OS:You And Me(a manveer os)

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I M NOT JOCKING ITS REALLY A MANVEER OS:) *YOU AND ME* Manyta's Pov There was a knock at my door.I wasn't expecting
anyone so I walked over to my door and opened
the door confused and opened the door.Standing
there was uday.
"Uday what are you doing here?"I asked He looked me up and down then suddenly stepped
forward,wrapped his arm around me and kissed
me.I gave a squeak in surprise and tensed up.He
slowly moved me back so that my back was against
the wall.He had one hand at my waist and the other
hand moved to my cheek as he began to aress it.His kisses were gently yet passionate,coaxing me to
relax and want more.
A few seconds later my eyes slowly closed and i
relaxed and kissed him back.He deepend the kiss a
little and finally pulled away when we both are
panting very hard. As our breathing calmed I still hadn't opened my
eyes. "Open ur eyes"He said softly still surrounding me. "I can't"I whispered "why?"He asked. "Because when i"ll open my eyes I'm sure that I'm
going to see that you aren't really here.And that i
am dreaming that you are here"I replied. He started to kiss my necj,and then nibbled my ear
softly making my breath catch. "You're not dreaming"He said softly. I slowly opened my eyes and see him with a smile.
"Ummm hi"
He smiled a bit before leaning in and kissing my
neck again,causing my breathing to speed up and
for me to shiver in pleasure. "You dont know how long I have wanted to do
this"He said between kisses. "I dont know about how long you have waited but
I've been waiting four years."I said. He stopped and pulled back enough to look at me. "You have?"He asked. I nodded and then he was kissing me again but
passionately.After awhile he moved down to my
neck again,My head felt back for a second before
moving back up and niticing the person were
standing outside my door. "Uday"I said breathlessly. "Mmm"He murmered against my neck slowly moving lower Uday,we have an audience"I said and looked back at the door.
I tensed again when I saw who was standing
there,my ex.Uday noticing me tense and stopped
and looked up at my face,before turning around. "What the hell are you doing here?"I hissed[ "Hello guys"My ex said. Uday looked at me confused before I said"Uday he is my ex boyfriend,Akash.
"Yes and i can see that you have moved on quite
quickly."He said.
"We broke up four months ago and it was the best decision I ever made"I said"Ofcourse you're the one to talk,since 1 week after we broke up you were in a new relationship"I continued this time looking at Akash.
Akash looked at Uday and said
[COLOR=GREEN]"don't waste ur time with her,she'll never put out.Twently but before me never have a boyfriend.It was her first kiss.
.He said looking me up and down.
"Get lost"I said through my teeth and trying to contain my hurt.
"Oh i m scared"He said a bit sarcasticly.
i tried to launch myself at him but uday hel me back.

"Just do as she says or she isn't the only one you'll have to worry about."Uday said angrily.
"Whatever"With that Akash walked away.
Uday let me go to close the door then locked.I walked away from him trying not show to him how much I'm in now.
I knew that he was watching me but I had my back to him so he couldn't see my face.
Suddenly I felt like his Arms wraps around me from behind.

"Uday,I think you should go."I said trying to sound strong.
"I m not leaving you princess,when you're like this"He said.
"I m fine"I lied.
"No you're not"He said stubbornly.
"Pliz just go"I said losing some of my control.
"No,i wont"He said turning me around to face him.
I looked up at him.His silky black hair was a little massier.That usual probably from me running my fingers through it.His warm brown eyes looked at me worry.I could feel just give up as my eyes filled with tears.I hid my fae against his chest and cried my heart out.
"He is right na"I murmered after awhile.
"Ahan he isn't.You're so worth it"He said lifting my face to look at him.I just shook my head and closed my eyes.
Damn it,bring him back here so I can beat the crap of him"Uday said angrily.
No pliz dont..He is dangerus.."I said.
"I dont care"he said.
"He just reminding me the thruth"I said.
"its not the truth damn it"He snapped.
I looked away from him,avoiding looking in the eyes.
You're kind,chirpy,bubbly,innocent yet so smart and beautiful...The only that was true is that i don't deserve u..He said.
I looked at him n he continued.
And i mean every word of it"
Overcome with joy i pulled him forward in a kiss.
When he pulled away he said[COLOR=magenta]"I LOVE U".
I looked at him shocked.
"I m not lying.I really love u"He said.
"I...I Love U2"I said realizing it was true a small smile slowly spread smile on his face,he pulled me for another kiss.

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I know its not good enough.But phirbi dedo.
swinipriyaEdited by Choco.Swiss - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kahan hai sareef mujhe toh koi sareef bachch nahi dikh rahi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetsurati

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5" color="#ff9933">kahan hai sareef mujhe toh koi sareef bachch nahi dikh rahi...</font>


Tu toh chalti phirti bandaar hai tujhe kaisey dikhega🤣.Chal jakey story parh.Afterall its my first manveer happy ending wala os🤣Edited by Choco.Swiss - 11 years ago
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Oyee hoyee teri hassi pei toh hum lattu ho gaye..🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome I loved it
Beautifully written
The whole thing was so well written and thought of
Please continue more
Did something happen after the kiss
Ps:sorry swini I can't like I am using my phone
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss


Tu toh chalti phirti bandaar hai tujhe kaisey dikhega🤣.Chal jakey story parh.Afterall its my first manveer happy ending wala os🤣

kamini agar me bandar hu toh tu bandar ki queen hai...chal jaa mujhe nahi padhni teri koi story...aur gar padh bhi li toh koi comment somment nahi milega...ab hum kanjoos ho gaye hai...
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achha kamin el apna commnet...awsomeee...mind blowing ek achha kaam kiya tune aaj manveer OS likha...jeeti reh... aur aise hi"MANVEER" OS likhati reh no "CHIKAS" plzzz...aur kamini kabhi kabhi PM karke bataya bhi kar...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aaww!!! dat was so innocent n true!!! luvd it to bits. bring its part2 i feel a new force,energy n spirit whenevr i read in ff or ss or os dat manyata ditched akash n went for uday!!! den m suprenergetic!! can even run a marathon in 1 go just on dat base!! a bit exaggerated.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res😉

🤗

Swini super dramatic and romantic...👍🏼

lol M ditched Akash and now with Uday...finally😆

Loved it...⭐️


Edited by adorable_rana - 11 years ago