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Posted: 11 years ago
hey all the parts are mindblowing... i would love to ses scene in serial where ram cares about priya...

but he us back to his angry man avatar...

wish he stayed with priya next day also...
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wow, you are really amazing, love all the parts, please update soon..
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amazing writeups ... waiting for nxt parts!
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...continue soon😊...i cannot wait for the next part...πŸ˜›
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ps cotiue and give some ideas to ekta.
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waiting!!!! Waiting!!!!! waiting!!!!
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Part 6

 

Ram and Peehu hve been having gala time together. Ram calls lily and gives her a Pen drive. 

Ram: Lily isme jitney bhi photos hain mujhe wo sab develop karvake do.

Lily : (Putting the pendrive in her laptop while sitting in front of Ram in shock) Sir !!!!!!

Ram: Haan kya ?

Lily : Sir 1000 snaps hain yaha par.

Ram: Toh ?

Lily : Sir aap pura KM isse cover karne waale hain kya ?

Ram: are meri marzi mujhe job hi karna hai mein karoonga.

Lily : Sir ?

Ram : Ab kya hua ?

Lily : (showing a pic of him priya and Peehu) Yeh bhi print karvana hai.

Ram: ahem ahem haan kardo use de doonga.

Just then Vikram walks in. All angry with Ram for what he is doing.

Ram: Arre vikram tu kab aaya. Baith dekh yeh pics mere aur peehu ke. Lily you may go.

Lily: Ok sir

Vikram:  Sits down. And just looks at Ram.

Ram: Kya hua?

Vikram takes a coin out of his pocket and asks him Heads ya tails ?

Ram : Tails

Vikram flips the coin and shows him. It's heads. He remembers the bet he had. Heads he loves Priya Tails he does not love priya.

Vikram asks again H or T ?

Ram : T

Vikram flips again. It's heads again.

Vikram H or T ?

Ram : T

Vikram flips the coin and gives it to him in his hand. Without looking at what it is and just walks out. That silence said a 1000 words.

Ram looks at the coin. He throws the coin on the floor. And while he is about to walk out he looks at the coin again.  It's Heads.

Priya in her new house

P : Peehu kahan ho aap. Aaj school ka pehla din hai. Late nahi hona hai.

Peehu : Haan mamma. Mein taiyaar hoon. Papa ka wait kar rahi hoon.

P : Beta Papa is in the office wo nahi aa sakte.

R : Kyun ?

They both look at him and Peehu runs to him. She takes her in his lap, takes her bag and starts walking out leaving Priya behind. Priya understands and does not ask to go with them.

Ram see offs her daughter to the school and heads back to the office. Just then he sees Priya and Rajat going inside a coffee shop. He is almost blowing fire from all sides. And then thinks to himself why should it matter to me. She can do what she wants. In anger he calls his lawyer and asks him what happen to the custody papers. Lawyer informs him that as per the law the child has to be with mum till he or she is 13. He cannot have sole custody of Peehu. Ram looks at the caf and again gives a hard fist on his car windshield. Almost breaking it. And in pain shouts Ouch.

Priya sitting outside the caf with Rajat hears the Ouch and knows in one instance who it is. She looks at Ram and his hand is bleeding profusely. She runs to him and ties her scarf around his hand. And asks the driver to take the car to her home.

Rajat sitting outside the caf just gives a smile : Miiya biwi ka rishta, ajeeb. Chalo bhai Rajat tumhara kaam ho gaya.

Priya takes a look at the hurt. And removes a glass piece from it. Ram is filled with anger and a frozen tear. He does not even react to the glass piece being removed. She whispers quietly. "Pyaar toh hai" bas gusse ke baadal hat jaaye.

Ram does not react at all. Nor is he trying to take his hand away. He is OK with her holding it tight to stop the blood flowing. He is just happy with the touch.

P: Aap jaiye Mr. Kapoor aapko phone kar lenge thodi der mein. She tells the driver.

Ram says nothing still.

P: Chaliye.

R n P quietly go inside the house. P does the dressing and Ram is just quiet. She does his dressing and looks at the clock and then goes inside the kitchen. Comes back with some meds.

P: Yeh lijiye aapki dawai. Khaayi nahi hongi ab tak. Haina ?

R: Yeh kaunsi dawaai hai ?

P: Jo aapko discharge ke samay di thi.

R: Par wo toh mein le gaya tha Hotel room se.

P: Mere paas prescription ki copy hai. Who kya haina ki mujhe maloom hai mere wo is maamle mein aalsi hai. Aap nahi mere wo.

Slowly a smiles creeps on Rams face. Just then a tear rolls out his eye. Priya knew the anger just melted out. She kneels down and puts her hand on his knee. Cups his hurt hand in her hands.

P: Ram ?

R: Hmm

P: Itna pyaar karte hain mujhse toh baat kyun nahi karte.

R:Nodding No.

P: Idhar dekhiye

Ram looks at her.

P: Mein aap ki thi,Aap ki hoon aur aapki hi rahoongi. Aapke paas rahu ya na rahu. Meine sirf ek hi insaan se pyaar kiya hai.

R: Phir kyun chali gayi thi mujhe chod ke.

P: Aapke liye. Aapko har din marte hue mein nahi dekh sakti thi. Jab mujhe yeh pata chala ki mein pregnant hoon. Mein yeh nahi chahti thi ki Ram ki beti jail mein paida ho. Mein yeh nahi chahti thi ki aap yeh dekh kar har pal mare ki mein pregnant hoon aur jail me hoon. Mein yeh nahi chahti thi ki koi aapki beti ko kahe ki uski maa jail mein hai. Mein yeh nahi chahti thi ki aapko peehu kabhi puche ki mein jail mein kyun hu.

Aap apni Priya ko chodne ke liye taiyaar hai abhi peehu ke liye. Aap gusse ki wajah se kar rahe hain. Aur meine Aapke liye kiya tha. Sirf itna hi fark hai.

R: Aur Ab ?

P: Ab mein aap aur peehu. Bas aur koi nahi.

R: another tear rolls down his eye. He just does not know what to say, how to react. His Ego is telling him leave now. But his heart is telling him give in.

Just then Priya puts her hand on his heart. And then she gives him a peck on his forehead. Ram just holds her tight at her waist with his head on her tummy. And she holds him tightly. All the tears that were bottled in Priya's eyes just start free flowing. She had done it. She got her Ram back.

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Part 2 1
Part 3 2
Part 4 3
Part 5 4
Part 6 7
Part 7 9
Part 8 12
Part 9 13
Part 10 14
Part 11 15
Part 12 19
Part 13 24
Part 14 27
Sp 1  21
Sp 2 21
Edited by kchinoy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww...Awesome...awesome...What a superbbb update yaar...Hope show pe bhi they show it in such a way yaar...I loved your update...Finally Ram got his Priya back and Priya got her Ram back...I loving it...U have written it superbly...πŸ€—