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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely chapter but too short 
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                     **note:sorry guys for the sort update..
                        actually i'm writing this from my cell phone
                        it takes a lot of time.its difficult for me to update
                        a long chapter.and i tried to pm you all but dont
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                        u all for the lovely comments**



                                                 chapter 2

at Dobrial house:
piya was putting lipgloss where misha was smiling to see her
Piya:mish..y r u smilling like an idiot.
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Misha:sweety sister r u really going to marry that boy...i mean u r looking killer dude..if u meet them like this...i'm afraid wo log abhi tujhe shadi ke mandap pe bitha degi..

Piya:shut up mish...i'm nervous..

misha:what Piya DOBRIAL...princess pd of our collage is nervouse..

Piya:donno y ...but yup i am..

Misha:sister dont tell me that u r really going to marry that guy..

Piya:dont know...i want to meet the guy at first..i wanaa see ye kon sa ladka hain jo iss time meh apni mom ki pasand ki ladki se shadi karna chahati hain..

Misha:mommy's boy..eww...but i'm thinking ke collage meh sab kya sochenge ..princess PD jiske liye ladke apna dill haat meh leke ghumte hain wo shadi karegi woh bhi arrange marriage

(both said togher) : ewww

Madhu caame to the room saw piya and misha r having fun togather..she smiled ..
Madhu:piya r u ready ??they can come any time

Piya:yes mom..just my hair left..

Madhu:misha ..what r u wearing...i told u to wear salwar kameez..didnt i??

Misha:but mom i hate it u know..

madhu:i dont know anything..go and change it.

Piya:u know what mom??misha is wearing this dress from two days..u didnt notice it na...

Madhu(shocked):what???first go to bath..and then wear the dress i gave u..just go

MIsha(angry look to piya):ok ok...i'm going..

misha left the room..madhu came to piya and said

madhu:wow my daughter is looking so beautiful...

piya:thnx mom...

Madhu:let me braid ur hair...

Piya:ok...

madhu braided piya's hair...she was looking more beautifull..

In the car of Richands:
Abhay is talking to someone in the phone where Haseena is giving him dagger look...abhay cut the call..
Haseena:Give me ur phone abhay..

Abhay:what..but why..

Haseena:just give me..

Abhay gave his phone...haseena took it  and gave it to sid and said

Haseena:dont u dare to give this back to abhay..u understand sid..

sid:yes mom..dont worry

Abhay:mom  why r u doing this??

Haseena:no argument abhay...

they reached to the Dobrial house..Dobrials greeted them warmly..misha was standing and giving the information to Piya..

Misha:hey piya i saw the boy

Piya:really..how does he look??

Misha:not bad at all..he is carring a small boy...

Pya:what??

Misha:yes..and there is a fat woman beside him looks like his wife..

Piya:(hell shocked)what??kis ki baat kar rahihe tu???

Misha:oho sorry...i thing yeh ladke ka big brother hai..

Piya:thats say..

Misha:there is a hot woman..damn i thing she is ur would be sasuma..really hot haan..

Piya:shut up mish...have u seen the boy??

Misha:i think finally yes...hey he is hot but looks sadu..

Piya:sadu??

Misha:hmm..

Madhu came saw misha talking to someone ecaping in the kitchen..

Madhu:misha kisse baat kar rahi ho??

misha cut the phone ...

Misha:none mom..

Madhu:come wid me ...let me introduce u to them

madhu took misha wid her and introduced them as their elder daughter...(misha and piya r twin but doesnt look same)

then misha and madhu went to piya's room..where piya was looking very nervous..

Madhu:come beta...niche chalo hamare sath...

they took piya wid them and went to hall room...everyone was so glad to see piya...while abhay was insisting to sid to give his phone back...

piya sat infront of the sofa of abhay's..

they looked each other for the first time...they both said in mind:WOW :)



so guys here is the 2nd chap...do comment let me know how's it :)

 
Edited by ririrararaatry - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
lovely n awsm update ...do pm when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

nice update please add me on u r pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

sounds interesting plz continue and ya pm me whenever u continue

by d way wats ur name ????


thnx...btw my name is raatry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
very nice..waiting 4 abhiya movements,.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Nice update Ratri i wanna read more soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
awsome just loved it๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Nice update
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for abhiya to MomentS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Update!
Continue soon๐Ÿ˜ณ
Thanks for the pm๐Ÿ˜ƒ