Originally posted by: shay1990
Res!
EDITED FINALLY! 😭
This was even worse then last time!!!!! *cries*
1000 years later here I am. I got to read it twice 😉 lol,
because the first time I read it I took a leaf out of your book and read it
late at night' So by the time I wanted to comment, I was nearly dribbling over
my laptop lol. Just kidding *looks around nervously*
Now for the update!
Pinks' You outdo yourself each and every single time. And
this update, was absolutely no different. It had just the right amount of
humour in it as well' Because you know I like humour lol. And the whole update
was just so cleverly done' Especially the Khushi and Aman part. But before I
get ahead of myself, I'm going to go through the chapter in order unlike usual. 😆
Arnavs flashback at the start really did set the scene for the
tone of his and Anjali's relationship. Arnav doesn't quite seem like a
heartless bas***d, yet Anjali doesn't quite seem like a casual 'sl*g' either. I
liked the way you have given just enough information in order for us to be
drawn to this situation. Sly
Because right now, I feel like there is a lot more to
Anjali's career choice then what is being given away. I going to take a guess
and assume that she had her reasons and it was hard for her to get out of that
choice. And Arnav being the rash decision maker as usual didn't give her a
chance to explain herself. But we can so clearly see here that Arnav maybe
regrets this? And it's been so long now that he feels like it's his fault? That
he could have saved her?
But obviously he's using his anger as a front. And this is
shown through this sentence:
If he stepped past everything and stripped it down to one thing, it was
himself that he hated. He hated his own weakness, his inability to have saved
Khushi all those years ago, to have prevented his sister or realised sooner, he
hated his own misgivings. It was himself that he hated.
I really loved this bit. It puts everything in perspective
for us, and for him as well. When he looks past everything, he realises he's
only so angry because he wasn't able to save the ones he loved the most. He
isn't even blaming Anjali here. However,
he is ASR and even when he goes to see Anjali' He puts on that front again. If
I'm honest, I can't wait for them to reconcile'. If that is going to happen
that is?!" *looks at Pinks with eyes full of hope* 😳
I honestly loved this part Pinks' Arnavs complete and utter
distress was worded so perfectly ' his anguish was just there on the screen for
us to take it and literally feed on it. That is how vividly it was set out.
Amazing job Pinks. 👏
So can I just say that I think I love Aman almost as much as
you love him now lol' He's so cool, he's awkwardly suave and more importantly'
he has a PLAN!!!! And a bloody brilliant plan at that! I love how he knows Arnav so well *bromance*
he's literally Arnavs common sense ' making up for all of Arnavs bad moves!
He did make me chuckle more then usual in this chapter,
especially when he says:
"Don't worry I really don't bite, I'm pretty nice actually, if I
do say so myself,"
Ahahahhahahaa, cheeky bugger! Not that it helped in any way
whatsoever lol it only seemed to fuel Khushi's anger. And coming on to that
part, I like how Khushi is angry' I remember saying earlier how I'm waiting for
her to just lash out! And here it is' But poor Aman is getting it instead of
Arnav. But I'm sure that is to come' Right?!
But I do like their bantering here. And at the end where she
goads him for not being back within the hour. That hour bit!! I love how Aman
is so nerdy and organised and know exactly what he needs to know and puts the
pieces together straight the way! Superhero Aman. And THIS BIT!
"Yes! We are at least getting somewhere, you've got my name
correct!" He beamed, suddenly slightly excited.
He's so cute Pinks' I just imagined him getting proper happy
in my head! #BigKid 😆
And it's even funnier because he's so unaware that it's
frustrating her lol. I don't even think I'm making sense anymore' I just love Aman.
Bas. I like him even more then my Akash LOL!
So Shyam has creeped me out to the max in this chapter. *shudders*
He can feel her skin on his skin. He feels the taste of her name. PERVERT! No
cookies for Shyam Babu' Only a good beating from Grawp! I'm waiting for
something humongous to happen in the Shyam/Khushi part of the story' Don't
think I've forgotten about all your little twists and turns and little hints! Because
I'm still as intrigued as ever *weeps*
Also though' I'm a little confused about Akash. Is he
actually a bad guy in this? Or is he just trying to keep Khushi's identity safe
for Payals sake? Or am I just being thick?
So as much as Arnav hates himself for Anjalis state, as I mentioned
before, he still builds those walls right back up.. And doesn't even give her a
chance to explain. Even though he knows that
he shouldn't shut her out' He still does. And I'm kind of hoping he'll fully regret
this because it really does look like Anjali is trying to tell him something
important/ Am I right? Either way, like I was saying before' I really do hope
they reconcile nicely. Because I actually feel sorry for her now 😒
And now I just have to go back to Aman. The sly devil!
Match-making wala plan this is???? And poor khushi is like a tigress locked in
her room... ready to pounce every time someone enters. Lol and Amans getting
the bulk of it. I keep saying this' But I hope that anger is directed towards
Arnav, because I sense Aman knows EXACTLY what he's doing' And he's going to
make this all work to his advantage. Or he could just end up diluting her anger
on Arnavs behalf with this plan? Pata nahi' I'm all for it either way 😉
*claps excitedly for Aman*
So I shall finish off by saying of course I love you' And
thank you for creating such a wonderful, diverse story. You are a genius you
know that?
Keep doing what you're doing' Because you sir, are doing it
amazingly!
Love and LOTS of hugs (don't worry, cake as well lol) 🤗
And how can I forget #Kukkad (I've been listening to it
whilst typing this, as a tribute to you) 😉
❤️❤️
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