...um...u have to wait fairy...tilll i can comment...coz u've left me speechless......
this was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!π π π πabsolutely stunning, fabulous, dreamy, beautiful...the concept was so unique and the setting was sooo different...and the way u described the whole os...u've got me totally floored!! β€οΈ the meadows, apple trees, and the forbidden love of abhiya blooming in their midst was really really heart-warming... i loved this abhay, naughty, cute sensible, humorous, full of life, living out each moment that this life has to offer, how could piya help falling in love with him???it was inevitable...π³
that part about abhay not being there when the leaf of the tree fell reminded me of the story "The last Leaf" u know...and that letter...oh..it was so heart-wrenching yet so lovely at the same time.π.
So you better be careful not to shed tears as I will be there as well.
the above line was really really touching...i loved this line so so much!!
i know it has a sad endingπ, but yes, abhay and piya are indeed together...as abhay will be alive in piya, in her love, as long as she lives and after she dies, they will be united in heaven, where abhay waits for his "sweetheart"...π.
i feel its abhay's character u painted best here...i could literally feel him jumping from the page...er i mean, my laptop screen u know!!!βοΈ
fabulous fabulous job done fairy!!!πcan i hit u??π becoz u doubted that no one would like it?? just kidding...here's a biggg hug for u..π€.
write more and more!!βοΈ
Edited by ..tora.tangled. - 11 years ago
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