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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Nisha where were u man...??? But anyways i m soo glad that u updated...!!!! I think u probably know how much i love this ff... I hav lived each n every moment of this ff n have cried many tyms feeling virman's pain... N coming to the update it was just marvellous...!!!!!! Virman r bck together... I m almost jumping wid joy...!!!!! N virat's dialougues... Ufff they are just too perfect n heart touching... the way manvi confessed her love was also magical...
Thank u for d update hun...
Will add u soon on fb... My id is Naina SInghania...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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naina

@naina927

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#802

N i forgot to mention that i have already read it twice before posting yhe comment n running off to read it again... Bbbyyyeee...

Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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X_Life

@X_Life

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#803

so finally virat lost all d patience he had and blurted out all in a flow that was perfect, the way she let out the burden was so well written
and the best that brought maanvi was this line
"It affects me so much that if I hadn't run away from the party I would have probably pushed that girl from the stage and you too."

wow could imagine it it was so lol 🤣
just dont want bua to create a seen like always

waiting for next part update soon

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Aenna

@Aenna

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#804

Eeekksss... M sooo happyyy it was d bst update...
I totally loved it...it was way more dan superbbb...
Nd i hvread it almost 3 tyms its really mind blowinggg...
I cant wait for d next part...nd omggg dere first kiss till now..
Amazinggg update asap

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#805

that was an awesome patch up update the way she cries n then virat's confession n then the kiss in the end 😳aaawww everythin was jus really sweet - nw i hope virats family dnt cum int he way cuz theyve already been through so much especially the pain manvi went through thanx a lot for the update n the pm continue soon plz😉

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vamps1996

@vamps1996

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#806

the update was amazinggg

u potyd their feelings damm well

loved each and every dialogue

manvi's part was my fav

thank u for the pm and fpr updating

update soon

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Miishii

@Miishii

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#807

Ahhh finallyyy updated! Update sooner this time! Thank youuu.

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@.jai.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Brilliant update... Finally VirMan patch up n Manvi Confessed loved every bit of it... VirMan Kissy 😳 haww.. I loved the way u portrayed Manvi's emotions.. Truly awesome... Waiting for the next part.. Thanks for the pm.. Continue soon😊

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Maria

@neha fan1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#809

Finally!! They confessed there feelings. It was such a lovely update. Everything that was meant to be told was said. You are so good at dictating emotions so well. Great job keep it up!