Abhiya ss:Ur love is my salvation*ch-8pg:24*1/7/13

Hii friends! I had a concept in my mind bt i was nt finding courage 2 write due 2 my laziness n also shortage of time as my research work wud start in few days or weeks.Bt i cudn't help bt share this Abhiya love story wid all of u.
I m nt a good writer nd don't stand anywhere before d talented writers of this forum bt writers like Poco di,Tanzie,Ayesha,Mandy,Dishu,Rmuk,snigdha,shreya,koyel,carismaetc. r my inspiration n their writing has given me courage dat i m going 2 write something.

STORY: The story will bloom in a village in Himachal Pradesh(as i m myself from a village background n always wanted Abhiya love story in a village) n willl be a normal human love story of a ordinary village gal n an Young Army Officer.

PROLOGUE: The faces of 2 ladies one slightly young n other old lit up as Raichand Mansion echoed with d ringing of Phone.They knew who it wud be.The young lady immediately stood up frm d sofa on which she,her husband n d old lady were sitting n excitedly walked 2wards d table on which phone was kept 2 pick it up bt when she glanced 2wards her husband d look on his face showed what he wanted n she immediately turned gloomy n retraced her steps n again sat on d sofa.D old lady who was seeing all this crap not just frm now bt frm 4 long yrs stood up finally gave a disgusting look 2 d man n went 2 pick up d phone.
As soon as she picked up d phone she was blasted by d fiesty boyish voice frm d other side"dadi,why weren't u pickin up d phone? U know na we r nt allowed 2 phone very often frm here.dadi u know what i stood 1st in d passing out parade n now i m Lieutenant Abhay Raichand. Why didn't u come here 2 see me? D parents n grandparents of all my frens were here.I missed u dadi.I know dad wud never come n coz of him mom wud also bt at least u wud hav tried.
U know what i wud be cming 2 Mumbai this week 2 collect my stuff n meet u as our young regiment has been posted in HP as a peace keeping force as u know there r no war like situations right now.that s all! Over n out! byeee dadi"
old woman had opened her mouth 2 say sumthing bt he had already disconnected d call.Bt she was happy as she wud be having a glimpse of her grandson after 4 long yrs.the shine in her eyes didn't go unnoticed by d other lady n she smiled n waited 4 old lady 2 say sumthing.
Old lady said"He is coming".

***INDEX***:
CS: page 2
NOTE: page5
CHAPTER 1: page5
CHAPTER 2: page7
CHAPTER 3: Page9
CHAPTER 4: page 11
CHAPTER 5: page13
CHAPTER 6: page17
CHAPTER 7: page21 Edited by Andromeda001 - 10 years ago

Great...lovely pg...continue soon..don,t be afairedEdited by Aish-Naksh - 11 years ago

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wow village background plz continue sweety and do pm me and ya cs and name of ff jaldi batana plz... i am excited 4 dis

Woaaa congo kirti for ur first ss. I am glad as u are starting ur own ss too, and I am sure u are gonna be a superb writer. Lol me in ur inspiration list too, so sweet, now coming to the story, I loved ur concept, village bg, wow me excited, plz continue and yea pm karna mat bhool na mujhe.

continue & do pm me

@ Aish-naksh: thnx dear.I will cntinue soon.



@Abhiya-visu:thnx dear 4 ur encouragement.U r an awesome writer.i will cntinue.Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 11 years ago

@trishnawaliya: thnx dear.i will post d CS soon.



@luckdiya: thnx dear.will surely PM u when i cntinue.Edited by cutesukirti1987 - 11 years ago

Thnxxx a ton Romi 4 ur words of encouragement!
I don't know wat kind of writer i m gonna make bt will surely cntinue d story.Plss bear wid me.
Will post d CS shortly.

@abhiya-pkyek: thnx prima.I will cntinue n PM u.