ariya : tujhe bhulna to chaha lekin bhula na paaye - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start saba..continue asap..plzz add me to your pm list na??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyy Rami.. Gr8 start...! Chhotu too in frnd circle. Good to see! I remembered that madhuri dixit song.. 18 baras ki kawanri kali thi...! Keep writing n take care.. Thanks 4 the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar by reading ur ff i feel very good. i just forget that riya is no more in the show.
u r a  fabolous writer👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lola123

Too cute...love story in Punjab..and Chottu n Sameer ki dosti dekh kar to mai hairaan ho gayi..hahaha

awww😛
thankyou sho much for such a lovely comment😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fasa

wow yaar by reading ur ff i feel very good. i just forget that riya is no more in the show.

u r a  fabolous writer👏

thanks dear
Edited by saba.ali81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: fasa

wow yaar by reading ur ff i feel very good. i just forget that riya is no more in the show.

u r a  fabolous writer👏

thankyou so so much you are 2nd person who said me good writer😆...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wowww... phirse ariya yaad aa gayi mujhe... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sigmundfreud

wowww... phirse ariya yaad aa gayi mujhe... 😭

right wo toh hum bhi riya ko har waqt yaad karte hain😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice 
Pm me plz 
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CHAPTER 2

arjun was on riya and an eyelock scene.suddenly riya push him and standup arjun also standup.they was going to say sorry to eachother but riya's mom call her and she go.arjun go to his way and finally after a small journy he reach to his home .his family was waiting for him. he go inside and his mom do arti etc...
he ask for his cousin (aisha).arjun come punjab for attending his cousin's wedding.he go to room aisha's room.and in excitement he pick riya by mistake but when he see that she is riya leave her and say arre aap to wohi hain jo mujhe khetton mein suddenly aisha cutts and enter there and hug arjun.

aisha : arjun tum tho kitne badal gaye ho omg!
arjun : ya tum bhi..
aisha : mere hone wale husband se mile???
arjun : nahi milao na kahan hai
aisha : Haan aao abhi milwati hoon.acha arjun ye hai meri best friend riya aur riya tum chottu aur sameer ko tho jaanti ho na ye arjun hai unka teesra bhai.lekin usse bhi zyaada yeh teeno ache dost hain.
arjun : acha tum chalo mein aata hoon..
he turn to riya and say sorry wo usske liye bhi aur ab ke liye bhi
riya:nahi koi baat nahi aksar aisa hota hai aakhir mein bhi aap ki behn jaisi hi hoon na.

arjun : ahan mein khubsurat larkiyun ko apni behan nahi banata.balke apne dil mein chupa ke rakhta hoon a littel smile on his face .phir milte hain and he leave...
riya was shocked and still standing there.she also come out talking to herself hmmm...kehta hai mistake hogai ye punjab ke munde na america shmerica jaake aisi hi harkatein karte hain aur phir waapis aake hum larkiyun ko cherte hain aur kehte hain mistake hogayi 

arjun He stood in front of her and she  was moving continuously suddenly she stop when she go too closer to him.she got surprised watching him.
riya : abbb...aap yahaan aap kyun bar bar mere saamne aate hain
arjun:hmm...shayed qusmat hamein bar bar ek dusre ke saamne laati hai 
an eyelock scene was between them ...

So guys how was it leave feedbacks

Saba😃

Edited by saba-ramisa - 11 years ago