Virika in canada new story lAST PART

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

pls pls pls pls update soon !

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Israa.

@Recovery.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

i missed ur story awff just finished reading it all the parts are superb lts written totally amazing loving what you are writing now great work keep updating !!!!!!!!!!!

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ashna1406

@ashna1406

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

amazing update dear...

i was so shocked after the last part but now im again in the same old jovial mood :)

last time i read this os i said oh no it will become like the other update..sad and no romance but u got us by showing viren's birthday..

love the concept of the story...

continue sooonnn :)

dont worry even if u dont pm me,,i check check the story daily to see if u've updated it or not :P

i know i have left a long comment but this is all the effect of ur os..

it is driving me crazzyyy and making me love tacker moreee

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Deepika Asrani

@-Deeps-

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

You sure got me! :D

Lovely! part!

I wonder how will Jeevika react?

Continue soon! :)

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vishwa patel

@-vish-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

superb update...😊😊

so curious what will happen next?

update soon!!!

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Alina Tacker

@ktlovers

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Hey guys i usually dont write on week days but since itlls halloween here is a treat for all of u love u all
Happy halloween dont eat so much candies !

ANd SOME people told me that they loved my story i really feel happy to know it yaar , they think cv should see it lol but i think karan should see it because im a dam big huge gigantest karan tacker fan i love him from the bottom of my heat Manisha and preet knows it !

Recap: Jeevika was feeling alone at viren bday bash ,
Part 25
Jeevika was sitting in the corner . Viren checked her once , but whenever he tried to go to her someone take him with her . Jeevika was loosing patience
jeevika to herself : yaar i look so weird i think that;s why no one is appoching me , i think i have to change but kaisee ?
The suitcase was near the door but where she gonna change
Shee see viren mom and go to her
Jeevika: excuse me aunty .
mom : yes beta
jeevika; auntyy i need to change , can i ?
mom: of course Tarun madam ko room dikao
jEEVIka smiled at her : thanks aunty
mom : ur welcome
Jeevika goes to the room and tried to retext viren , still no reply she feel so bad , she was feeling so low
And virat passed
Jeevika: Virat !
VIRAT: yes jeevika
jeevika: Can u send viren please ?
virat: i dont think he can come yaar party is going on he cant come in the room sorry
Jeevika with a puppy face : okay
Jeevika decided to get ready
She changed her clothes and put her new sexy cream dress
Here is it how she looks

Jeevika to herself: finally ready , but the dress is it too short or too long ?
who will tell me ? Viren is even not looking at me but phir bhi and ye virat bhi na
SHE goes on the bed sit and start crying , she was feeling so lonely
like a person who was trying to be integrate in a new group , yes she was but viren was new to her
ShE PUTs her head in the pillow and start crying
jeevika crying and talking: manvi i miss u , viren is not even with me , im feeling so lonely , i cant get out from this room , everyone is looking at me so weirdly as if im a ghost and viren haven't told anyone about us
i know that he is busy but he could ask me to join
Viren was standing at the door listening to her beautiful girlfriend who was ccrying and who was missin him
He was just smilling looking at her . She was in fact looking gorgeous
hE goes Near her she didnt know he was there
and he touch her back
Jeevika immediately turned and see no one .
Jeevika: now im even feeling is dream touch , oMg JEEVI ur soo desperate of viren
Viren couldnt resist anymore , he was laughing like a madd
Viren came out ,
Jeevika was soo happy to see him but was not showing it
jeevika: tum , kyun aye ho ?
viren: tumse milne
jeevika: acha to ab yaad ayi , tum ja sakte ho
viren: sure i was enjoying anyway
jeevika: :O
viren: jaoon
jeevika : jao
viren: sure ? tum nahin aogi
jeevika : ayegi na meri jhooti
viren: abhi to tum ro rahi thi , mere saamne itni himmat kahan se ajati hai jeevika: wo to meri ankh mein kuch lag gaya tha u know india ki mitti
viren: ya right , mitti wo bhi mere ghar mein
jeevika: jaoo
viren; ok
Hee get up and go near the door wich was open
Jeevika run to him and close the door and stand in front of the door
and she locks the door
Jeevika: ab ja ke batao
viren: ye kya ho raha hai
Jeevika pulled his collar and make him closer .
Jeevika: tumhe nahin pata
viren: jeevi..
jeevika: shut up !
viren was tryin to not loose his control , because many many guest was waiting for him
Viren: jEEVika!
JEEVIka put her lips on his lips . Viren tried to avoid it but after 2 sec he was also still not able to go away from her
He grab her face and start kissin her passionately , her neck her arms .
Jeevika was enjoying that moment that viren open the door and whisper on her ears: ye to bas trailer tha, i know u want me , but baby i have guest join the party or else ill not cut the cake :P and ill introduce u to everyone

and he ran away with a flying kiss !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Dania

@Daniaax3

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Loved it ! Can't wait for the next part !

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

lovely update! pls pls pls pls continue soon! i am waiting fot the next part to rock... update part 26 soon and pls have more virika scene thanks for the story...