virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#991

awesome update naina ek dam cute and besharam types 😉😃
virat kuch ziada hi besharam nai hai dadaji aur piyali chot si bacchi ke saamne bhi pata nayi kya kya double meaning batein karraha tha 😆😆
aur uski excitment to haye Allah ..piyali and virat convos alwayz special and sooo cute 😃
eaxcited for the next update 😃

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anvyagnihotri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#992

👏awsmm, mindbwlng update...luv piya soo much...she is sooo cute😊...piyali nd virat bondng amzng... they roxxx🤗...lov convobetwn thm...nd virman too...piya luvs viraat more than her father ha ha ha❤️...can't wait for next update ...plz update soon next part...

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surbhijain93

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Posted: 11 years ago

#993

Awesome update,piyali z sooo cute

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nimi00

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Posted: 11 years ago

#994

MELA SMALL SMALL BABY AGAYA!!! You have no idea how happy you made me, I literally jumped up excited when I saw the update and then was grinning like an idiot at my computer screen when I read it. Virat is too funny and poor Manvi was so embarrassed. I loved the update, it was amazing. Piyali was adorable, she is so excited for her small brother and I am too, haye ek chota Virat, it will be so adorable. I really wanted Manvi to have twins in the show so we could have one boy one girl but its ok, I have you FF to look forward to now for a chota Virat. 😊 Thank you for the update, continue soon and please PM me 😊

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prathe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#995

wow super cute update...piyali is super cute ...😊
A big sorry fr the late comment dear...having some net issues...also not visiting forum nowadays...
so once again big sry...

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#996

Originally posted by: prathe
wow super cute update...piyali is super cute ...😊
A big sorry fr the late comment dear...having some net issues...also not visiting forum nowadays...
so once again big sry...

Thank u prathi n i understand; i m also facing the same problem... 😳

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#997

Originally posted by: nimi00
MELA SMALL SMALL BABY AGAYA!!! You have no idea how happy you made me, I literally jumped up excited when I saw the update and then was grinning like an idiot at my computer screen when I read it. Virat is too funny and poor Manvi was so embarrassed. I loved the update, it was amazing. Piyali was adorable, she is so excited for her small brother and I am too, haye ek chota Virat, it will be so adorable. I really wanted Manvi to have twins in the show so we could have one boy one girl but its ok, I have you FF to look forward to now for a chota Virat.😊 Thank you for the update, continue soon and please PM me😊

yes yes nimi... small baby aane wala hai... Virat aur piyali ka sapna poora ho gya... thank u soo much n u dont know happy i am dat u liked it soo much... ohhh junior virat... I also wanted one... Never mind when naina is here, not to fear... Stay tuned

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#998

Originally posted by: abbay
upd8!!!!

Will update once the problem with my net connection gets sorted out... 😳

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#999

Originally posted by: neetnia
i luv piyuuu :)

Aww 😃

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naina

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1000

PART 31

virat : what are you thinking...??? manvi... are you okk...???
manvi : chill i am fine... i am just thinking about how time flies away...
virat : matlab...
manvi : abhi kal hi baat lagti hai... we were so excited when di told us that she was expecting... hum piyali ke kitne excited the yaad hai...
virat : obviously yaad hai... that was such a great feeling but whatever we are going through right now -
manvi : nothing can be more special than that...
virat : exactly...
manvi : its a feeling that -
virat : that has turned you into a philosopher...
manvi : kya yaar virat... band bja di tumne saare mood ki...
virat : band baaja bjane ka time gaya madam... ab toh loriyan gaane ka time hain...
manvi: mujhe toh nahi aati...

virat : i will sing it to my boy..
manvi : virat usually the father wants to have a little girl and you... you are so different... you want a boy... why...??
virat : property... property ke liye... samjhi...??
manvi : shut up...
virat : haha... piya needs a brother who will protect her...
manvi : tum mere baby ko bodygaurd bna chahte ho...
virat : nai re... ek kaam karo tum so jao... goodnight...
manvi : okk...

in morning
manvi came down the stairs just to see the chaudharys enjoying tea.
manvi : beeji...
dabbu : manvi didi...
manvi came running and she was about to slip when virat caught her on time...

virat : cant you see and then walk...???
manvi : sorry... (smiling and looking at virat)

virat : stop smiling like an idiot... kuch ho jata toh...
manvi : tum ho na... i am not scared...
jeevika : its okk virat.. come mannu...
virat wasnt happy from what happened... jeevika shouldnt have spoken between him n manvi... manvi is his wife and he has every right on her...
beeji : manvi kaisa hai mera baccha...???
manvi : i am fine beeji... and i am very happy...
pinky : arrey meri bacchi... main bahut khush hoon manvi...
manvi : thank you chachi...
dabbu : di hum na aapke liye kuch laae hai...
manvi : kya...???

dabbu : ye dekho apki bachpan wali doll or ye apki favourite frock...
manvi : aww... thank you mere bhai...
virat : manvi...
manvi : hmm...
virat : tumne medicine li...
manvi : nahi... bhool gayi...
virat made a face and went upstairs to his room. suddenly he was feeling way too protective about his baby... the moemnt manvi was about tp slip, he was scared on the thought of anything happening to their unborn baby... it was not just a baby for virat, it was his dream... his everything... symbol of manvi n his love...
manvi looked at virat and wondered what is wrong with him...
jeevika : accha kia virat ne car bhejke aap log aaj yahan hai hum sab khoob enjoy karenge...
swamini : bilkul...
manvi smiled on knowing that virat called her family to be a part of their happiness.
dabbu : jeevika didi... piyali nahi hai...
jeevika : hain na... she is sleeping... aaj school nahi gayi...
manvi : sone do meri piya ko... kal bahut jumping jumpang machaya tha usne...
dabbu : haha...

scene shifts
virat was taking out manvi's medicine when piya walked in rubbing her eyes...
piyali : vilat good molning...
virat : good morning...
piyali : godi lo na vilat...
virat picked up piyali in his arms and piyali kissed virat's cheek...
piyali : vilat small baby kab ayega...???
virat : very soon...
piyali : vilat hum small baby ko bhi ice cleam khilane leke jayege... okk...??
virat : okk...
piyali : pal ye manvi kahan hai...??
virat : neeche... lets go...
piyali : vilat tum sad ho...??
virat : no baby... virat sad nahi hai...
piyali : plomish...
virat : pakka promish...

scene shifts
virat : manvi kuch khalo yaar... fir medicine bhi...
manvi : haan... come beeji... aao sab breakfast karte hain...
piyali whispered to virat " yeh mujhe dekh kyun nahi lahi...?? mujhe gussa hai kya...?? "
virat : nahi... pagal ho gayi hai khushi se...
manvi : alley meli piya baby... what whispering is going on between you and my husband...???
piyali : mujhe gussa ho chachi...???
manvi : nahi baby...
piyali : fil mujhe good molning kyun nahi wish kia...
manvi : awww... sorry... and see beeji aayi hai... dabbu mamu aae hai... woww...
piyali : alley haan... hello bb... (bb means badi beeji)
beeji : kaise ho beta aap...??
piyali : main wondelful hoon... hai na chachu...??
virat : hmm...
dabbu : hello piya... come to maamu...
piyali : hello dabbe...
jeevika : piyali...
piyali : i mean maamu... main nahi aa sakti... main vilat ke paas hoon na...
dabbu : do na piyali ko virat jiju...
piyali : no vilat... lets go eat... bhookh lagi hai...
virat : come baby...

scene shifts
manvi : whats wrong with you...???
virat : are you talking to me...??
manvi : yes i am talking to you... why are you behaving so weird virat...???
virat : ohh... you finally got the time to...
manvi : why are you taunting me...??? what have i done...???
virat : now i will tell you that... amazing...
manvi : virat dont beat around the bush... say whatever you want to...
virat : i dont want to say anything...
manvi : cmon virat...
virat : please manvi... you can go back to your happy go lucky mood... go and enjoy with your family...

manvi : so that is your problem... ohh i see...
virat : i never said anything... presume things if u want...
manvi : you are just impossible...
virat : then go hang out with the possible ones...

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are you guys liking this new twist in the tale... change in virat's behaviour n all...

do tell me what do u think...???

should i go on with this or should i keep virat the way he is... 😳

Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago