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Posted: 11 years ago

So emotional...awesome work

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: boreddamsel
Girl.. hats off! Brilliant!
I have goosebumps..

Brilliant!

Yes, write when you are upset.. write when you are happy.
Write what you are feeling a strong emotion.. that is what brings out the best in you!

Great job once again!

Thank you for your lovely words! You're absolutely right.. one should right when feeling a strong emotion, that's what makes the fic more honest and from the heart

thanks again for stopping by :)

cheers

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smitzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sohara
Oh god, you made me cry. Why did you write such a sad story?
I couldn't bear my Arnav in that horrible state.And why Khushi died? They are soul mates. They can not live without each other.
The story reminds me of Devdas.
Such an emotional OS! My heart is still aching for my beloved Arnav and Khushi.
Brilliant writing!

😊

I apologize to have made you sad.. but thank you for your lovely comment.. Devdas? haha you're not the first one to remark that!

cheers!

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beyonddarkness

@beyonddarkness

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Posted: 11 years ago

very nice and emotional
😭

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smitzy

@smitzy

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kbtr
OMG! Speechless!

That's the smallest comment I've seen you make *EVER* 😆

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Swetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Smitzyyy🤗

That was simply amazing!👏

Tbh...writing sad OS's is much better cause u can put all ur feelings in it!
After i wrote my OS, i tried to think abt diff ideas bt only sad ones came to me!😛
And im pretty sure if i start thinking now only sad ones will come to my mind!😉

And this was just heart-breaking!
i mean the way Arnav acted , felt was just...😭

What a brutal way to kill Khushi yaar...

But it was just Beautifully written!😃

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

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Posted: 11 years ago

wonderfullos:))))))))))
so well written:)

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smitzy

@smitzy

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva
Smitzyyy🤗

That was simply amazing!👏

Tbh...writing sad OS's is much better cause u can put all ur feelings in it!
After i wrote my OS, i tried to think abt diff ideas bt only sad ones came to me!😛 And im pretty sure if i start thinking now only sad ones will come to my mind!😉
And this was just heart-breaking!
i mean the way Arnav acted , felt was just...😭
What a brutal way to kill Khushi yaar...

But it was just Beautifully written!😃

Thanks so much dear!! 😊 I completely understand what you mean by writing sad OS.. it's all about finding your niche area you know.. some people are good at comedy, they can't write anything else as convincingly.. but once you enter the dark genre, there's no stepping back.. moreover, you can make people feel what you want them to feel.

Brutal way to kill Khushi.. hmm ya I guess it was 😛.. i was actually struggling with an apt sideline story, but that is the only thing that seemed good enough that could affect Arnav this way..

I'm actually writing another one right now, based on the latest promo and that is going to be sad too 😆

stay tuned 😉 and thanks again for the lovely comment!

cheers!

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Mansi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very touchy and emotional..sumthin off track. Loved it. Though wud never lyk to see such a scene on screen

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smitzy

hahahaha oh god.your every comment manages to make me laugh.. oh you poor thing, you absolutely hate shyaam don't you? I can see you almost cheering when I start writing about his angle in my FF story 😊

thanks for the comment!

Haha, I am glad I can do that, Ma Lady...🤗

I dooo, You don't know how MUCH...I crazily HATE him...I am so so In HAte with him... lol

Haha, Oh ya, whenever something bad happens to him, I go all "HA, on your freaking face Shamu..." 🤪 "What you will do now, Haan? Haan?" 😈 lol

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