Journey of Love part 10 on pg 17 Discontinued - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
just read all parts!!
amazing story๐Ÿ˜Š..totally love it!!
plz continue soon n do pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92

Loved it ya thanks for the pm continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
really nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Great part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Amritaluvkryan this one's for you :D
Part:
Basu House
Jeevika enters the house and see everyone was busy in the preprations of the Karwachauth.
Manvi comes to Jeevika
Manvi: Di app agai kahan ti app?
Jeevika: Kuch nahi ek important kaam ta :P
Manvi: Thek hai Di ab app jaldi se tayar ho jaoo. App ke sasural wale atte hi hongay
Jeevika: Thek hai mein jati hu. Tum zara Sneha ko bhej do meri taraf.
Manvi: Ji di
Jeevika goes to her room and start getting ready. Sneha comes
Sneha: Di app ne mujhe bulaya
Jeevika: Han Sneha mujhe mera necklace aur merye earings de dye
Sneha: Di wo to merye kamrye mein hai, mein leke ati ho
Jeevika: Thek hai jaldi ana please.
Sneha: Ji di
Suddenly Jeevika's phone started ringing and it was Karan.
Jeevika: Hello
Karan: Hello
Jeevika: Kasye ho
Karan: Main thek ho . Yr mein tum se milna chata hu aur wo bhi ajj hi.
Jeevika: Mein to nahia a sakti tum ek kam karoo ttum ajj ghar ajao ajj karwacauth hai na aur issi bahnye tum sab ko mil bhi lo gay.
Karan: Thek hai. Bye
Jeevika: Bye
In the Evening
The Vadehras reaches the Basu house.
Anurag: Welcome aye aye
Dadaji: Anurag ghar to bohat acha sajya app ne...
While elders were talking to each other Viren was staring at Jeevika and she was blushing. Viren winked at Jeevika and she blushed.
Virat: Bhai bhabhi app dono chup kyun karhe ho.
Viren thought : Chup kon karaha? Mein to ankho se bathe kar raho hoon
Virat: Bhabhi app batao kaisa raha app ka ajj ka din.
Jeevika: Acha ta
And Jeevika and Virat started talking and Viren kept on staring.
Prena: Abhi hamhe bahar jana cahye. Chand nikale wala hoga.
Vanshika: Ji
They all went on the terrace.
Kadamavari Chachi: Haye ni yeh chand ajj kahan reh giya?
Inder Chacu: Kiun bhook lagi hai.
Viren was standing behind Jeevika and whispered "Tum chand ka intazar kiun ker rahi ho tumhara chand to tumharye sath hai na tu usse hi dekh ke vrat tor do na :P
Jeevika: Nahi
Viren: Lekin...
Shlok: Bhabhi chand nikal aya.
Jeevika: Lo nikal ayea chand. Issi liye kehte hai sabar ka phal mita hota hai.
Everyone started doing the rutails. First they saw the moon from the chalni then saw there husband. After that they did the Pooja and then the husbands made their wifes water. First Viren made Jeevika drink the water and then Jeevika made Viren drink the water. Viren was feeding Jeevika when Karan came on the terrace.
Precap: Date fix and Saazis :P
Ok guys enough for now
I hope u like it
Do read it, Like it and comment.
Sorry for a short and late update
And I m ready for ur joote aur tamatar :P
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Nice
 
Love it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
very nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
superb!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
thank u so much for this update was really missing it so thanks again & do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved this new twisting 's ๐Ÿ˜‰
Thanks for the pm! 
Plate soon