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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! It was mind-blowing!!!!! 👏 Adithy is really cute!!! 😳 Continue soon!!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Comment edited on Page-25.😊
Thank u.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome and very entertaining Anisha...n I must say you are really improving as a writer...very nice plot and really enjoy this SS to my full...Funniest part was Manyata taunting Uday.."Dia you push last time.."...and when UV asked his son whether he had any enemity with his father and the reasons that he gave.. 😆 😆
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CHAPTER 9
note - j and Jagath r engaged.

GIRIRAJ - good morning mera RAJKUMAR

AADHI - good morning Dadaaji , sorry am 5 min late . Everyday morning aadi will go to giriraj's bedroom . Daily giriraj will have his bed coffe , AADHI will sit beside him and have his milk . Both talk for 10 min . Then aadi goes and get ready for school . This is their routine .today aadi is 5 min late , so he came running as he doesn't like to get late

UDAY - good morning dad , junior come wit me , mom is waiting for u in room .

AADHI - k dad I'll be there in 5 min , am talking to daada Saheb

UDAY - k beta come soon

MANAYTHA - where is aadi uday , u came alone

AADHI - he comes from back , am here mom

MANAYTHA - k wear this uniform now , come

AADHI - mom I asked u to get spiderman dress , did u get it

MANYATHA - I got it beta

AADHI - show me then

MANYATHA - not now aadi , come down for breakfast . I'll show u after u come from school.

AADHI - no mom first u show me ,then I'll come down . He sits there on da bed

MNAYATHA - u have become so stubborn these days , jus come down ..am not gonna listen to u aadi

UDAY - princess show him , he will come down .

MANYTAHA - now you don't take his side uday , ur spoiling him . That's y he is not listening . See how he is sitting there wit angry face . No uday today am not gonna listen to u both . Both come down

AADHI - k am gonna sit here only

MANYATAH - k sit here , I'll see what u will do today . She drags uday wit her hand out of room , and take him out

UDAY - princess , u should have shown it to him . He is a kid , don be so rude wit him baby

MANYATH - no uday , he is getting used to All this . We should not listen to him always . Or else he will become a spoilt brat .

UDAY - princess don't u think too much .k I forgot my mobile ill get it

MANYATHA - I know about u , stay here . I'll ask maid to get it .

UDAY - k😕

AADHI - he comes down after sometime , sits on da breakfast table wit puppy face .

MNAYATH - she ignores him , and will be having breakfast . Seemaji AADHI ko juice laana

AADHI - he finishes his breakfast quietly and is ready to go to school

MANYATHA - AADHI come here . He comes near her . She takes spider man dress and show him

AADHI - he jumps out of excitement and kisses MANYTAHA . " love u mamma , I knew it . "

UDAY - he smiles at both of them . He takes AADHI into his arms and kiss him . Both wave bye to manyatha an leave . AADHI to school and uday to office .

AADHI returns from school . Uday picks him up while coming home . Now AADHI at home .


AADHI - aadi comes and jumps over Manyatha , am back mom . So today can I play for a long time since tomorrow is Sunday .

MANAYATH - k baby u can , now in da evening Sanju , vijay mama , bhua ...naani ,nana ji , Maasi and Jagath Maama are coming home

AADHI - really mom , I should go and get ready soon . I have to show my spider man dress to Sanju . Dad see u in a while , bye

MNAYATHA - calls her maid rosy , take RAJKUMAR and get him ready soon .and get him down

UDAY AND MANYATH - they are in their bedroom .uday got fresh up and had his coffee .

UDAY - so princess how was ur day baby ?

MANYATAH - till now am fine . Donno now what happens . Thumare shaithaan beta Jo aagaya .

UDAY - haha 😆 , he comes close to MANYATH and kisses her on cheek . He moves her shirt up and holds her bare waist and get her closer . So ur free to night baby ?

MANYATHA - now that depends on ur son . Donno when he sleeps

UDAY - even that's true , it's been almost 3 months baby since I made love to you . All thanks to my junior .

MNAYATAH - uday. 😆

UDAY - hmm laugh laugh , I'll see u to night wait . He comes near her lips to kiss ...

AADI - he suddenly comes inside shouting " dad am ready , we're is Sanju , didn't come yet "

UDAY - lo aagaya , " wrong time again junior "

MANYATHA - 😆 She laughs . They will be in 10 min aadi , I have jus called naani

NOW ALL COME TO THE PALACE AND MANYATH AND UDAY RECEIVE THEM .

BRIJRAJ AND KOMAL - aadi , how r u my child .he jumps on their grandparents

Aadi - he goes and touches DS feet and take blessings .he goes and hugs Sanju

SANJU - aadi bhai , I missed u

AADHI - I missed u to angel . He kisses on her cheeks , u sit here I'll come in 5 min

UNNATHI AND VIJAY - Hi AADHI beta u won wish us

AADHI - he goes n hugs both of them . He goes up and comes down in spider man dress n surprise Sanju

SANJU - spider man !!! Mera bhai spider man hai , she jumps in excitement

ADHI - dad were is that angels magic stick which I got for Sanju

UDAY - it's there on my study table junior

ADI - he gets it n gives to Sanju , along wit flowers and chocolates

SANJU - love u bhaai , she kisses him on cheek and starts opening chocolates Nd they both eat

DS - look at da kids , how happy they are together

BRIJRAJ - jee maa Saheb , they are so cute

KOMAL - MANAYTAH now I think it's time for aadi to play wit his younger brother or sister

MANYATH - no mom pls not again . Am dying wit aadi , I can't even imagine about another child now .

UDAY - he smiles at da conversation

ALL HAVE DINNER AND SIT . BOTH THE KIDS ARE PLAYING IN THEIR ROOMS WIT NANNIES . BRIJRAJ GIRIRAJ UDAY AND VIJAY ARE TOGETHER IN DA BAAR ROOM WIT THEIR DRINKS TALKING ABOUT RIYASATH WORKS AND GENERAL POLITICS

BRIJRAJ - uday beta can I have look of that new project file

UDAY - ya surely I'll get it . It's in my study room . I'll be back

On the other side unnathi , manyatha , Komal and ds sat together .they are also having their conversations . To go to his study room , uday have to pass through da way where they sat .he overhears their conversation

KOMAL - MANYATH I have been telling u from past 5 months beta

UNNATHI - yes Bahabisa aunty Komal is right , I think it's high time now

MANYATH - pls unnathi and mom , am not ready for 2 nd child now . Y u guys are literally behind me

DS - because we need a heir

MANYATAH - I didn't get u ds , in that case I think we have AADHI

DS - that's true we have aadi , but he is jaigad's heir .

KOMAL - in short now we need a heir for devgad

UNNATHI - that's true manyatha , according to razzwade first child will be heir to jaigad , so ADI is heir to jaigad . We have even pressures from mahasabha about devgads heir

MANAYTAH - what , no one told about this to me !!?

DS - UADY told us not to tell u beta

MANYATHA - what !?uday knows ??!!!!

KOMAL - yes beta , we are given a time limit of 2 years .

MNAYATH - k then I'll see to it . U all don worry , we still have time . 2 years to go

DS - should be on safe side beta , think about it

UDAY - oh my god now princess will kill me for not telling that to her . DS AAPNE HAME MARVAYA

NOW J COMES WITH JAGATH . EVERYONE WELCOME THEM . NOW ALL TOGETHER SIT IN DA HALL AND ARE HAVING ICECREAMS .KIDS ALSO COME DOWN .

SANJU AND AADHI - hi Maasi n Jagath Maama

JAGATH AND J - they take kids into their arms and kiss them

MANYATH - still that mahasabha thing is going in her mind . Uday observes her .

AADHI - j Maasi where is my remote car?

J - she gives him da car and a teddy bear to Sanju

SANJU - thanks bhuaa

AADHI - thanks sexy

EVERYONE IN THE HALL IS SHOCKED TO HEAR THAT .

MANYATHA - aadi what was that ? Apologise Maasi

UNNATHI - jus wait MANYATH , beta aadi why did u call her so

AADI - sorry did I tell anything wrong

UDAY - no beta , y did u tell so

ADI - once I heard Jagath Maama telling that to j Maasi , so I thought its nice and decided to call her like that

J AND JAGATH - they get embarrassed to da core

UDAY - it's k beta , don't call her like that from next time . K junior

AADHI - k papa , I won't . Everyone in da hall smile at da incident .

NOW IT'S NIGHT TIME , ALL TELL BYE AND LEAVE

ADHI - Maasi u promised me that u will stay with me at this weekend wit me in jaigad palace

J - I do remember baby , am gonna get my bag from car

AADHI - k we can enjoy a lot . Come I'll show u my new toys and paintings

J - jiji enjoy to night 😉 I'll be wit aadi

UDAY - he smiles at her statement and looks at his file in his hand

In manveer bedroom

MANYATH - uday y dint u tell me about that

UDAY - princess I didn't want u to take tension . Moreover ur not ready mentally for 2 nd child . So I didn't like to give mental stress for u . I thought of telling u but u got to know somehow

MANYATHA - now what's this mahasabha people , y r they behind devgad

UDAY - it's all politics MANYTAHA , now we are da two powerfully ki gdoms in mahasabha . So now they wanna create some prob for us . So came this way . U need not worry about it . If ur not ready for it ,I dont want to put any pressure on u . I can manage

MANAYATH - thanks uday , I love u .


UDAY - anything for u darling

MNAYATHA - but uday., am thinking about it . Even ds is right . Someday we should have 2nd child , that's for sure , y not now

UDAY - princess are u sure , see there is no pressure . Jus think about it . U need time I think. Baby .

MANAYATH - uday I have decided , that's final

UDAY - k then I'll wait for u in dA room

MANYATH - what ?!!

UDAY - u told u want a baby 😉 Come inside I'll help u regarding that

MNAYATHA - chii udayyy

UDAY - it's been really a long time , come wit me before my junior comes again

MNAAYTAHA - uday I jus wanna check j n aadi and come once , donno if j will b able to manage him all alone . U know him very well , he screws her up

UDAY - he lifts her in his arms . " princess nowadays i Hear only one name from ur mouth and that is AADHI , ur always behind him . Now it's my day pls "

MANAYTH - she blushes , and soon both leave to their room.

Lights go off . Both have each other . The night ends blissfully .

UDAY - he wakes up in da morning and looks at manyatha . He carasses her cheeks ,she is sleeping peacefully .

MNAYATHA - she is beside uday . Sleeping peacefully like a child

UDAY - he kisses her on her lips . He gives a peck on her bare shoulders

MNAYATHA - uday lemme sleep don disturb , it's till 6.30 only

UDAY - wake up baby aadi will wake up at 7 only , u know he will rush into our room as soon as he gets up

MANYATH - pls uday let me sleep now , u dint allow me to sleep till 4 in da morning . Am tired pls

UDAY - he smiles at her statement . Hey princess are u ok

MANAYTH - she wakes up now , wraps blanket around her and sit up on da bed . " why what happened to me , am good ..perfectly fine "

UDAY - because I was super crazy last night. So Am jus enquiring if I was very hard ?

MANAYTH - no , that was perfect😉

UDAY - ofcouse am that I know

AADHI - mamma , papa open door

MANYATH - she jumps from bed wit blanket wrapped around and rushes into bathroom

UDAY - soon he gets into his tracks and wears shirt and open door

AADHI - dad I was shouting from 5 min , y did u take much time .telling this he barges in and searches for MNAYATH

UDAY - sorry beta was in deep sleep , dint hear da door sound .he takes his son into his arms And kisses him on his cheeks .

MANYATH - she comes out of bathroom

ADI - he rushes to her and hugs her . Mamma I missed u . He asks her to take him into her arms

MANAYTAH - I missed u to beta , she lifts him and kisses him

UDAY - where is Maasi

AADI - now don ask me dad , u know her right . It's 7 now ...Maasi gets up at 9 minimum

MANYATH - betaa

AADHI - mom ttomorrow it's SAMAY and SULABH 's birthday . Let us go out and get a gift for them

UDAY - k junior v will


THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR COMMENTS AND LIKES .SORRY FOR THE MISTAKES .

HIT DA LIKE BUTTON N GIVE COMMENTS IF U LIKE IT .THANK U






Edited by puggyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update Puggy.👏 👏 👏 I jus love chotu Uday.😉 Adi is jus like Uday so naughty n ziddi too.😆
Manyata n Adi's scene was very nice.🤗 n Manyata n Uday scene n Adi's entry into the room again at wrong time.😆
Fab. update Puggy n you updated two parts in a day, wow thanks Puggy.🤗
Great work.👍🏼 I love this FF , it's perfectly n beautifully written with Manveer romance tadka.☺️
Thanks for such a wonderful update.
waiting for the next chappy, do update soon, I think no need to say this line.😆
Well done.😊
🤗 🤗
Edited by Vasishtha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

Great update Puggy.👏 👏 👏 I jus love chotu Uday.😉 Adi is jus like Uday so naughty n ziddi too.😆

Manyata n Adi's scene was very nice.🤗 n Manyata n Uday scene n Adi's entry into the room again at wrong time.😆
Fab. update Puggy n you updated two parts in a day, wow thanks Puggy.🤗
Great work.👍🏼 I love this FF , it's perfectly n beautifully written with Manveer romance tadka.☺️
Thanks for such a wonderful update.
waiting for the next chappy, do update soon, I think no need to say this line.😆
Well done.😊
🤗 🤗


THANK YOU VASISHTA . I'LL END IT BY NOVEMBER ENDING , SO AM UPDATING WENEVER AM FREE .
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update Anisha..n this chap was more better than the previous one...!.wow...ur SS is getting interesting day by day..love it...keep it up...love Adhi...loved Manveer scene 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update really like ur concept atleast therz no kabaab me hadi in this ss between manveer
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
fab as usual
the whole thing rocked
loved how you showed the politics in thier life which shows that they are royals and have pressure normal people dont
please update soon and pm me
i loved adi
he is so super sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb luv junior uday..he is full on..n always have a wrong tyming..hahahah

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