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Posted: 11 years ago
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pardon me for any mistakes
 

Dosti

 

Pyaara rishta hey yeh dosti,

rootthe hain manatey bhi,

kichayi bhi hain ladai bhi,

phir bhi gehra hai yeh dosti.

 

toothe nahi chahe jo ho jaye,

 kaayam saari duniya aise rishte par,

 bhale koi aur rishta na rahe,

 hamesha rehata hai dosti.

 

door ho ya pass,

 hamesha nazdeek hi rahte hai hum,

 kyunki dosti hai har rishte ki shuruaat.

 dukh main hasaye aur hassi mein rulayein,

 aise karte hain yeh dosti.

 

saare gum bulaate hain yeh dosti,

thakkaan mitatha hai than se,

 do baatein karne se,

 halka hai mann ka bhoj.

 

zindagi hai adhuri,

 agar na ho dost.

plzzz giv me ur comments

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow,it is such an awesome poem nadiaπŸ‘πŸ‘
loved loved loved it😍😍
do write moreπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nadia!! this was beautiful!! soo soo beautiful πŸ‘ you described dosti so well and honestly i am so happy and blessed to have a friend like u πŸ€—
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I loved your poem...😊 its too emotional... right now I am missing my besties too much


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loved ur poem it was awesome!!!
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Woah , Dis i naaice :D U descibed it soo well , Great job :)
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thanx 2 all who have commented...
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Awesome di...πŸ‘πŸΌ
loved your poem,,,,,
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thank u, luks like only some people liked it
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awesome poem nadia... πŸ€—