MANVEER FF : The journey of a wife... (Book 1) - Page 24

Malangan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

hey navina !!

Nice update
A new beginning
Aww UV is so scared of loosing her or being rejected by her...
Manyata hmm is all lovey dovey

Ahh ahh jay ..
Promo is ermm a little misleading

Cont soon :)

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anushruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

lovely update navina

well written part

loved de cute UV-M moments

and tat part abt Seema bein Yuvranisa's dowry was😆

ughh J

thankgod M didnt take her help

J and her idiotic plans

i hope J didnt sleep wid UV

i dont knw y but it seemed 2 me tat UV -M

slept 2gethr and J was calling M those names

and M gave her a reply saying tat she is his wife

i hope tats de case

thanks 4 de PM

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hmmmm dude i forgot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

it was really good

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: mahi0809
Fab fab update Navina!
Loved it to bits!... great job!... Update more soon!

I just hope its Uday and Manyata who end up doing IT again and not Jay and Uday...somehow I believe that whenever Jay tries to separate M and U she ends up bringing them closer😆

Thanx Mahi 4 so many compliments. 😃

I hope u are right...

because Jai & Uday is just 😡.

Yep...Jai is our Cupid...

right from the show to our ss's & ff's...

THANK U 4 COMMENTING.

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: rubaarana
Superb update Navina👍🏼
Really liked the scared UV and UV-M scenes😳
Precap is really frightening but I know you wont let this happen😉
Thanx for the pm dear and waiting for the next🤗

Thank you!

I tried to keep it as realistic as possible...Glad u liked it.

Yeah, it was scary...Thanx 4 the vote of confidence!

Welcome...I'm also eager 4 the next part😆

THANX 4 COMMENTING!

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

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@aliya666

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THANK YOU!!!

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snowdream

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

hey navi whn will u update next part...anxiously waiting $ it...

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: lilybabes
lovely update navina
well written part

loved de cute UV-M moments

and tat part abt Seema bein Yuvranisa's dowry was😆

ughh J

thankgod M didnt take her help

J and her idiotic plans

i hope J didnt sleep wid UV

i dont knw y but it seemed 2 me tat UV -M

slept 2gethr and J was calling M those names

and M gave her a reply saying tat she is his wife

i hope tats de case

thanks 4 de PM

Thank u.

They are so cute, that everything about them becomes CUTE!

Glad u liked my joke.

AWWW...doesn't look like you like Jai😭

I also hope J doesn't sleep with Uday.

...Nice prediction!

I hope you're right.

Welcome...

THANX 4 COMMENTING!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

WOW WOW WOW WOW...
AMAZING SS DEAR...JUST HAVE NO WORDS TO EXPLAIN HOW WONDERFULL IT IS...
THE WAY U HAVE EXPRESSED EVERY FEELING IS SOO AMAZING EVERYTHING SEEMS TO BE PLAYING IN FRONT OF ME...AND THE MANVEER ROMANCE WAS TOO CUTE THE WAY MANYATA EXPRESSED HER LOVE... :) AND I LOVED WHAT SHE GIFTED UDAY ON HIS BIRTHDAY... :D

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NAVINA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: sweetshab
hey navina !!

Nice update
A new beginning
Aww UV is so scared of loosing her or being rejected by her...
Manyata hmm is all lovey dovey

Ahh ahh jay ..
Promo is ermm a little misleading

Cont soon :)

Hi Dear!!!

Thank u.

Yes...it is!

Uday can't believe that he now has Manyata's love & there will be no more rejection from her side...It's high-time that Manyata shows Uday some love...DON'T U THINK?

Promo...is exactly as it's written...it depends on how U read it!!!

Will continue as soon as I'm well!!!

Originally posted by: zinayrules
WOW WOW WOW WOW...
AMAZING SS DEAR...JUST HAVE NO WORDS TO EXPLAIN HOW WONDERFULL IT IS...
THE WAY U HAVE EXPRESSED EVERY FEELING IS SOO AMAZING EVERYTHING SEEMS TO BE PLAYING IN FRONT OF ME...AND THE MANVEER ROMANCE WAS TOO CUTE THE WAY MANYATA EXPRESSED HER LOVE... :) AND I LOVED WHAT SHE GIFTED UDAY ON HIS BIRTHDAY... :D

Thank you so much ZAINAB.

U are most generous with your compliments & I appreciate it!

Glad u find their romance cute...I did my utmost to keep it that way.

Giving Uday the perfect gift was always gonna be difficult. It had to be special, unique & basically PERFECT for him...so, IT HAD TO BE MANYATA, HERSELF!!!

THANK U 4 COMMENTING...

SO SORRY FOR THE LATE REPLY!

Originally posted by: snowdream
hey navi whn will u update next part...anxiously waiting $ it...

Hi KRISHNA...

I was supposed to update Monday, but now I think it'll be Wednesday...

(hopefully...I'll be well by then)

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