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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: desigirlx5

OMG FIRST TO COMMENT!!! 


honestly i loved this os! it was amazing! you showed a reality of relationships in it, esp since alot of girls do go through a shivam in their life (not me personally but my friends have)

the song - impossible I LOVE THAT SONG SO MUCH! 

loved how rey was comforting taani in the end and loved how u made it diff from d3

basically in general i loved loved loved this os 👏

thanks for such an amazing os 😳



Thanks dear..glad that you liked it..I always try to write something different from D3. yup..love is nt always a happy journey..

that my fav song aso..

no need to say thanks😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
FEEL LIKE THESE WORDS ARE WRITTEN BY ANGELS AND DROPP'D FROM HEAVENS LIKE SNOW FLAKES ONLY FOR MY 👏⭐️TAAREY⭐️👏
"Love is lovelier
The second time around
Just as wonderful
With both feet on the ground..
Love's more comfortable
The second time you fall.."



"Someone... someday will come along and make you finally realize why it never worked out with anyone else."

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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: fatima_tr

Okay when I started reading I was like SHIVAM :O 🤢 But as the story progressed I really liked it :D Loved that Rey was their to protect her and save her from Shivam :'D Do pm me :)

P.s I love the song 'Impossible' <3 and it fits perfectly with the situation :D



LOL..really when I started this one, I wanted to write a sad OS..but same here, cant even imagine that creep Shivam with our angel.. Glad that you liked it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: pixi26angel

omg chappals😲...no no dear hum itne bhi bure nahi hai😉 especially coz it's all together a very different story anyways i really really liked it 👏 love really deserves a second chance ...and the best part was this which really touched my heart coz this is totally applicable to taarey's story

 
"Love is lovelier
The second time around
Just as wonderful
With both feet on the ground..
Love's more comfortable
The second time you fall.."



"Someone... someday will come along and make you finally realize why it never worked out with anyone else."



Awww..thanks dear..yup Love is lovelier the second time around😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: sreelu094

chappal to abhi nahi de sakti😆u try hard next time to get one 😆

u started all along with shivam and i was like i'm going i won't read it completelystill i continued reading and it was getting better😃and nice song in btw.when it came to the last it really ended well.so no chappals this time as it is a good os.so better luck next time,chappal ke liye😉

thanks a lot for the os



Awww..such a cute comments..LOL be ready I m coming with a sad OS😆..glad that you liked it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Ayesha05

when i saw shivam's name i was 😡

bt as i read it was awsome to c taani sviam breakup nd a new story
wud luv if u contine
keep it on girl



Thanks😳 sorry, it was OS, so I m nt going to continue it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: zuna308

FEEL LIKE THESE WORDS ARE WRITTEN BY ANGELS AND DROPP'D FROM HEAVENS LIKE SNOW FLAKES ONLY FOR MY 👏⭐️TAAREY⭐️👏

"Love is lovelier
The second time around
Just as wonderful
With both feet on the ground..
Love's more comfortable
The second time you fall.."



"Someone... someday will come along and make you finally realize why it never worked out with anyone else."



Awww...really these lines are perfect for  TaaRey😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Sweet-bird



Thanks😳 sorry, it was OS, so I m nt going to continue it

hey u gonna continue da os na plz do it its an awsome os
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Ayesha05

hey u gonna continue da os na plz do it its an awsome os



 awww..I will try but not sure😳 till then u can enjoy this one : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3167650
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Undoubtedly...u r giving us the best Taarey stories...u r such a beautiful writer keep up the good work! 👍🏼