SS: The Guilt (Discontinued NOTE at page 42)!

I am just a beginner so plz bear with my mistakes n give me suggestions so that i can improve..😳😳Presenting my first ever SS on ariya (actually on any couple ever...😆)

hey everyone...😃so finally after a lot of pushing from my lovely friends on this forum, i have written something...😳😉😆

Enjoy guys n leave ur comments!!

PART 1

She held the gun, her hands still
shaking, she tried hard to press the trigger but all in vain. Rathore shot that
man in his right arm , the culprit was arrested and case solved. Riya was
trying to figure out what went wrong as Rathore and arjun walked out of the
building after giving her their trademark glares. Suddenly she felt someone's
hand on her shoulders; she turned around to find that it was none other than
shree.

Shree: "rii, tum thek ho?"

">Riya: "im fine shree, tum log chalo I am just
coming in a while." Shree, chotu thought
it was wise enough to give her some space n thus walked away, leaving her all
to herself. She went to the washroom, started splashing water on her face, some
tears flowing down her twinkling eyes, but she knew she had to rush back to the
SUV. She quickly went back to the parking lot. The SUV was still there but not
even a single being was present anywhere near her. She tried to contact shree,
chotu on their cell phones but no one responded. She went to the backyard and
saw rathore standing there alone. She thought it was the right time to
apologize for what happened a few
minutes ago. Before she could take a step forward'.

rathore: "tum sahi keh rahe the rawte'"

riya moved a little sideways, hiding behind the bushes so that they both cannot
see her and was shocked to see arjun standing beside rathore.

arjun:"to ab kia krna hai rathore? Hamein jald hi koi faisla lena hoga"

Rathore: "faisla kia lena hai, ab
hamare paas aur koi option bhi to nai hai. Mein commissioner sir se baat krta
hun, mgr rawte riya se kaun baat karega? Usko kia kahen ge?"

Arjun: "rathore, tm kbse itna jazbati
ho k sochne lage? Kehna kia hai, hum thek kr rhe hain, riya ko ye baat samjahni
hogi. Aj nai to kal ye hona hi tha. Mein ne warn kia tha use magar wo kisi ki
sunti kahan hai'.ab it's final.." (arjun said to rathore with moist eyes)

Rathore's phone vibrated' "han kaho'.ok
hum a rahe hian"

He cut the call n told arjun ' "humein
office bulaya hai sir ne urgently, isi k bare mein baat krni hai.."

Arjun: "chalo'.

They both looked at each other '
sadness was written all over their face
and for once they both were unsure whether to go ahead with their decision or
not? 

Rathore.. "waise ye faisla uski
bhalai k liye hi hai rawte'" (rathore said as if wanting an approval this time)

Arjun sternly said: "riya research
desk wapis jaegi rathore aur aj hi jaegi" 

Rathore nodded his head. They came to
the parking lot, sat in their SUV and drove away.

those last words still echoing in her
ears'..RESEARCH DESK''!!! Countless tears made her way out of those beautiful
eyes '..riya stood there like a statue.

INDEX:

part 1: page 1

part 2: page 8

part 3:page 15

part 4:page 21

part 5:page 26

part 6: page 35 Edited by mushiroxx - 10 years ago

Yaaye first to cmnt. So mushi u have decided to write. I love the plot. The start is great. Poor Riya. Pls update soon.Edited by Arieltabi - 11 years ago

Yay!! So u've followed suit! Welcome to the writer's club dear.. Trust me when I say, that it was too good for a first piece of fiction! 👏👏

Riya nahin jayegi kyun ki Arjun usse jane nahin dega😳

loved the entire part!!!
poor riya have to return to research desk!!!no!!!!!
please pm when you update..

and get well soon dear 😊Edited by priya00147 - 11 years ago

It was so very good.
Riya wont go to research desk m sure thy'llgive her lst chnce n she will prove herself...
Add me to ur pm list nd update soon...

Finallly u decide to write...welcome to writer's world dear
O no...no riya...my deepest fear regarding riya have been depicted here.. but pllz plz no...she cant go backkk
U have written so awsumly..conngo...sachi mei serial wali feel a ri.thi
Jaldi jaldi update the next part :):)

finally you wrote...well done mushi... awww kya plot hai...awesome awesome🤗 continue soon

Are you sure this is your first time writing? Or is it just your first time writing a SS? Well either way I thought it was really good. Wish it was a bit longer though cuz I'm curious to see what Riya will do now. I really wanna see Riya step up her game and prove them both wrong. Can't wait for the next update =)

please update soon and
send me pm