NEW FF: LEGAL SINS Part 10 - Page 136 - Page 70

Oops! Now what will he do poor thing always gets in to trouble or should i say trouble is attracted to her...hope he understands well that's kind of miracle... Nice update waiting for Monday... 😊

EXcellent update, dr...cant wait for more...

Originally posted by: daljeet

madhu,ill comment properly after one r two updates more.cant say anything right now.hope u'll understand.

definitely against arnav n his ways,tht u can be sure😛

now im more afraid for kushi.wat will he do to her as she has gone without informing.hope all goes well with her parents.but i feel something is gona go wrong.arnav may go there n create a wonderful scene.

but really wat sort of a behaviour is this.kushi.she cant just rum out of house.its not a hotel,there is a family living.shudnt she hv common sense.

Great update !!!! what ll Arnav do next...

OMFG! I knew they did it but now what?
Arnav is acting like a prick as always.
Anjali has no idea what's going on.
And in this whole mess Khushi is the only one suffering.
Poor poor Khushi.

thanks for updating today. Great update.

But why does she think, it was a sin. They are married.


Thanks for PM

FANTABLOUS MADHU

yay!i am too happy getting a Saturday treat from Madhu123!



this is the first time,that except Monday-Friday,i have read her live updates. . .



First of all,this update was-

HOT,SEXY,SWEATY,SHAMELESS,and F*CK*ng awesome!

just loved it . . .



the 1 day wait was worth,am sure,if you had updated this very part on Monday,i would have never been able to concentrate on the other 4 ffs,which i never like to miss. . .



i just went over this part almost 2 times,to get the best and perfect view of the chapter. . .

well,be not able to think for giving my review,still,here i go--

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1st-Arnav was so desperate for Khushi. . .wow. . .even though he has slept with many models,Khushi did turn him on doing nothing,i loved how you drafted that!



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2nd-

the morning view you described and the conversation you wrote,totally brought a naughty smile on my face!
😛
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3rd-

Khushi is really so innocent to still be so shy,that also after having made love with her rightful husband(although she thinks 6 months contract marriage,its still a marriage). . .

and this-

"lets shower together to save time"!

so sexy ASR!



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4th-

he is still dominating her,by tellin her to obey him and open her eyes when he was holding her in his arms to going to the washroom to have a shower together. . .this shows the ASR in him,and some-how,don't know why,i love that part of him!



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5th-

the conversation in the wash-room,and the description of Khushi's state shows that he was quite wild!

wow,lucky she!



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6th-

these lines now make a clear idea in my mind bout the title you chose for this ff:

"He said it wasnt a Sin.. But for her, it was a Legal Sin.."

well,these lines speak tons!



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7th-

ASR never let anyone mark him,but Arnav let Khushi

,awesome. ..
😃
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8th

OMG,what happened to Khushi's parents,why are they at Preeti's?



eager to know.. . .

very good update,it really is a treat!



hope Khushi's saved from ASR's wreath,on Monday. . .

defianely am going to faint till Monday comes!

really happy to read the note at the end,indicating that next update will be on Monday. ..

although i reached to this update before you could send the link,still thanks for the pm,guess i dint have much patience left for the pm!



love you loads Madhu123...



keep up with you great drafting and hot posting!

am waiting for more,plz pm me the link soon!

Excellent, loved how he was in the morning, was expecting him to ignore her but was pleasantly surprised. It was nice how he sensed her dis comfort and let her use the washroom on her own.