OS: Tum Bin...

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Posted: 2012-08-17T11:53:33Z

OS: Tum bin...

It's 5 years down the lane... both speak to each other... expressing each other's love without any hard words to each other... neither ram nor priya  blame each other.. they just share with each other their lovely moments they spent with each other... i am sharing my imagination with you all.. comments awaited...

In dubai...

Ram and priya meet after hide and seek...

Ram: p.. priya.. tum zinda...

Priya: woh... zinda toh hoon.. lekin... zindagi nahi jee rahi... ram...

Ram asks with tears in his eyes...: tumhe meri yaad ... nahi aayi... priya

Priya: yaad... gives a sad smile and says.. yaad use kiya jaata hai ram.. jisse bhul jaate hai,... aap toh meri saase ho...

Ram: toh.. waapas kyun nahi aayi... priya?

Priya: aayi thi.. recalls that scene... lekin.. sab shok mana rahe the r.. ram...  aap bhi... socha... 14 saal ki tanhai ke roop me pal pal maut ki saza  dene se acha hai... pal bhar ki maut ka ghum dena ram... taaki aap aage badh jao ram...

Ram: tumhari... maut ne.. ram ko bhi... sazaye maut de di priya...  aaj tumhe dekh ke.. ram phirse zinda ho gaya hai...

Priya: sorry ram...

Ram: ek baar mil leti priya... mujhe pita hone ki khushi... toh de deti...

Priya: ph .. phone kiya tha ram.. maine.. lekin... aap kisi ke.. saath...  baat kar rahe the... recalls "aapke earrings bahut khubsoorat hai"... us din bahut royi ram... khud ko aapse juda hone ka ehsaas hua ram..

Ram; tumhari jagah kisine nahi li priya... aur koi le bhi nahi sakta...

Priya: toh Ayesha...?

Ram: use bhi.. tumhare liye apnaya priya... tumhari behen ki izzat bachane ke liye.. priya.. woh pregnant thi.. sid ke bache ki maa... use kaise...

Priya: cries.. sorry ram... aapko samajh nahi paayi... aage kuch mat kahiye...

Ram: moves lose to her.. holds her.. and says.. hum dono ko juda usne (god) kiya hai priya... aura b milaya bhi ussi ne hai...

Priya: lekin.. is Milan ki zindagi bahut choti hai ram... hum dono.. aise padav par hai... jaha par.. hamare raaste nahi mil sakte...

Ram: aage ki baad me sochenge priya... pehle..is pal ko toh jeene do...

Both sit on the sand.. holding each other hand .. the sea waves touching their legs...

Background song...

Tere bina zindagi se koi, shikwa nahin (shikwa nahin, shikwa nahin)

Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi to nahin (zindagi nahin, zindagi nahin)

 

Priya: aur bhi mote ho gaye hai aap.. diet nahi karte hai na ram? Aloo paratha me zyada ghee daalte hai na...

Ram: tum jo nahi thi.. khabar lene ke liye.. rokne ke liye...

 

Tere bina zindagi se koi, shikwa nahin (shikwa nahin, shikwa nahin)

Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi to nahin (zindagi nahin, zindagi nahin)

 

Ram: tum tum kaafi achi lag rahi ho abhi.. dressing sense achi ho gayi hai.. Bahut achi lag rahi ho...

Priya: sach keh rahe hai.. ya phir.. vikram ki kahi baatein yaad aagayi... (recalling old days...)

Ram: tumhe yaad hai...?

Priya: pal pal.. inhi yaadon ke sahare zinda hoon ram...

 

Kaash aisa ho, tere kadmon se, chun ke manzil chalein

Aur kahin, door kahin Tum gar saath ho, manzilon ki kami to nahin

Tere bina zindagi se koi ...

 

Priya: dawai... ab bhi lete hai na aap?

Ram: rokne waala nahi than a... aur jeeta kis ke liye.. tum gayi.. toh.. zindagi ki mithas khatam ho gayi...

 

Jee mein aata hai, tere daaman mein, sar chhupa ke hum

Rote rahein, rote rahein

Teri bhi aakhon mein, aasuon ki, nami to nahin

Tere bina zindagi se koi ...

 

Ram: tumne bindi nahi lagayi aaj?

Priya: smiles and says.. woh.. tedhi lagne par.. seedha kaarne ke liye aap jo nahi the... isliye lagana chod diya...

 

Tere bina zindagi se koi, shikwa nahin (shikwa nahin, shikwa nahin)

Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi to nahin (zindagi nahin, zindagi nahin)

 

Priya: aap ne ohir se... suit.. pehna.. woh bhi black...

Ram; haan woh... casuals me dekhne waala koi nahi tha toh phir pehenta bhi kis ke liye...

 

Tum jo kah do to, aaj ki raat, chaand doobega nahin

Raat ko rok lo

Raat ki baat hai, aur zindagi baaki to nahin

Tere bina zindagi se koi ...

 

Ram: yaad hai... hum aise hi.. samandar kinaare tare gin ne gaye the..

Priya: haan...

Ram: main roz.. samandar kinaare jaata tha... tumhe taara ke roop me dhundne... lekin.. kabhi mili hi nahi... aaj samajh aaya kisliye...

Priya: ram.. and hugs...

Tere bina zindagi se koi, shikwa nahin (shikwa nahin, shikwa nahin)

Tere bina zindagi bhi lekin zindagi to nahin (zindagi nahin, zindagi nahin)

 

Priya: ab aage kya hoga ram?

Ram: wahi jo upar waala chahta hai... lekin main sirf ek baat jaanta hoon.. ke i love you...

Priya: i love you too...

Ram chale...

Priya: kaha?

Ram: peehu ko batana hai.. ke main uska papa...

Priya: lekin..

Ram: koi lekin wekin nahi... uska haq hai.. priya ye jaan ne ka ke main uska... uska...with tears in his eyes ke main uska golu uncle nahi.. balki.. papa hoon...

Priya: smiles with tears in her eyes... wipes rams tears and says... nahi... golu papa nahi.. golu angel.. hai...

The end...

lucky

Edited by Lucky_2012 - 2012-08-17T11:53:41Z
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Posted: 2012-08-17T11:58:26Z
sooo sweeet Smileyaar just love to read it...great job...Clap
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Posted: 2012-08-17T12:16:04Z
Awesomeee yaarr... You r the best... Just loved it...it eas so emotional yaar... Just loved the OS... Thanks a lottt...
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Posted: 2012-08-17T12:59:12Z
soo sweet.. Their convo is awesome.. N loved the way of ur reunion trick.. No drama at all.. Want same way in the show as well

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Posted: 2012-08-17T14:13:36Z
awesome lucky loved it so simple way of love no drama at all so gud yaar i wish u could conttinue this OS if u can...
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Posted: 2012-08-17T14:20:36Z
so sweet conv of raya written beautifully
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Posted: 2012-08-17T14:51:12Z
sweet, simple and lovely. A treat to read
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Posted: 2012-08-17T14:55:20Z
So sweet OS yaar... loved this scene...it was sweet n straight to the point..
i really liked it ClapClapClap
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