho gaye..."{Chalte Chalte}.
Abhay and Kkusum swayed to music.

Heer:What Pari said is true.Romance is there in real life too.
Nimmo:Oh!Stop it Heer.There is no fairy in this world.i don't believe in stupid fairy tales like you.I hate romance also...
H:Wait and see Nimmo..One day you will fall in love.Pari will help you.Then your opinion will change.
Nimmo grinned:Very funny.That will never happen.Love and romance are stupid.
Heer thinks:Funny girl.Nimmo...you don't know how nice you feel when you are in love.
I know that.Because i'm in love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was awesome..loved the cute fight between abhay and kkusum.. and loved the family moments and heer is in love.. wondering who is that...

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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all hppy diwali 🤗
now coming to the update
it was nyc
luvd heer nd nimmo scenes
eagerly waiting for prem's entry 😳
pls cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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