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hi rose
awesome ud...naku is trying to avoid dutta...it seems right at moment...stress for her...wht future hold waiting to read...ud soon...regards uvi
Hi rose
Loved the uddutta missed naku while shopping with supssups care for dutta but she is detached & over ambitiousnaku on other hand battered soul just like dutta attraction was bound to happen..Naku wants to avoid dutta for his own good
Love the way you wrote the scene when she declare to dutta there can never be anything bwt them
The way she hugged subbuyes it does seem appropiate at momentit ruin duttas reputationsups to will feel she is cheatedthe heartbroken naku is stressed .its taking turn .I still cant read btwn lines😆rose you never give in .ud soon
a rose for a rose
Hi rose
amazing again ,naku realising the fact and her behavior aching dutta .Both of them hav short time of happiness but suffer alot.One liner for their life and suffering ZINDAGI KHAAK NAI KHAAK UDHATAY GUZRI.Rose ur update made me sad but it proves u a gud writer who can affect others through words.dutta is having a tough time wat a luck he has MAIN KHAYAL HUN KISI OR KA MUJHE SOCHTA KOI OR HAI.
Aish pointout the right thing where is anna and remember i'm not talking about anna hazaray.
Gud work luking for the next.👏
hi rose
fab ud!dutta is missing naku...he doesn't understand naku's change behaviour...sad for both...wish they met before ...ud soon
Hi Rosie.. made it..
Fantastic Update, the eternal bond of Dutta and Naku was keenly felt, the LTL1 days seemed to crop up in my imagination..
IWL~ Chapter~ 29
It's always the littlest of things that tell the tale of the larger picture. Dutta and wife shopping, but wife too busy on the phone during the stroll , and pulling out a list of new born baby requisites for the shopkeeper, in place of being the expectant mum shopping for her new born.
However the good side of Supriya being involved with other issues other than her husband and the baby, affords Dutta the delightful opportunity of being an expectant dad. Likewise he has time at his hands also, to think fondly of the woman who has given him the gift of fatherhood.
Some poignant scenes of Naku sounding off the echoes of her heart, her motherly instincts of not wanting to let go of her baby, and her reminding herself of the real purpose of her being where she was.. are all written very well rose, it invokes the nobility of this girl from the rough side of life..
The roasted corn scene was sweet , it was a tasty excuse for Dutta to further exhibit his fondness for her.
Naku yet again proves her strength before Dutta by showing her reason and practicality, which he of course knowingly refuses to see..so typical of Dutta.
But the man of action, acts fast and does the needful to get her to hospital.. quite a gripping scene Rose, but was expected..what with both Dutta and Naku in love..
Only Dutta, is probably now going to be more deeply in love with her, despite the odds. Supriya has some puzzles to sort out...
Thank you so much for giving me a great piece of writing both in style and content.. loved it Rosie..keep them coming.. much love , yours hammie.
.naku keeping duttas prestiage.sups promise she madeavoiding dutta
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