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                              INTEZAR

subhe ke 8 baaj rahe haai Hariram aur veena jee dono milke breakfast table set karr rahe the jab amar jee jo ke jaise taise aapna pranayam khatam kar ke waaha aaye the table par rakhe hue halwa aur puri ko dekh ke aapne lips ko lick karte hue veena jee ke tariff karte hue kahete haai "wah veena waj aaj toh tumne mera jee he khush kar diya subhe subhe halwa aur prui kya baat haai aaj koi khas din haai kya ?"ab veena jee jin ko yeh aache se pata tha ke aamr jee unke taraff sirf isliye kar rahe haai taaki woh unhe naste mein yeh halwa aur puri serve kare unke iraado par paani pherte hue kahete haai"jee khas din toh haai par iska matlab yeh nahin ke aap yeh sab khaaye yeh nasta specially mainne mere bete rajveer ke liye banaye haai isliye aap mujhe buttering karna bandh kijiye aur chup chap aapna nasta kijiye"
 
amar jee jinhone socha tha ke woh veena jee ko thora buttering kar ke aaj aapna sareal nasta chor ke yeh tasty nasta karenge unka toh mann he jaise tut jaata haai woh aapna as usuall cornflakes khaate hue veena jee ke taraff dekhte hue kahete haai"yeh toh pata chal gaya ke yeh nasta tumne tumahre laadlee bete ke liye banaye haai par kya main yeh jaan sakta hu ke aaj aasa kon sa khas din haai jis ke khushi mein tumne yeh sab banaya haai kunki jaaha tak mujhe yaad haai aaj naa toh humare shaeb zaade ka jaanadin haai naa he uske koi abroad jaane ka program toh baat kya haai?"ab veena jee jinhone itne der se aapne khushi ko aapne dil mein dabaake rakhe hue the aamar jee ko aasa pucchte hue dekh ke aapne khushi unse share karte hue bohot he excited hoke kahete haai "woh baat daaraasal yeh haai jee ke kal raat ko pandit jee ka phone aaya tha unhone humare rajveer ke liye ek bohot aache aur gunne laarki dkehe haai aaj shayam ko hume unke ghar jaana haai aap aap rajveer se baat karenge naa jeee?"
 
veene jee ke aakhon mein yeh khushi kee chamaak dekh kar amar jee ko aacha toh laagta haai par woh jaante haai ke yeh kabhie puri nahin ho sakta kunki rajveer kabhie shaadi ke liye taiyaar nahin hoga isliye woh veena jee ko jhoothe dilasha naa dete hue kahete haai
dekho veena mujhe pata haai ke har maa ke taara tum bhi aapne bete ke zindage settle karna chahte hoo par tum toh aache se jaante ho naa ke rajveer ko shaadi ke baat sunke kitna gussa aata hai phir bhi tum yeh sab kun par before amar jee could say anything more veena jee jinhone is baar than lee the ke woh aapne bete ke shaadi karwa kee he rahege aamr jee ko tokte hue kahete haai"bass mujhe kuch nahin sunne haai main aapne rajveer ko settle kar he rahunge chaaye uske maarzi ho ya naa ho main aapne bete ko aapne zindage aase barbad karte hue nahin dekh sakte isliye ab main he usse baat karunge aur usse is shaadi ke liye maanayunge bhi "
 
 
veena jee rajveer se baat karne ke liye uske room mein jaate haai toh dekhte haai rajveer
 aapne office jaane ke liye ready ho raha haai veena jee jin ke sar par us waqt aapne bete ke zindage settle karne ke junoon sabar the sidha uske pass jaate haai aur rajveer ko pucchte haai
"beta kya tu mujhse pyaar karta haai ?"ab rajveer who was busy in packing his staffs aapne mom ko aase achanaak usse yeh baat pucchte hue dekh kar gets really confused woh veena jee ke taraff haairaani se dekhte hue pucchta haai
"kya baat haai mom aap aaj yeh kya pucch rahe haai offcourse i love u "veena jee ko aapna jabab milte he woh rajveer se kahete haai "thik haai aagr pyaar karta haai toh tujhe aaj mere ek baat maane hoga tujhe aaj shayam ko humare saath larki dekhne jaana hoga aur agar tu nahin gaya toh main samjh lunge ke tune mujhse kabhie pyaar kiya he naahin"
 
 
aapne mom ke baat sunke rajveer toh ek dam shocked ho jaata haai kunki uske liye shaadi karna kisi rishtey mein aapne aapko bandhna bohot he muskil haai aur woh yeh baat aapne parents ko kaye baar baata chukka haai par aaj uske mom ko aase kahete hue sunke uske pass jaise koi option he nahin raheta woh kuch naa kahe ke chup chap aapne bag leeke waha se chala jaata haai
 
 
rajveer aaj aapne office toh jaata haai par uska mann waha bilkul bhi nahin laagta woh aapne car ke keys leeker office se nikal jaata haai .He goes to a near by park jaaha sab baache khel rahe hote hai rajveer yahaan aaksar aata haai jab bhi uska man bohot udhas ya pareshan hota haai woh jaake ek bench par baithta haai aur aapne aakhen bandh kar ke aapne beethte hue waqt kee baare mein sochne laagta haai .
 
 
He was in his college then sab log usse paarakhu aur boring kahe ke bulaata the uske life uske books mein he simte hue the woh naa toh kisi se kuch khas baat karta tha naa he college ke dusre larko jaise girls ko impress karne ke liye parties ya phir disc jaata tha .He was a totally shy kind of a person whose life used to revolve around his books and classes only par kahete haai naa ke ek hawa ka jhokka he bohot hota haai huamre zindage ko badalne ke liye rajveer ke zindage mein bhi aasa he ek hawa ka jhoka aaya aur uske life pure taara se badal gaye
 
 
 
It was on their college annual day function sab log bohot busy the function ke taaiyaario ko leeker jab aachnaak koi aake kaheta haai ke unke fuction mein jo singer gaane baala tha woh baarish ke waaja se nahin aa paayega yeh baat sunte he sab students ke chahere par ek pareshani cha jaate haai kunki audience unke baat nahin samjhayege aur unhe bohot humiliation face karna hoga unhe samjh mein nahin aa raha tha ke woh log kay kare kaise is musibaat se nikle aase mein koi aake unhe kaheta haai ke 3rd year ke rajveer bohot aacha gaata haai he can only save them from this humilation par problem yeh hai ke rajveer is a very reserved kind of a person woh gaana gaane ke liye bilkul he nahin maanega isliye ab kya kiya jaaye
 
 
aapne friends ko aase pareshan dekh kar unke group ke jo leader the kavya woh sammne aate haai aur aapne friends ko kahete haai ke she will convience rajveer to sing in the function "
 
 
kavya rajveer se baat karne ke liye library mein jate haai jaaha woh hamesha raheta hai woh rajveer se jaake kahete haai
ke usse aaj ke evening fnction mein gaana gaana hoga rajveer jo ke kabhie stage par khara hone ke baat bhi nahin soch sakta tha achanaak usse stage par gaane ke baat sunke he
By gets really shocked woh kavya ko sidha maana kar deta haai par kavya is not a girl who is ready to lose woh rajveer ko warn karte hue kahete haai ke
usne haan nahin kiya toh she will start shoutting there only ab rajveer jo ke bohot he shant aur sober larka tha uske
 pass koi option nahin hota sivaye haan karne ke he agress to sing at the funtion
 
 
kavya rajveer ko leeker jaate haai aur function mein rajveer sings for the first time on the stage sab log bohot khush hote haai rajveer ka gaana sunke itne appreciation itne claaping sunke rajveer jo ke sirf aapne khushi ke liye gaata tha aaj jaise yeh sab dekh ke gets really overwelmed
 
 
.Dekhte dekhte kavya aurr ajveer bohot aache dost ban jaate hai rajveer unke group ke member se milne laagta haai uske boring life jaise ek dam se badal jaata haai He too started visiting discs and all
 
 
aaj valentine day haai sab log aapne aapne pyaar ka izhar karne ke liye gifts aur roses kharidh rahe haai rajveer who too started liking kavya decided to confess his love to her woh bhi kavya ke liye ek choota sa par pyaara sa gift kahridhta hai aur college jaata haai to tell her that he loves her par pura din intezar karne ke bad bhi kavya ko woh nahin mil paata fed up hoke woh jab kavya se milne us ke "PG mein jaata haai tab usse pata chalta haia ke kavya kal raat ko he aapna samman leeker aapne ghar chale gaye haai rajveer uske landlady ko pucchta haai uske address ke baare mein but she cant tell him the actuall addrees woh bas itna kahete hai ke she lives in delhi
 
 
rajveer aapne contacts use kar ke kavya ko dhudhne ke bohot koshish karta haai but he failed Dekhte dekhte uska college complete ho jaata haai woh wapis aapne ghar mumbai aata haai aur aapne dad ka business samhalne laagta haai uske zindage mein ab sirf aur sirf kaam he raheta haai .His life is again back to square one
 
 
rajveer aapne life ke turmoil le he raha tha jab he felt somesoft things over his cheeks rajveer aapne akahen kholta haai toh dekhta hai uske pass ek choote se pyaari se laarki khare hoke aapne choote chotte haatho se uske cheeks par laage hue aasuo ko wipe kar rahe haai rajveer ka dukh aur aasu jo ke kisi ke aaj tak nahin dekha aaj is choote se ajaan larki ko aase usse pocchte hue dekh ke he feels really nice woh us bacche ko apne godh mein leete hue kaheta haai
"kya naam haai aapka beta ?"ab woh larki aapne pyaari se aakhen blink karte hue aapne sweet se voice mein kahete haai
"pinky aur aapka? "rajveer tells his name to her
 
 
aase he kuch der baatein karne bad rajveer jab usse kaheta haai that she should go home now pinky ka chahera ka jaise ek dam se uttar jaata haai woh aapne sad se voice mein rajaveer se kahete hai
 "oh actually uncle main ghar nahin jaa sakte i got very poor marks in maths mama will schold me "rajveer who finds it funny tells her that he will make her mom udnerstand woh pinky ko leeker uske ghar jaata haai

pinky was hiding behind rajveer when he clicks the door bell .They both were waiting for the door to open when to his utter surprise rajveer dekhta haai ke jo larki aake daarwaja kholte hai woh aur koi nahin balke uska pahela aur aakri pyaar uske kavya haai

 
itne saalo bad aapne pyaar ko aase aapne aakhon ke sammne dekh kar rajveer gets
really happy woh kavya ko hi akehne he baala hota haai ke tabhie uske is khushi ko torte hue pinky who was hiding behind him aapne kaano ko pakarte aapne pyaarsi voice mein bol utthte haa
"sorry mamaaa plz dont schold meee i am really very sorry "

pinky ke muh se "mama "word sunte he rajveer ke dil mein jo khushi ubhar raha tha woh jaise ek dam se khatam ho jaata haai woh kya bole kya naa bole usse kuch smajh mein he nahin aata haai woh aapne kadmo ko peeche karte hue waha se jaane he
 baala hota hai jab kavya who recognised him usse rokhte hue kaheta hai"rajveer yeh kya mujhse mila bina he chale jaaoge "

itne saalo bad kavya ke muh se aapna naam sunke rajveer
ke kadam jaise wohi rukh sa jaata haai woh turn karte hue aapne hootho par ek smile laate hue kaheta haia
"toh pahechan liya tumne mujhe" kavya rajveer ko leeker ander jaata haia .After some formal talks and all rajveer jab aapne ghar wapis aata haai he was totally shattered woh kisi kuch naa kahe ke chup chap aapne kamre mein jaata haai aur
sochne laagta hai ke kun aasa uske saath hua kun usse aapna pahela pyaar khona paara ?

aase he sochte sochte do din beeth jata haai aaj rajver ko ek meeting attend karne ke jaana haai woh aapne car mein baith kar apane files aur presentation check kar raha hota haai jab achnaaak woh dekhta haai ke kavya pagalo ke tara raaste mein bhaag rahe haai

 
kavya ko aase dekh kar rajveer jo ke chaha kar bhi usse ko bhulla nahin sakta tha aapne driver ko car rokhne ke liye kahe ke kavya ke pass jaata haai aur usse pucchta haai"hey kavya what happen tum is tara saarko par bhaag kun rahe hoo cant u seen the trafic ?" par kavya who was looking really disturbed and tensed almost rote hue rajveer se kahete haai
"woh woh pinky kahin chale gaye haai i i cant find her plz plz help me to find her rajveer plzzz "kavya ko aase rote hue dekh kar rajveer ka mann bhi jaise pareshan ho jaata haai woh kavya ko car mein baithne ke liye kahe ke usse leeker pinky ko dhudhne laagta haa
They both
By riaroy at 2012-09-01 were searching pinky everywhere but was not able to find her kavya jaaha ek dam tut
By riaroy at 2012-09-01se gaye the wohi rajveer ko jaise achanaak yaad aaya us park ke baare mein jaaha woh aur pinky mille the woh kavya ke leeker waha jaata haai aur bhaagwan ke kripa se unhe pinky wohi bench par soye hue milte haai
 
 
kavya jaake pinky ko aapne bahon mein sameet leete haai she was crying like anything Rajveer who cant see kavya in pain feels happy to see her with her daughter woh kavya aur pinky ko leekr unke ghar jaaata haai kunki baarish hone baale the

woh log jab kavya ke ghar pohochte haai tab pinky so chukke the kavya pinky ko
 sulaa ke jab aate haai tab bahar baarish suru ho chukke the woh rajveer ko kahete haai to stay over there tonight Rajveer kavya ko maana karte haai par kavya ke zidd ke aage naa kabhie uske chale haai naa chalege woh wohi rukh jaata haai

 
kavya rajveer ke liye coffee laate haai aur usse thanks bhi kahete haai .Itne dino baad kavya ke saath aase coffee pina rjaveer ke liye koi sapne se kam toh nahin tha par us ke dil mein baar baar ek he khayal aa raha tha ke kavya ke husband kaha haai woh thore hichkichate hue kavya ko pucchta haai
"kavya kaya main tumhe kcuh pucch sakta hu if u dont mind " ab kavya who was busy in sipping her coffee while nodding her head says"ya offcourse u can puccho " rajveer ab apne dil mein chal rahe ulljahn ko suljhane ke liye kavya ko pucchta haai"kavya plz dont mind but tumhare husband kaha haai i mean is tara tum dono ko aase sehar mein akele chor ke kya woh saher ke bahar job karte haai?"
 
ab kavya who knew that this q will arise one day aapne cup ko balcony ke railling mein rakhte hue aapne hootho pe ek smile laate hue kahete haai"agar hote toh rahete naa " kavya ke yeh baat rajveer ko jaise kuch samjh mein nahin aata haai woh uske taraff haairaani se dekhte hue pucchta haai"matlab kay woh but before he could say anything more kavya uske is confusion ko dur karte hue aapne life ke sab se baare secret ke baare mein baatate hue kahete haai"rajveer pinky mere beti nahin hai woh ajay bhaiya aur jaya bhabhi ke beti haai aaj se 7 saal pahele ke baat haai main aapne room mein aapne notes baan rahe the jab mujhe call aaya ke mere bhaiya bhabhi ka accident ho gaya haai mere bhaiya bhabhi jo ke mere liye sab kuch the unhe baare mein yeh baat sunte he mera dimaag ghum gaya mujhe samjh mein nahin aa rahe the ke main kya karu i tried to call u but ur mob was switched off i had no more time to think main aapna sammna leeker waha se chale gaye
 
 
jab main delhi hospital pohoche unse milne tab mujhe dr ne baataya ke mere bhaiya ke maut on the spot he ho gaye the par mere bhabhi who was 8 months pregnant unhe woh log hospital leeker aaye the but after delivering the baby she also past away

Mere liye
toh mere duniya wohi khatam ho gayae the kunki mom dad ke guzar jaane ke bad bhaiya aur bahbhi ne he mujhe samhala tha pyaar diya tha par ab jab woh log he is duniya mein nahin rahe toh main
 kya karunge kaise jee paayunge aapne zindage ko aase mein nurse aake jab mujhe mere bhaiya ke aakhri nishani unke beti ko mere godhe mein dalte haai tab mujhe ehesaas hua ke nahin mujhe jeena hee hoga kunki mere bhaiya jinhone mujhe ek pita jasia pyaar diya tha unke aakhri nishani ko ab mujhe ko samlhalna hoga usse zindage dene hoge

 
 
isse soch ko aapne zindage ke maksad banate hue mainne pinky ko aapne beti bana lee ab wohi mere liye mera sab kuch haai i i cant live without her she she is my but before could complete her sentence her voice gets choked with her supresed tears which was stored in her heart since a long time
 
 
rajveer who cant see tears in kavya's eyes enholded her in his strong warm arms .woh kavya ko uske room mein chorte hue jake living room mein baithta haai
 
 
aagle din subhe jab kavya ke aakhen khulte haai tab woh dekhte haai uske bed side table par ek letter rakhe hue haai kavya aapne sleepy eyes ko rub karte hue us letter ko read karte haai jis mein likha tha "KAVYA KAL RAAT TUMNE MUJHE EK BAAT BAATAYE HAAI AUR AAJ MAIN TUMHE KUCH BAATANA CHAHATA HU TUMHE SAYED YAAD HOGA KE MAINNE TUMSE AAJ SE 7 SAAL PAHELE V DAY PAR EK SURPRISE DENE KE BAAT KAHE THE PAR DUE TO THE CIRCUMSTANCES MERA WOH SURPRISE ADHURA HE RAHE GAYA THA PAR AAJ JAB ZINDAGE NE PHIR SE MUJHE EK MOKA DIYA HAAI TOH MAIN AB AUR US BAAT KO CHUPPA NAHIN SAKTA KAVYA I REALLY LOVE U ALOT AGAR TUM BHI MUJHSE PYAAR KARTE HO TOH AAJ SHAYAM KO HOTEL BLUE DIAMOND MEIN AAA JAANA I WILL WAIT FOR U "
 
 
kavya jo ke khud bhi rajveer se pyaar karte the uske is confession ko sunke she gets really happy woh us letter ko kiss karte hue aapna sar haan mein hilalte hue kahete haai "yes i love u too rajveer aur main zarur aayunge"
 
 
shayam ko kavya jab rajveer se milne Hotel Blue Diamond pohochte haai tab woh
By riaroy at 2012-09-01dekhte haai the place is decorated beautifully with white lillies and candels kavya who liked lillies gets really happy to see it everywhere she just went inside and was surprised to see

rajveer wainting for her with his parents
 
 
kavya jaake rajveer ko pucchte haai ke yeh sab kya haai toh rajveer uske haath ko aapne haatho mein lete hue kaheta haai
"kavya mujhe pata tha ke tum bhi mujhse pyaar akrte hue isliye mainne aapne mom dad se kaah ke woh aaj he humare sagai kar de kunki AB AUR INTEZAR NAHIN HOTA LETS DELETE THE WORD INTEZAR FROM OUR LIFE AND MAKE IT HAPPY"
 
rajveer ke baat sunke kavya's eyes
 became teary she while nodding her head says
"yes rajveer me too wanted to delte it from our lives but one thing i wan to tell u before we step into a new relationship i i cant live without my pinky agar tum but before she could say anyhting pinky came running over there and while hugging rajveer says"papa plz jaldi karona i wan to eat the cake "
 
 
pinky ke yeh baat sunke kavya ko jaaha bohot aacha laagta haai that rajveer accpeted her as his daughte wohi rajver picking up pinky in his armss says"yes darling i will dont worry u will u get ur cake very soon"

rajveer
 slids the engagement ring in kavya's finger and kavya who dditn knew about this surprsie took her
By riaroy at 2012-09-01ring from veena jee
By riaroy at 2012-09-01who accpeted her as her daughter n law

 
"like this their intezar gets over and they became one "
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 11 years ago
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RIA its awesome
loved it
Rajeev and shilpa make lovely pair
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Originally posted by: .SilentPrincess

I have a questions.. how many stories can we "like"?

You can like as many stories as you want to. Its like casting a vote. But please refrain from liking all!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful OS Ria, i'm impressed 👍🏼


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vry sweet nd beautiful OS
luvd it 2 d core
u shud write more OS
Edited by vidu87 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update.
nice part
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very niceey writeen :) 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sweet story
Rajveer waited 7 years for his love and finally he found his kavya back again. Little Pinky is too cute. Rajveer's family is happy to see him start a new life.
Thanks for the PM