FF: Tales of the Heart|VirMan|CH 1 - 23 (Thread 1) - Page 52

Loved all the three updates.Loved Shiv more .a Lovable person and a true friend to Manvi in every sense.Fell in love with Jeevika and her courage.Loved Virat and MAnvi more.Thanks for the pm😊

Wow Zahara u said in ur previous update that u give us shock and yes u did it Edited by jannat89 - 11 years ago

Oh I was shocked.. I mean surprised... Uh... It was unexpected but pleasant...
I loved the update...
Thank you so much for the pm 😃 

Sorry Sorry Sorry for the late comment... It was Eid and I din't get time to read the updates..

wow its mind blowing👏

wow those were two awesome updates...loved it!! plz do update soon.

OMG!I seriously have no words to describe your past updates..I had tears in my eyes after reading the last update..The twists and turns u introduced had taken the story and VirMan to a new level...Everything seemed so dynamic..The frustrated mob before the palace,Viren trying to explain everything to the people,their attack,Jeevika's actions..I could imagine her walk like a real queen in front of that mob..And Virat feeling guitly...My heart ached for him<3...Viren-Jeevika-Virat convo was too good..Had tears in my eyes while reading that part..And marriage!Oh My God!Never expected that so soon!!Loved the way u have written chaudarys' reactions..Could imagine Maanvi's pain crying her heart-out in the room..Virat thinking Maanvi as someone who can help him otherthan his bro and bhabhi..and here Maanvi thinking if Virat could save her..Just fell in love with them all over again in those parts..They kind of have that dil-ka-connection now itself<3

And that last part!...Just wow!..Perfect way to end 'A fated compromise'...I thought it's about their marriage..Yeah..It was about their marriage itself..But the way u presented it is just wow!...It was so dynamic...(I don't have any another words to describe it now..lol)Can't really point out what I liked in that part,then I would quote the entire part here.. :P also the tension and the built-up for that sudden marriage to happen was totally there..I love Shiv for supporting VirMan..<3

PS:I wish there was also a mangalsutra.. :P I miss mangalsutra :( or is it in next update??? :P

PS1:So sorry for the late reply.. :( But am totally inactive in the forum if u notice..Just coming here now to read the updates...And I love you for the sudden updates..Eeks..Thanx so much for the triple treat :D *HUGZ*

wow! really i have no words to describe how much i lovee thiss!!  awesomee!! maanvi and virat are now married..that was one unique way for them to get married only virman can do that 😆

just read all three chapters in one go it was just awesome totally loved it... so finally virat and maanvi are married... waiting for next part... u are amazing writer dear...