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Posted: 13 years ago
pehle priya ram k wait k rahi thi ab ram priya k wait kr raha he
wo bhi 5 yrs se bahut wait kr wa diya inko jaldi mila dena ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
continue ASP๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
ANANYA DII...
i love your update... thanks for the pm

HOW RAM AND PRIYA CAN SEPARATE because of that PIYA..

please reunite them...
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago

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When Ram was about to close the diary .. a little Boy came running To Ram ... He gave Ram a paper...

Ram : arrey ?? yeh kya hain???

But the Boy didnt answer and Ran away...

Ram opened that paper...

'agar Pyar ko paana chahate ho.. tO pyaar ko haat se Jaane Mat do...'

After reading the letter Ram Looked here and there... He saw a known face...

The person came near to Him...

Pyar ko hasil karna hain to ... Bhagumal Choksi sham 6 baje...

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Ram was about to enter the wedding place when he saw Siddhant weds... Priya ???????

Rajat : haan ... Do ghante mein Priya ki shadhi hain.. Ho sake To Roklo... Chhinlo ya fir hasil karlo...Pata hain kyun , kYun ki aaj bhi wo tumse aur sirf tumse Pyaar karti hain... I dont knw why !!!

Ram smiled

Rajat : tumhe hasi aarahi hain ???

Ram : haan apni kismaat mein...

Rajat :i guess iske baad tumhe rona na pare... hasna bad mein jab Priya tumhe mil jaaye...

Ram : Priya to meri hi hain ...

Rajat : Realy ??? To Thik hain ..Go Get her...

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Lets Come to a Room ... Priya was dressing Up ... She was sitting on a tool... With a nice Red shadhi ka Jora.. their was a beautiful mangtika which she wore when Ram gently opened the door...without any sight of priya .. She was in front of the mirror... she was just about to fix the big red bindi, when she saw a Reflexion..a drop of tear made its way down from the glossy tear studed red eye...while a tear greeted Ram , Ram's relief smile Greeted priya...

Khubsurat lag rahi ho...

Priya : Aaap yaha ??????

Ram : naayi zindagi shuru karne jaa rahi ho ..To aagayaa...

Priya : aapko kaise paata ??

Ram : destiny...

Priya smiled : HWz she ???

Ram : kaun ??? piya ??

Priya : yaaa...

Ram : pata nahin !!

Priya : matlub??

Ram: matlub yeh ...ki tumhe jail hone wala hain...

Priya : kya ????

Ram : haan... Tumhaari ek paati hain firbhi kisi aurse shadh kar rahi ho... agar meine case kar dia to ???????

Priya : mazak kar rahe hain ???? aapne shadhi nahin ki piya se ???

Ram : pyar karta hi nahin tha usse...

Now priya turned to Ram from the mirror...

Ram : shocked ?? stunned ?? gussa ?? ya khush... ???

Priya : aapne in paanch saalo mein shadhi nahin ki ???

Ram : no !!!??

Priya : But Whyyy ??? U loved Piii...

(Ram interupted ) : i Love Priya !!! Priya looked at Ram with a tearfilled eyes ...Ram : Only Priya ... My bst frnd , my wife and my love...

Priya : bohot derr ho chuki hain Ram... aaj meri shadhi hain...mein aapni parivar ki izzat ucchal nahin sakti...

Ram : Meine kahan roka hain??? I just wanted to say that I love you ...mein jaanta hun ki tum yeh shadhi karogi.. Trust me I'll not stop you...

Priya's eyes again went to Ram...

Ram :But jaane se pahele... (ram came closer to priya ... he smiled and said... '' shadhi ki baad hopefully bindi lagana sikh jaaogi '' (and he fixed the bindi...)

*********************************************************************Mangalam vagwan vishnu...

The Bride came in that Red jora ,,, she came downstairs ,, Her eyes fell on his Groom with a brownish sherwani , and the flower mukut Covering his face...But her eyes were finding..Ram and just only Ram..

Time passed ... with all mantras raising heights ...

The seven rounds were over, it overed wearing mangalsutra and sindur...

she kept her eyes closed...

Suddenly rain started to fall... and Priya's mind went to Ram's words..Yahi barish ..Yahi ishaar aur sirf tum aur wo... yeh baat kitni jhut thi... acahnak she heard from a known and lovable voice...

I love u...

she opened her eyes and in a sudden instinct she slightly removed the flower petals gurading his grooms face...

The story thus ended with a sweet smile...

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice i feel this is gonna happen in BALH i donno y

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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic but end this was the last part y????๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 13 years ago
absolutely amazing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for writting such beautiful FF love whole parts all r so gud loved endong too... u rocked in the whole story... waiting for ur next hope will up soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Its just awesome...but is it end over here ...
let me knw this..still waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Its just awesome...but is it end over here ...
let me knw this..still waiting for next part


yup i ended it wth priya's swt smile...

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