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nice beginning...

Originally posted by: abavi

Hello all

I have come up with another new SS. This is more of a Fanfiction but the characters are pretty much the same.

I have written a small snapshot for the SS- which I think will be a part of the 2nd or 3rd update... Kind of promo for this new story!

 

It is again a story of love blooming between a rich guy, who had to take the reins of running the big family at an young age because of a irresponsible father and a young girl, who was forced into a life, due to destiny- but isnt ready to sell her self respect to do so.

 

 

Index:

 

Chapter 1- The Raizada Mansion

 

Part 1: All in vain

Part 2: Building up hopes

 

Do comment and let me know how you like it.

 

Destiny Games - Promo

Arnav looked with contempt at this person in wet ragged clothes and unkepmt dry untidy hair in front of him, the cheap alcohol consumed by the man emanating stinking smell, Disgusted, his eyes moved away from the man and slowly took in the thin figure next to this man- The girl was skinny and would be 16 or 17 at the most, She was wearing a long skirt and a blouse, both wet from the rains outside and wet and thin dupatta that she had drapped around her was hardly giving her any warmth or protection and She stood there shivering and clutching her dupatta tightly.

 

"I am Shashi Gupta" The man introduced himself  "and this is my daughter Kushi"
"and why did you come here for?" Dadi asked him promptly
"Because there is a debt that needs to be cleared"
"whom were you debted to?"
"Your son was debted to me... We had a gamble last month and he lost this house to me"

Shock coursed throught the inmates of Raizada Mansion

"Oh my God... He gambled with this house too... What else is left for us now... we are left with literally nothing" Nani whispered anguishedly, While 19 year old Anjali clutched Payal's fingers tightly and sobbed.

"I am not a merciless man... I do not want this mansion, if you are ready to compensate this bond in my terms" Shashi spoke out loud and clear
"and your terms are?" Arnav spit out, angry at his recently deceased father, who had left him nothing but huge loans, His father had literally sold or mortgaged every other property and Arnav thought he had only the family business which was again not in good shape as it was extremely neglected by his father and this mansion.. but now the mansion was gone too...

"You marry my daughter. I will give this mansion back to you"
"What? " The family burst out. Arnav was shocked himself

 

PS: The girl only looked 16 or 17 doesnt necessarily mean she is of that age 😛

 

I will be starting this after I complete CheckMate... and I hope that would be soon... until then my other works are here:51533738  

interesting start, cant wait to c how asr emerges and how khushi is going to fit in this😊

Hi, i am Swati.

I really liked ur prologue and also the two chapters that u have posted by far.

Very interesting start.

Who is the girl whom Arnav lent a hand?

Will u plz Pm me whenever u update next, i will really love to read what happens next.

Update soon.

aww its really interesting yaar...
Pls pls pls update soon...

amazing
thanks for the pm
and cont soon

Vi darling happy to see u continuing this ff

 

I was looking forward but you stopped it and now im happy

 

Continue soon

 

So who is that girl and I think its not khuhshi

  U should update often-other wise I will fine you

 

Thanks for pm

 

Shami

wovvvieee... nyc concept... awakens my curiosity... 😃

arnav is trying really hard

Interesting prologue & story..
Siblings & the whole Raizada family seems in trouble.. tough times ahead..
They all love Anjali so much.. She seems spoiled by this but I'm sure she is good at heart..
I guess the girl is Lavanya..

wow u updated this ff...read both the parts it was amazing...eager to know who the girl is...pls update soon...