Yayy!!! You updated!!!π Not fair such a short update.. Plz giv us a long one next time!! π³ Loved this part! Def daal mein kuch kaala hai! π Why is Rafa behavin like that?! LOL loved Rafa-Shipra convo!! Esp the chanda bit!! π π Can't wait for the next part!! Edited by _CandyCream_ - 11 years ago
awww! So sweet partner. U r back wid bang. Love to read ur type of writing to be fresh. You create funny dialogues even in simple scene. This dialogue is solid example "aapki teeki zaban ko jala nahi daala toh mera naam bhi Rafa nahi !!!" short n sweet update parter. Keep writing.
badi jaldi update kar diya, kya baat hain...waise itne din aap thi kaha, pata hain aankhen taras gayi aapke update ke liye, waise this was nice one, eagerly waiting for RaYa's marriage preparations but pls don't make us wait long for next update
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