LOVE IS BEAUTIFULL pt 18 END pg 68 aug 7 - Page 27

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poo_j thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Loved it di..😊 Shaan never leaves any chance of kissing his wife Khanak..😉😳

Looking forward and thanks for writing a supercute update..di..😊


P.S: Wow!!! You went to all those place..Cool!!! I too went to all those place in childhood..I want to go to Thiruchendur Murugar Temple!!!😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely part Nikki
shaan never misses taking his kisses
shaan hate onions smell n khanak ate to make him away so he cant kiss her heheh
awaiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi friends...thanks a lot for ur comments...thank u so much guys...thanks for hitting like button...thank u so much for liking the story...


pt  14

khanak was taking a tray with sweets to the hall...

riya : thanks bhabhi...(smiled at khanak)

(riya is relative daughter of khandelwal...)

shaan : hey ri...

riya : hi bhaiya...

shaan : wat a surprise...

riya : for interview bhaiya...

shaan : oh..which company...

riya : XXX...

shaan : u can join in our company na...wat say bhaiya...

akshay : ha ma...u can...

riya : no bhaiya...even papa and sanjay bhaiya  want me to join in his company...

but i want to join on my own...

shaan : ummm...okay...so now...

riya : ha...final interview bhaiya...

shaan : oh all the best ri...

(khanak was just sitting with them and just hearing the conversation...)

riya : umm thanks bhaiya(little low)

akshay : hey wat happened ma...

riya : i am really tensed...

shaan : wat u r tensed...cont believe...(laughed)

riya : bhaiya...

akshay : shaan...dont worry ma it will be easy only...

shaan : ha ri...it will be easy ...uhhh...okay we will show u some sample...bhaiya...

akshay : ummm...riya shaan is coming for interview okay...i am going to ask him questions...

riya : wow...(she became excited...)

(riya was sitting with khanak and khusbhoo..kids were gone with madhavi)

akshay and shaan sitting face to face...after some formal questions...

akshay : dont turn around wat is the color of the wall at ur back...

shaan : it is same as this side...

akshay : suppose u have already worked u r leaving from that office...

wat will ur previous manager will feel when u leave that job...does he feel happy r sad...

riya first u answer this...

riya : ha..i will say he would be sad...because he will be loosing a good employee...

akshay : okay now shaan...

shaan : he will feel happy...

riya : wat..bhaiya..they will reject u na...

akshay : why he will feel happy...

(everyone r looking at shaans answer)

shaan : he will be happy because his job will become permanent..his position  will be secured..

he will not loose his job...

khanak : wow...khanak started to clap...

others to joined to clap their hands...

shaan was just seeing his wife she was smiling and clapping her hands ...

wow wow superb...(they heard a voice...)

everyone was sileneced and looked at the entrance...

khanaks smile was vanished...

shaan has gone to entrance and he was hugging a girl who was in her

short mini skirt and tops...

shaan : hi tina...wat a surprise...come in...

tina was holding shaans arms and walking inside on seeing that khanak

felt a pain in her heart...

riya : hi tina di...

tina : hi ri...

khanak was thinking who was she...shaan has never told about her ...

others know her...alll were talking to her who is she...

riya : bhabhi..its getting late i will see u tomorrow...

riya bid bye to everyone and went...while khanak was sending   of riya she felt

something is perising at her back...she turned around and saw

it was tina who was looking at her...

shaan : hey tina meet my wife khanak...

tina : hi khanak...

khanak : hi..(small smile)

tina : again entered into my life...whispered..

khanak looked at her confused...

tina : hey shaan ur wife looking beautifulll...i am his dads friend daughter...

khanak : oh...

khusbhoo : how was ur forieghn trip tina...

tina : wow it was nice...

khusbhoo : i thought u would come for shaans marriage...

tina : when i got  the message...here everything was over...

khanak looked at tina..her voice and eyes told somethingelse...

she did not know wat...khanak felt sad on seeing them...

tina was standing veryclose to shaan and whispering something in his ears..

and shaan also laughing...she scolded him to in her heart for standing

so close with tina...she thought before an hour

she was happy on talking with riya and the way

shaan answered questions now her total happyness went ...

khanak  finally concluded i dont like this tina...




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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update niki...
loved it...
Lol tina in between shanak...khanak already started to hate her...

cant wait for the next update...

update soon dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow niki awesome again
wow shan's answer was damn good and khanak's instant reaction was superb 😉
i too feel tina is good for nothing lets c 
update soon :)))
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful Update Dear 👏 👏 👏 

Shanak enjoying Family time & Riya is nice too. I loved little Bro sis bond over here. 😊 she has come for interview. Loved mock interview session & Shaan's answer 👏 👏 new Entry Tina. Seems she knows everything about Shanak start from their very first meeting in collage days as her sentence of entering in life again alarmed her senses. but I agree she is clinging more than needed to Shaan chipku kahi ki 😛 Khanak hates her already & if it is a plan of Shaan & tina to make khanak jealous. than its working totally. Will be exciting to see our tigress in jealous avtaar 😉

Waiting for next ...Continue soon

Love
Pranjal.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Interesting!!!😊 Riya is Shaan's sister..😆 Too cool!!!😉 Who is this Tina???😡 Btw loved Shaan's answer for manager question..😊

Looking forward and thanks for writing a superb update di..😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice one Nikki
Khanak is Jealous of Tina
waiting to see wat more khanak will feel
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Posted: 11 years ago
Niki nice update
Khanak hates tina. Loving to see jealous Khanak

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hi friends...thanks a lot for ur loving comments and thanks for hitting like button...thank u so much guys...thanks u so much guys...


pt  15


it was evening kids were sitting in the hall and drinking milk...

khanak and khusbhoo were sitting with them...

shaan entered along with tina...on seeing them together khanaks

face became frowned...shaan was laughing when tina said something in his ears...

ansh : papa...went and hugged shaan...

shaan : hey buddy...carried him in his arms...

khanaks face lightened up and she saw tina...here face was expressionless...

ansh : papa u told me today u will take me and mumma to mall na...

shaan : ha...we will g...

tina : shaan one minute...

tina whispered something into shaans ears...

shaan :oh...uhh ansh papas having work now i will take u tomorrow...

on hearing that khanak became sad...

ansh : papa...(little frowned)

khusbhoo : ansh we will go...tarun and varun r coming ...

ansh : oh s...ss...

tina : shaan shall we...

shaan : ya sure...

shaan and tina got up and walked towards the door...tina was holding shaans hand and walking..

on seeing that...khanak became angry...she fumed a lot...

khanak was sitting alone in the room since ansh has gone with khusbhoo...

khanak thought ...how come..he went with her...he told ansh that

he will take out...more than kid what big work...damn...that tina...idiot...

she thinks herself as very beautifull...she is like a dressed up broom ...

this shantanu smiling and laughing watever she says...

shit...stop thinking about them...okay let me go to halll mom should have come...

she came to the hall she saw madhavi came inside...

khanak : mom ...

madhavi : beta here temple prasad...khanak got it...

madhavi : where is everyone...

khanak : kids gone with bhabhi...shantanu is gone with with tina...

madhavi : oh...then kids will eat and come...khanak call shaan

and ask whether he is coming for dinner r eating out...

khanak was shocked for a minute...wat i want to call him...

madhavi : khanak call him...she walked to dinning table to drink water...

khanak took landline phone and dailled his number(she rembered on that day

she saved in her cell she saved in heart to...)

ring did not go it said switched off...khanak face frowned...

wat switched off where did he go...why he switched off it...

she was standing there holding the phone...

meanwhile madhavi came there...

madhavi : did u called him...

khanak : uhh...mo9m its switched off...

madhavi : try his another cell...

khanak looked at her confused...he has another cell...

madhavi : u dont know his another number...

khanak just shook her head in no...

madhavi : oh..okay i will tell u...number is...x...x...

khanak started to dail but was stopped in the middle...

khanak thought wat this ...this ...number ...omg...missed call number...

madhavi : khanak...khanak...

khanak : oh sorry mom...tell me again...

she started to dail it mean while khanaks cell rang ...madhavi got the phone khanak

went to get her cell which she placed in her room...

it was her mom she talked for sometime then she was sitting in the bed and

she thought damn he was the one who was giving me missed calls damn...

how dare he...wat does he think in his mind...is he gone mad...

he gave missed calls often that to untimes...

she took her cell she started to type a message...

hello mr missed call...my heart says u should

be a young good looking handsome guy...

i think u have known me...now i am also eager

in meeting u...i want to start a new life witrh u mr missed call...  :-)

she send the message...

she kept the phone and she went down to the hall...

later first kids gang came home first...then later only shaan and tina entered...

khanak was sitting along with the kids...she looked up and saw shaans face...

his was also looking at her only but in a confused and questioning look...

shaan sat in the sofa and looked at her ...khanak felt happy...

khanak : hi tina did u enjoyed ur dinner...(smile)

tina : ha very much ...(sitting near shaan)

khanak : oh..do u want milk...(smile)

tina : no...i am full...

khanak : uhh...do u want shantanu...(smile)

shaan : uhh...just looked at her...

khanak : shantanu...

shaan : uhh...

khanak : milk...(smile)

shaan : ummm...

tina : shaan look this..

tina started to show her cell ...khanak just glared at them and went inside kitchen..

khanak poured some hot milk in a glass...she was about to put sugar...

she stopped and she took salt and she added it...

she mixed it well and she took it to shaan...with a smile she extended

the tray...he took it but he looked at her very confusingly...

he was having the glass and he thought ...wat happened to her...

does she know that cell number is mine...no..it cont be...

she does not know it...but her message...and now she is all smile...

wat happened to her...he looked at her...she was also looking at her...

he drank a sip of milk...he coughed...

he thought damn she added salt...he glared at her...

tina : shaan ...wat happened...

khanak glared at tina...

shaan : oh nothing little bit hot...

he looked at khanak and started to drink it  by sip...each sip his facial expression changed...

on seeing that khanak felt sad...he could not drink but he tried to...

ansh : papa this is new chocolate i bought in mall...

shaan placed the glass in table nad took a piece of chocolate...

tina cell rang she walked towards guest room...

khanak came and took the glass and went to kitchen...

still half glass milk was there...she slowly took a sip...

she started to cough...

khanak : omg...how he drank half glass...

she started to pour the remaining in to washbasin...

khanak : shhh..its salty...i have to eat chocolate..she turned around and she was shocked...

shaan was standing there...khanak walked to the fridge...but she was pulled by him...

shaan : why so fast to fridge...

khanak : leave me i want to eat chocolate...

shaan : oh chocolate...try this...ansh brought...he showed her the chocolate...

she was about to get it...shaan put it in his mouth...

khanak looked at him in shock...

shaan : u want it take it...(slowly chewing)

khanak : ahh...

khanak thought omg he wants me to...oh no...before she could react shaan

has kissed her ...with in seconds shaan lifted his face...

he saw her with a smile..she was eating the remaining chocolate that was from shaans mouth...

shaan quickly moved out...khanak was standing there in shock...

khanak thought damn ..i always loose to him...shit...i think of one..but it happens other way...