KD-Kiya OS - Streetlight - Page 3

woww..that was so very nice..!! Everything was described so beautifully, I could actually imagine all those stuffs..!! You are an amazing writer..!! Just wishing something like this actually happens in the show..!! Ahhh...love KiSha... and KD..😳 Edited by muzzy_sk - 11 years ago

Send me a pm when u write again.Thanx for dis tym.

Awesome os
I really loved kisha n the fact u kept it was just an hour being each other nothing more than that.. just typical kisha's type
Loved it

it was beautiful...you actually potrayed kiya as your typical rebel teenager who doesn't want to face anyone...and kd as somebody who comes to her rescue...really long eulogies of love needed...I just loved your OS!😃

Wow what an OS. I was expecting something much more tragic but thank GOD it was not. First thanks for the PM. I myself had started to like KD and Kiya and its really good to see some of my favourite authors writing on them.

Now coming to the OS. It was magical. An hour of their life which was avoid of any preconcieved notion, prejudice and ego clashes. An hour where they could be just Keshav and Kiya not KD and Kiya Gujral sister of ANYA GUJRAL. I liked that you didn't made them do much talking or having some change in heart. It really helped it to keep it realistic. It was nice reading their POV's where both were contemplating about that evening. It was beautifully penned.

This OS was just amazing stuff. Looking for more of your work on these two too..

Originally posted by: DamonCrazy_D3

WOW...simply wow.One hr of understanding, of being civil to each other...

Beautifully put forwards.

Originally posted by: KiSha_4ever

ONE WORD- AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

U R AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Originally posted by: neetha

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hey pree i hav read many of ur SwaRon works n undoubtedly u r a tragedy queen coz u always killed either of them..😆.but this one was beautiful.😳.loved the way u penned it..👏no much of conversations but yet it had the essence of feelings n emotions.❤️.loved it..do pm me the next time u write on KD n Kiya..i love them too😃

p.s sorry fr editin it late😛

Originally posted by: basket_101

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Firstly, Hey!!!

I'm Hinal 😃

This OS was perfect, at least to me!

I loved KD and Kiya's interaction in it!  You stayed very true to their characters!

It wasn't too over-the-top, nor was it under-estimated!

I loved how KD went through the pain to actually drop Kiya to her home, even though he knew that it would mean that he would need to take the ferry from there at night

It was veryy well written, I must say!

Absolutely loved it! 😃

Awesome job!

And thanks a lot for the pm too!  Appreciate it 😳

Ohhh.. and also, before I forget, I just loooved the welcome and thank you notes too 😃

Sooo cuteee 😍

Lovedd it!

Do pm me if you do write anything else! (=

Thanks in advance 😉

Take care!

Originally posted by: -Antu-_-Aslan-

I just loved da way u write👏.So simple,yet so meaningful!😊

Plz pm me from now on,whenever u update.😳