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Posted: 11 years ago

i have read over thousands of stories like this, but yours has this special touch!
I dunno why, but it touches my heart :) great work!

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

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Posted: 11 years ago

How beautiful...

I read this only today when I decided to visit your link of stories...

Wonderful piece of writing on a mother daughter relationship. I specially loved the part where you've mentioned some memories are for mother's alone...so true...I myself have tried to rack my brains and tried to remember many memories...sometimes I've gone ahead and just imagined them - but imaginations in this case are just that - unreal...

Loved it!

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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely os..simple words wid grt impact

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

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Posted: 11 years ago

I just loved the last line

Today she was not sleeping with her mother but Her mother was sleeping with her

Awesome work

u make me like each and every work of yours 😆

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Damanjitkaur
Beautifully written.. (:

Thanks daman..

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 11 years ago

really adorable OS

we tend to forget so many blessings around us

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Roshan

@DaddyMarvel

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Posted: 11 years ago

What is a members only post?

I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing.

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palindrome

@palindrome

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Xaffron-
What is a members only post?

I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for sharing.

Only IF members can read it..

Just log out from IF and try to read it..content would not appear..

and Thank you so much reading and enjoying it...😊

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ramya sree

@.ramya-gurtian.

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Posted: 11 years ago

this is the best of urs
i jus loved it
mom daughter here same like me n mumma
jus loved it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Palin you weave your way in and out of my consciousness. My mother was quite the opposite from the one described here. She was very very affectionate and I remember as a terrible teen I would try to escape all her affections. Today she is no more and I crave that touch of her hands in my hair. I crave listening to her stories, the way she made me feel like I was the most beautiful girl in the world.

Loved this piece very much.

For those who are reading and don't show affection, please do. Life is too short and they are too darn deserving not to give that piece of yourself.

Thanks Palin...

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