Beggin On Your Knees For Me Abhiya updtd pg 3

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I watched you die
I heard you cry every night in your sleep
I was so young
You should have known better than to lean on me
You never thought of anyone else
You just saw your pain
And now I cry in the middle of the night
For the same damn thing
  - BECAUSE OF YOU
    Kelly Clarkson


                                                   

                                                                  

                                                                                                   You and I walk a fragile line                                     I have known it all this time
                                 But I never thought I'd live to                                    see it break
                                       - HAUNTED
                                        Taylor Swift
                                                                                                                                        




It feels like nothing really matters anymore
When you're gone, I can't breathe
And I know you never meant to make me feel this way
This can't be happening
So many questions, so much on my mind
So many answers I can't find
I wish I could turn back the timeI wonder why
                            -EVERYBODY HURTS
                               Avril Lavinge



**That describes the whole plot.Don't get it? That's why I'm here honey, to tell you this fascinating story.

**Can anyone please make a siggy for me *pout*


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YEAH,I'LL BE DEDICATING CHAPTERS TO READERS SO BE NICE TO ME ): SUPERNICE
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Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter One : For the First Time
Dedicated to : Divya6696 aka Dhrishti Solanki - My Personal Cartoon Network

The paparazzi was having a field day.Every news channel was trying to get the latest update on what really happened.Each trying to get past the security and barge in and reveal the next bit of information.

"The elder Indian Heiress Paridhi Dobriyal  was caught in a carcrash this morning,the elder of the Dobriyal heiresses was reported to be in a critical condition.An unfortunate incident.Paridhi's younger sibling and fiance are unavailable at the moment.Till further information this is Asmi for ENews!" said the reporter as she reported the hot and buzzing tragedy that had taken place this morning.

The Dobriyal sisters are ranked to be the two of the richest heiresses,born and brought up yet sheilded from the media spotlight.Some legal order that banned any media from publishing anything until they were of the lega; age of 18 and when they did th elder one being older and sensible  kept a low profile while the younger one being young and carefree as they say cared a damn" and kept a scandalous record but unfortunately none of them were published.

On the other side of where this scene took place Piya Dobriyal entered the hospital barely getting away from the news hungery paparazzi who showed no interest in her sister's treatment or even bit of sadness or remorse over her accident but were all ready to grasp to and reveal any news they got. too bad they didnot recognise her well.

Piya wiped away the tears that threathened to flow.She had promised herself that she'd be strong.She had promised herself that she won't let it get to her.She knew her sister would survive,she was a fighter amd afterall deep down in her heart she knew that it was true.Paridhi would survive,afterall she was all that  Piya had and her sister knew that.

Every step Piya took towards her sister's room mattered,every second mattered and every thought did.
She saw the doctors swarm by and the security tighten and then she saw him.
Abhay Raichand-her sister's fiance. The cold hearted billionare and heir to various multinational companies,banks,industries and god knows what else. The player who her sister had chosen to marry.
He looked  pale,broken and defeated
The playfullness and smile that played in his eyes was long gone and his hair which was previously styled now resembled a mess.
"I believe we were waiting for you Miss Piya." was all that one of the lawyers present there said as the rest of them escorted her to her sister's room. The lawyer previous she recognised as Mr.Graham.

Piya looked at her sister.Her elder sister,her rock instead of that all she saw was her strongwilled sibling surounded by artificial life support.She looked ver to Abhay   who had just entered the room and now had his gaze fixed on her sister.

"Pihu," her sister whispered,attempting to speak. "Yo know Abhay   here.he's awesome and remember I love both of you but I'm gonna need someone to look after both of you.My irritating little sister and Abhay   here"

Abhay   could feel tears form in his eyes.
Tears that threathened to flow.
Tears,that threathened to reveal the weak,broken man he was behind this tough exterior.
He knew what Paridhi wanted and he had agreed to it even though it meant living the rest of this life** with someone that he didnot want to know and trapping himself in an unwanted relationship. 
Fulfilling the last wish of the girl he had fallen in love with meant the world to him.So he lifted the papers lying on the table and without a second glance he signed them and passed the over to Piya.
"Bethrothal papers,your sister wants us to matty.If anything happens to her she wants the both of us to marry each other.Your sisters last wish.Sign them"

Piya stared at the sister who simply nodded her head and to the man who now stood beside her who didn't even bother to look at her. And then she signed the papers infront of her - her tears soaking the sheets and whispered. 
"I'm not doing this 'cause it's my sister's last wish but because I know nothing will happen to my sister and now she has a reason to win this figh 'cause i know that at the end of the day she  will get me out of this arrangement by staying alive."

That was the first time Piya was wrong,the first time Paridhi had ever lost a fight and the first time Abhay   had felt loss and heart break because on that fateful night Paridhi Dobriyal had peacefully passed away in the arms of the two people she love the most whispering the words.

"I just want you'll to do one thing.Never seperate but be with each other till the end.And to each other apart from everything else just be someone to love.Just like I was to you-Someone to love."

Simple words that changed three lives-One thich was lost forever.

Ohk! If anyone noticed I changed panchi to Paridhi _ still trying to figure out which father in his sane mind would name his daughter Panchi out of all things ๐Ÿ˜†



Phew! That was long! How was it. Constructive criticism please (:

**Why did I used "living the rest of your life" instead of "spend the rest of the life" because when you spend the rest of you life with someone you share it and while you live you just live.

YUP,I WILL BE DEDICATING CHAPTERS SO HE EXTRA NICE TO ME hehe

Edited by tiger_lily - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwh.. To me Kii..?? Thank you..!!!! But.. I'm not Cartoon Network re..! ๐Ÿ˜”
I read it..
Its really good..!!!
Abhay Loved Paridhi.. aww.. she departed.. and both Abhay-Piya signed the papers as her last wish.. awww..
It would be really interesting to know what happens next..!
Update Soon.. i.e. when you get time.. ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜† but do update it..!!
and ha.. PM me..

Love you.. ๐Ÿค—

and btw.. Me first.. Yay..!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
just loved the begining๐Ÿ˜› eager to know about what will happen next๐Ÿ˜‰
 continu soon & pm me๐Ÿ˜ณ Edited by shria - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome start!
OMG Abhay n Piya tied in an unwanted knot by Paridhi!
Eagerly waiting 4 d further story;it is just fabulous concept!
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome strt kiara๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ sounds different ... dey dnt wnt 2 gt married wid eachothr ...oooppsss!!!!!!!!! updt soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya

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hey,
ssup? NUUH .. they'll get married but later .. I seriosuly don wanna ruiin the chances of a big fat AbhIya wedding after that thing disguised as a wedding we got in the show ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow fabulous but dont being so mean to panchi... she is not dat bad as we think...


jst joking...:-)


actully be mean ar she is wrost more dan wat we think so be mean towards her not big deal


but chappy is lovely and ya i am sad 4 paridhi but wat to do its destiny of trio...
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was good now we shall see abhay and piya as husband and wife, please continue and pm me when u update! ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update.bth abhiya hate 1 another & r nw husband & wife.can't wait to read mre.do pm me nxt tym