SwaRon FF: Chalk and Cheese||Chapter9Pg126|| - Page 47

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww such a Lovely update dear:-):-) Swayam is damm cute yaar:-):-) loved it:-) loved Swaron:-):-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum update Dear!
The Hum Tum Ek Lift Mein Bandh Ho, part was superbely penned!
Loved it.
Thank You for the Pm.
Pm me when U update the next part! :D
Love,MiNi
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
swaron in lift on d same time light off was nice twist
swayam still not copped up with office work
waiting 2 know sharons ans on swayam dinner plan
loved d update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very Nice update..I like the flow of this FF...
Sharon thought swayam will not turn up in office and she can have the meal 🤣

Lift scene was nicely written..not over dramatic 😊

Sharon the workoholic... started working from the moment sat on chair😆

 
I like how you are showing swayam 's growth... from a careless guy to a responsible one...
 
I guess Sharon is gonna say No for his lunch offer but fingers crossed as I know she had eyes on his tiffin from morning😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm update!!!
lovd it 2 the core!!
Swaron❤️
update soon...
& thnx fr pm!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm loving this FF with every update. Sharon was so sure that Swayam won't show up in this office, but boy she isn't aware that he has turned in to a responsible son, sounds funny knowing how he was in the previous updates😆 And Sharon thinking that yummy homemade would be in her tummy😆  The lift wala part was also nicely done. Swayam is turning sweeter in every update and Sharon is falling for him, thoda-thoda😳 Good going!
Eager to read the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Sharon assumption went wrong swayam come to office..:p
Lift part was really sweet
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

aww such a cute part ...swayam n sharon in lift...lift stops...their hand touching moment😳😳...swayam asking sharon for having lunch with him...every moment is so beautiful...

thanks for the pm... update soon... 😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 😊
Both are nervous for first day in office
Managing office is not easy for Swayam
Hoping that Sharon would have lunch with Swayam
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Posted: 11 years ago