OS: Iss Aag Mein Na Jaane, Kyun Hum Jal Rahe - Page 2

amazing...wid ur words i too can feel the pain...hats off...

Superbly written... Hats off to u... U r a suoerb writer... Just loved ram priyad confrontation... How rams anger taken over his love and priya got the love back from his anger... Fab... Thank u for the OS... Keep writing...

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Gud congrats !

its great kash aaise he ho hope cvs read your os... and get idea...

u r back missing ur posts 

Omg Diii... Itzzz jszz Outstanding...👏 👏 Loved it...Wowww Di.. The pain, the hurt, their feelings...Love... Emotins.. Evrything jst perfect... ⭐️ Hope we will see smthing like dis In Epi...bt fr dis... 👏 👏 Luv u.. Muaah..❤️

Hey amby, how are you dear... long time no see... hope u r doing fine...
btw as usual loved ur OS.. very much... very heart-wrenching but thank God a happy ending... thanks for posting it..

Ambi Bambi!!

Hey Ambar thnx 4 the OS..U knw i was dying to read a ff or os written by u and finally u wrote an os and dat also on the track i wished u write..Am so happy.. As usual wonderful and i really would like to see the exact scenario and dialogues after a month on the show.. I said after a month coz as we knw all this isnt possible now as they are gonna continue vid the crap for a month we can expect a positive twist on the decision day.. :) CVs if u happen to read this pls copy it and am sure the writer wont mind. ;) Coz dis is something we all wld love to see enacted by RaShi and obv "RaYa.. :)

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awww Amby... i m so much happy today... i got chance to read my fav Writers Story after such a long gap... This os once again proved that you are the best... every single word that you have written touches me..Priya: Promise.  Lekin aap ko bhi mujhse ek promise karna hoga.  (She looks at Ram) Aap ko Mamma ke liye Papa ka khayal rakhna padega.  (She looks back at Pihu) No Aloo Parathas and no tablets for Papa.  Okay princess?  oh god only you can write these lines...

and priya's decision to sign custody paper for his happiness is just brilliently conceptualized... I how much we two love Ram kapoor the charactor but we equally know that if anybody with whom RK would be happy is only Priya Ram Kapoor.. just amazing writing...
 
and last part is just awesome... their entire conversation is sooo touchy...