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Chasby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: balsimransobti
just make sure plzzz dat i cmnt 1st its been solng i cmntd on ur ff at 1st in 2 or 3 chpp
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LOL. Then do keep checking this page every now and then. 😆😛

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Chasby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: balsimransobti
nd waitng wn u wl update i think i wl nt be on if so wlmiss d 1 st pstn

I love you! 😳

Hehe!

30 minutes! And my chapter will land safely on its right place. 😉

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Chasby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: ridizzz
Like it

Thanks. 😊

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Chasby

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Humayra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Awesome update..

Loved advay, Khushi and Zaina's bonding..

Another meet of father and son..

Now what will be advay's answer to Arnav's question?

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..

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Chasby

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: Humayra
Awesome update..
Loved advay, Khushi and Zaina's bonding..
Another meet of father and son..
Now what will be advay's answer to Arnav's question?
Continue soon and thanks for the pm..

Thank you dear. 😊

I just wanted the son and the father to spend some time together, before Arnav comes to know about Advay being his son.😉

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varsha komuravelli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

awesomee..

aww son cares for his father ah nice ..

but theu when our arhii meets 😭

thnx 4 pm 😊

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ipkknd_gbdfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Wow!!! FAB!!!

I could literally see the meeting room scene in my mind...a long table, with Arnav on one side and Advay on another side, both staring at each other, and barely paying attention to the content of the meeting. :D

I was also happy when Advay went with Arnav to his office for some coffee...finally, some father-son time without interruption from Anjali. (I know the show is over, and in that she wasn't a bad woman, but I still hate Anjali. And in your story, it seems as if Arnav has forgiven or never blamed Anjali...but I still blame her - what lady can't see through her husband's lies? And when she did, it was too late. So, in my eyes, Anjali is more of a criminal than Shyam.)

Oh, BTW, are you posting this story on any other site besides myeduniya and IF? This is a great story with an amazing plot and regular updates, but still you don't have that many likes or comments...so I was just curious...(and that's my main reason for commenting when I have time...I can clearly see that you are taking a lot of time in writing this, thinking about what you are writing, and having a plot in mind instead of randomly continuing - like some writers...yet they get more likes than you do, so I feel bad.)

Edited by ipkknd_gbdfan - 12 years ago