OS-LOVE,PAIN AND REGRET-PART 5 PAGE 16 see pg 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
HI GUYS I M FEELING OVERWHELEMED WID UR LIKES ND COMMENTS...SERIOUSLY THANKS TO ALL FOR MAKING ME TO FEEL SPECIAL...LOVE U ALL
I DECIDED TO WRITE ANOTHER OS...
MAY BE 3 OR 4 PARTS...
GIVE UR LOVE TO MY NEW WORK ALSO

PART 1
Rk is married to his long time girlfriend Mb...thery know each other from the last 3 years...rk met mb in the acting school...Rk belongs to very high society whereas Mb lives in girls hostel..as her parents died 2 years ago nd she is alone nd she needs money to get an admission into acting school...so she sold her house...
Dreams of rk nd mb are same both want to become superstar...when mb met rk she knows rk is very high tempered...full of attitude nd whereas for rk mb is bubbly hot nd sexy girl...Everyday there will be fight between dem as rk used to do stupid things to irritate her...nd never let her to concentrate on her work...whereas due to this all girls started feeling jealous of mb nd always taunt her of being orphan..nd says she wants only money...nthg else...bt she has one close friend NANDANI...nd always stay wid mb..nd help her...she is good friend of mb...
Its daily routine of rk to irritate her nd slowly slowly he started liking mb...nd day by day his likeness started turning into LOVE.
He always tried to make conversation wid mb nd she used to ignore it...on the other side mb also loves him as he is the only one..who doesnt make joke of her being orphan...nd always tries to make her laugh by doing stupid things...but his status comes in between as dere is a huge difference between dem nd dere is not even 1% comparsion between dem.

Its been 6 months in acting school(course is of 16 months).
After 6 months Rk propsed mb nd mb refused his proposal..nd rk asks her the reason for her refusal...she said dat she is engaged...nd rk left heart broken...whereas mb also feeling heart broken..

Its been 1 month of the propsal...rk stopped talking to mb..nd all the girls still taunt dat mb true face rk comes to know...only Nandini knows how mb is feelings...as she knws dat rk propsed her...bt mb doesnt know abt dis...There is no single talk between dem...rk completely ignored her...
On the otherside mb health is not keeping good...as she is not eating properly from the last 1 month...as she broke rk heart nd rk changed behaviour...During the practise rk is noticing mb pale face...nd even noticing she is not able to walk...nd he asked nandini to take her to green room..nd make her rest,,,,nd he will bring sometime for her to eat...nandini decided its high time dat both solve dere problem...
Nandini knows rk will be coming to green room soon,so she asked mb abt rk...then she said dat rk propsed her last month nd she refused nd she even told him dat she is already enagged...nd both r heart broken...nd nandini asked the reason for dis...den mb told...that dere is huge difference between dem...nd no comparsion nd suddenly mb fainted nd rk hold her at correct time...
Now rk comes to know how much mb loves him nd his love towards mb increases manifold...

Rk takes mb to the doc nd doc told dat she is not eatingproperly from the last month...nd she is already weak..nd asked rk to take care of her alot...nd den rk decided to take mb to his mansion...as he knows she is lonely...
Suddenly mb wakes up nd rk ordered her dat she will go wid him to his mansion nd mb refuses but rk one glare makes her shut up...

Then rk takes her to the mansion nd informed nandini to tell abt mb in her hostel..nd whereas rk paarents are very down to earth dey believe in humanity...nd dey r happy dat rk is respecting girls...as he ws very flirty types...

Its been 1 week dat mb is staying wid rk...rk parents r noticing rk changed behaviour,...nd he always makes mb smile...nd when rk parents asked rom him abt his beahviour...he told dat he love mb nd even mb tooo...but
The status difference comes in between...nd mb feels dat is not right for rk..nd rk parents decided to talk to mb...
One day mb is resting in her room nd rk parents entered...nd dey asked her hand for rk..nd even said dat u r like my daughter...nd status difference doesnt makes ne effect...as we truely love u..nd rk also..
Rk enters suddenly nd propsed her in front of his parents...nd after seeing happiness on rk face nd on his parents face she says yes...all becomes happy...nd rk parents ordered mb dat she will stay wid dem...nd when dey will finish dere course dey will make dem married...
All people in the acting school comes to know abt dis...among all of dem...nandini is very happy..nd all r jealous...
one day they taunt mb abt her being orphan nd also said dat she is using rk money...nd says very cheap words...nd rk comes nd listens to all dis...nd becomes more angry seeing mb crying...nd just want to slap the girl...before him..rk mom slapped her..as comes to the school to take mb for shopping as dere course is coming to end...
After taking mb out...rk mom says dat dere r not ur true friend she y to think abt dem..just enjoy ur life..many people will come in ur life..who will feel jealous abt u...just care abt ur close ones...

Now rishbala course comes to end..nd dere parents got dem married...nd send dem to PARIS for deir honeymoon...

ok guys first part ends here...next part will be present...
TEASER
HOW IT FEELS...WHEN UR PARTNER BEHAVIOUR CHANGES TOWARDS YOU??
UR PARTNER FEELS JEALOUS OF UR SUCCESS.???
STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT PART
PLZZZ GUYS PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON ND COMMENT
IT REALLY MOTIVATES ME...
SORRY FOR THE SPELLING MISTAKE...


INDEX
PART 1-SCROLL ABOVE...
PART 2-PAGE 5
PART 3-PAGE 9
PART 4-PAGE 13
PART 5-PAGE 16



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Posted: 11 years ago
superb dear...its awesome...πŸ‘πŸΌ

well done dear...really like it...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

plz continue soon next part...waiting for next part.hope it will be on rishbala honeymoon...πŸ˜‰
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      Meetu awesome OS 

     Waiting for Part 2 πŸ˜³
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another os wow.u r really amazing.v nice concept.thanx a lot for pm.cant wait for part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome. Really nice start.

Please continue.
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Awesome OS

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excellent os...πŸ‘thanks for the pmπŸ˜ƒ
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Nice part πŸ˜Š
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It's awesome yr.W8ing eagerly fr next part.Continue soon nd thanks fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
at starting u mention 3 yr for marriage after meeting and at end u get them married after 16 mnths...