New FF-Love fr life... Chap 10 p10 updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: Vidishaa

accident??? plz update soon

do u think dis ff is reading worthy? I think no 1 like it!

kya hua jaldi update karo pl.  

Originally posted by: vidyasabde

kya hua jaldi update karo pl.

itna jaldi kaise update karungi!?:)
per apko lagta hain ki mujhe age likhna chahiye??

CHAPTER 4 Ashutosh was caling his mother bt her phn sounds unreachble..what d hell she is doing?-he thought. Jabse india jane ki date fixed hue hain mano to jaise maa mujhe vul hi gayi...har baat mein bas india or unke relatives k gift...or uper se o nidhi or uska lamba list! Aj vi usi k liye shopping ja rahethi mom!- he thought to himself! Suddenly his phn rang nd without seeing d number he answered it-whos dat?? An unknown person told - r u ashutosh mathur? Yes-told he.. I'm caling frm a hospital. Actualy there is a bad news fr u! Ur mother is no more. She had met with an accident nd it's a spot dead case!-the man told him cruely! U r talking in a wrong number!-ashutosh told him with a cold voice. U can't b true...he can't b true-he was uttering those words as if he was assuring himself! ' maa can't do this to me...he can't leave me..."he took his phn nd tried to his mother number again nd again! He threw his phn forcefully nd without thinking furthur he ran towards d hospital! In d hospital corridor he found his father sitting in d bench! He rushed to him nd saw him cry...his father hugs him tightly nd he stood their like a dead body inded! At that moment d doctor came nd told them d autopsy had been done nd they can took d body!! Doctor! How can my mom dead nd how dare u to call him a dead body?-ashu shouted at d doctor! Pls, beta shant ho jao!-his father tried to calm him down bt ashu apna hosh khobaitha tha...wo ohase vag aya jaisi ki o sachayise vag raha ho! Iss puri dunia mein maa k siva use samajh newale koi nehi tha...o mako us halat mein nehi dekh sakta tha...ankh mein asu jaise sukh gaya tha...o ab kaha jayegi-kya karegi kuch vi nehi pata tha use! 2 din tak ashu ka koi khabar nehi tha...uske baba pareshan the...unhone use dudne ki bahot koshish ki par koi fayda nehi hua...unka antim sangskar unko akelehi karna para!! 2 din bad ashu ghar aaya apna 1 alag hi cehra lekar...puranawala ashu jaise bahut pise reh gaya ho...o chup thi...bilkul chup! Uske ate hi baba ne use gale laga liya...or o ohi khari thi...use jaise koi chese ka koi parwahi nehi! O apne apko churake apne kamre mein chala gaya or kaha k o akela rehna cahta hain...or iske saath saath hi uske akelepan ka bhi shuruad hua!! Maa k jane k bad 5 saal hogaya...ashutosh in 5 salo mein apne apko jaise 1 fort mein koyed karli ho...na hasti hain na bina wajah kuch bolti hain...bus pura din hospital mein pari rehti hain! Uske baba ne bahot koshish ki use india jane k liye raji karwane ki,..per o kavi bhi raji nehi hua...use lagta tha k uske maa k marne ki pise 1 hi insaan zimedar hain or o insan india mein hain! O us insaan ko kabhi vi maaf nehi kar sakta! Police ne use bataya tha ki road cross karne ki samay uske maa phn per baat kar rahi thi ...or usi waqt a hadsa hua! Nidhi...main tumhe kavi nehi maaf kar sakta...kuki phn k usper nidhi hi tha jisse maa baat kar rahi thi.. I WILL NOT SPARE U! Nidhi verma!-he murmered to himself!!

Mera ff kisi ko assa nehi laga?!:-(

---chapter-5--- D day was very hectic fr ashutosh..3 complicated surgery thein so he hardly had time fr lunch..jab ghar lauta to dekha papa so gaye the...o kitchen mein gaya to find some food...lekin waha use kuch ajeeb hi chese mila...kitchen k 1 cabinet mein use 1 diary dekha...uski maa ki diary! Maa diary likhti thi?-he was surprised..usne o diary haat mein liya or apne room mein agaya.. Kuch der tak aise hi baitha tha o diary haat mein lekar jaise koi khajana mil gaya ho use! Then he opened d diary wid trembling fingers jaise ki us diary k panhe ko chote lagjaye ga!! 'apni desh, apna india chor k yaha iss pardesh mein bilkul assa nehi lagta! Kab ayega o din jab mera beta 1 asse doctor banjayega or mujhe lekar mera shahar, mera ghar india chalega!!- ashutosh turned d page nd read once again- mera beta aj ak fulfleged doctor hain...main apni khushi kaha rakhu, kisse share karu? Kas k mein india mein hota!!'' ashutosh read all d page nd in every page she mentioned abt her country... Maa!ap apni india ko itna miss karti thi..or sirf mere liye yaha,london mein agaye-ashu told looking at d diary! Tears r welding up in his eyes! He wiped his tears nd declared to himself- to thik hain maa! Hum india hi chalenge! Apke ghar,apke shahar!! D next day ashutosh told her dicision abt shifting to india to her baba! Baba was very happy to hear dat! O turant dr. Verma ko phn lagaya or unke aneka decision bataya bt ashutosh also gave him some condition...1st nd most important 1 is dat they will nt stay wid verma or any other relative house...so, baba asked dr. Verma to find a house fr them! Dr.verma though didn't like d condition bt happy to hear that at last ashu agree to come india! O turant nandini or baki sab ko ye khabar di... Nidhi heard d news frm nishu...so d famous neurosergeon dr. Ashutosh is coming! She heard his name in kgh as she joined there as a intern some days ago,,..so dr. Kothari inke baat kar rahe the joki kgh mein hamare dean bankar arahe hain!! Nidhi actually bachpan se uske bare mein sunti arahi hain par usne kabhi use dekha nehi...even net per bhi nahi...per uski mausi se jabvi batein hoti thi bus ashutosh ki hi baat batati thi...ashutosh ko ye pasand hain or ye nahin...ashu ne aj a kia,aj o kaha...unki dunia jaise ashutosh per shuru hoke usi per khatam hoti thi...per us accident ne unke sare sapne khatam kar diye the! Nidhi k maan mein a sab chal raha tha tabhi ajanak uska phn aya.. Hello!sweet heart! What r u doing?r u thinking abt me??... Oh!stop it rohan!-told nidhi- u know i'm busy nw nd u r asking me those stupid qstn? Rohan is nidhi's pheonci nd badly madly in love wid her! Bt nidhi is still confused abt her feeling towards rohan wheather it love or nt!! Ok!ok..i'm sorry!it seems k doctorni sahiba bahot busy hain!!-says rohan yes!i'm busy nd will talk u later saying that nidhi cut d phn! Na jane ku iss waqt use rohan se baat karne ka maan nahi hota! ... It was friday morning! Verma house festive mood mein hain...kuki aj ashu or uske baba anewale hain! Dr. Mathur or nishu unhe rechive karne gaya hain...nidhi ne aj hospital se sutti li hain...bachpan se jiska batein sunkar bari hui hain aj akhir unse milne ka mauka milega...maan hi maan o bechain ho rahi thi...pata nehi o kaisa hoga!! Nidhi apni khayalo mein khoyi thi tabhi ajanak anji oha agayi...hmm..meri saheli a kiski khayalo mein dubi hain? Main bhi kya buddhu hu...of course rohan jiju ki!hain na-she asked her teasingly!! Anji ki bachi! Tu firse shuru hogayi...ruk tu!..tujhe abhi batata hu- a kahke nidhi anji k piche daurne lagi...usne samne ak glass pani tha or o ohi utha k anji k taraf feka per her utter surprise instead of anji she threw d water someone else nd he is none other d famous neurosergen dr. Ashutosh mathur!! Pls cmnt wheather u like it or nt!

it was superb ena

pls live space in between the words so that it can be easy for me to read sweet heart

you have changed whole reason of ashu hateness towards nidhi

good going sweet heart pls continue soon


sonali

Originally posted by: karajekar

it was superb ena

pls live space in between the words so that it can be easy for me to read sweet heart

you have changed whole reason of ashu hateness towards nidhi

good going sweet heart pls continue soon


sonali

thank u sonali! Mujhe laga kisiko a assa nahi laga...mein to likhna stop karna chati thi!!

Main na space dekar hi likhti hoon..per pata nehi ku update karne k bad sab space gayab hojata hain!!

Next part jaldi hi update karongi...per respns na mila to ise continue karne ka maan nehi hota!

have been through all parts of ur ff
al parts r gud great goin
plz do continue !!

CHAPTER--6 ASHUTOSH was standing at d door raising his hand as his whole dress was nw wet! His anger was raising.. What d hell is going on?- he utterd angrily looking at his shirt! Dhire dhire o uper dekha-dekha ki maa bachpan mein jaise pari o ki khahani sunati thi oise hi 1 pari uski samne khadi thi. Bare bare aankho se use dekh rahi thi...koi insaan itna khubsurat vi hosakta hain?? Ashu ne use uper se niche tak asse se dekha...alag alag dekho to uske aankh, hote, uske balo mein koi khass bat nehi...per in sabko 1 sath dekho to lage jaise aise khubsurt chehra dunia mein ho hi nahin sakti! Kuch pel k liye ashu uska gussa vul gaya tha! Samne glass haat mein lekar khari hui nidhi vi kho gayi thi uski aankho mein! Ajanak pise se nishu aya! Oh! Nidhi! Tu kabhi nehi sudhregi!! Viga dia na vai ko!-he said looking at her! Ashu came out frm d transe! To a hain nidhi!...kuch pal pahle jis chera ne use dunia ko vula dia tha ajanak usi chehre se use gussa ane laga! He clinched his fists to control his anger! I..i'm sorry! O main anji ko...nidhi tried to speak tabhi dr. Verma or mr. Mathur vi oha agaye! Arre!ashu beta! Tum abhi vi darwaje par khari ho? Aao aao ander aao!-dr. Verma said! Nidhi beta! Jake maa ko bulao!! Haan baba! Abhi gayi!-saing dat nidhi ran towards d kitchen where was her mother! O nidhi thi kya? Kitni badi ho gayi hain! - said mr.mathur! Jab hum log london gaye the tabhi tu hua tha...or aab dekho! Waqt kitne jaldi nikal jate hain na...told he wid sad tone! Kash ki ye ladki payda hi na hoti-ashu told to himself wid a deep hateness in his heart!! So! Ashu beta! Main ne suna tum kgh mein join kar rahe ho?-asked dr. Verma! Haan! Mama! Ap ko kaise pata?--ashu was surprised. O nidhi apna internship kgh mein kar rahi hain to usine bataya...he answered! Oh! To dr. Nidhi verma kgh mein hain! Assa hua...ab main bhi use kuch sikha paunga!-ashu thought to himself! Ashu! Kiss khayal mein ho,beta? Nahi baba! Kuch nehi...o bas soch raha tha k humein ab chalna chahiye! Mama hamare ghar to ready hain na?-suddenly asked ashu. O beta! Kya hain na...1hafte mein tumlogo ka ghar khali hojayega! O makan malik ko kuch repair karna tha to- ate hi jane ki bat ku,ashu?-nandini entered into d room along wid nidhi! Humare saath assa nehi lagta kya?? Namaste! Mami..kaise hain ap?-ashu asked her! Tumhe dekhkar bahot khush ho!-ndndini replied happily! Mami! Mujhe privacy pasand hain or mujhe akela rehna hi assa lagta hain!-told ashu curtly! Per,beta iss 1 hafta to tumhe hamare saath hi rehna hoga-nandini replied. Per,mami-ashu tried to protect but mami cut him between! Ab iss bare mein bad mein bat hogi-abhi jao! Jake freash ho jao! Nidhi ashu ko apna kamra dikhao.. Nidhi was observing these whole conversation...nd silently gestures ashu to come wid her! A raha apka kamra! Kaise laga? -asked nidhi. Thik hain!thank u!-ashu answered. Bas!thik hain! Maine itna mehnat se sajaya! Ap abhi vi mujhse gussa hain kya?- nidhi asked him cutely. Nidhi!will u pls leave me alone! Mujhe freash hona hain!-ashu told him rudely. Nidhi was astonished wid his behaviour bt didn't tell any thing nd silently leave d room! Suddenly ashu felt very bad fr his being rude wid her! He didn't know bt her fallen face hurting him badly... Maine aisa kya kardia jo o mujhse aise rudly behave kia?-nidhi was also very confused... --------- raat ko diner k bad sab apne apne kamre mein chale gaye...ashu vi apne kamre mein the bt he was feling jet legged...neend nahi aaraha tha to usne socha bahar khuli hawa mein shayad assa lage...isliye o garden chala gaya! Nidhi ne use jate hua dekha...mausi ne use 1 bar bataya tha ki ashu ko bina coffie piye raat ko neend nahi aati... To usne ashu k liye coffie banakar garden mein gaya...ashu ohi thi aapne soch mein dube huye... A lijiye aap ki coffie! Ashu choked to dis sudden voice nd turned 2wards her! Nidhi was smiling brightly seeing his surprised face! Aap dar gaye kya?-nidhi asked cutely! Maine coffe mangi,tumse?!-ashu asked her rudely! Hearing his rude voice nidhi felt very sad...tears started to gather in her voice bt she control herself nd told- nehi! O mausi ji ne bataya tha ki aap ko bina coffe k neend nahi ati to maine socha-- aapko mere bare mein soch ne ki koi jarurat nehi-ashu stopped her in d middle! I..i'm sorry!-nidhi said wid a tremble voice nd ran frm there! Ashu was feling very helpless... Maa! Main kya karun!iss ladki ki wajah se maine aap ko kho dia...isse main kabhi maaf nehi kar sakta...par! Maa...mujhe itna bura ku lag raha hain! Batao na ,pls!!! Pls press d like button if u like it! Any cmnt good or bad is welcome!!