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Posted: 11 years ago
part 14

awesome update Priya... loved all teasing n lactures by married person's to getting marry persons... lol but i enjoyed the whole update... yaar it's awesome... n what is RaYa up too??? something fishy llet's go to read next will get to know soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 15

woowo that was all awesome idea's lol... Ram's family is mind bllowing ek se ek namune hai yaahn... so RaYa married on contract marrige for 6 month but i guess G months me sab change ho jayega lol... but i love the HM idea alos i guess this will be the first step of them for thier marrige to take ahead... yaar if possible show talli Priya missing her badly... n waiting for next update awesome...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: leena04

part 15

woowo that was all awesome idea's lol... Ram's family is mind bllowing ek se ek namune hai yaahn... so RaYa married on contract marrige for 6 month but i guess G months me sab change ho jayega lol... but i love the HM idea alos i guess this will be the first step of them for thier marrige to take ahead... yaar if possible show talli Priya missing her badly... n waiting for next update awesome...



Hey Leena Dii...

GLAD U LIKE IT... I GUESS A LOT WILL HAPPEN IN THOSE 6 MONTHS...

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Posted: 11 years ago
PART 16

The scene begins in with KK and AK... Amarnath was sitting on the couch with a newspaper in hand.. KK stood with folded hands in front of the huge ganpati idol in her room.. Eyes closed.. Murmuring something...
AK: Insaan me icchaon ki kami nahi hoti.. Ek iccha poori hui toh dusri mangna shuru...
KKs concentration was broken and she turned to her husband.. With a sulky face she came up and sat near him..
KK: Insaan sirf mangne ke liye nahi.. Iccha poori hone par shukriya kehne k lie bhi prarthna karta hai... Ab dekhiye na... Ishwar ki krupa nhi hoti toh kya hume priya jaisi bahu mil paati... Nahi na... Toh..
AK: Arre lekib issme apne Ram ka bhi toh haath hai..
KK: Uss gadhe ka kya haath hai... 63 ladkiyon ko nakara hai uss ne..
AK: Haan toh issi baat ka credit de do usse... Agar wo 63 ladkityon ko nhi naakarta toh hume priya jaisi acchi bahu thode hi milti...
KK: Aap bhi na... Aap se baat karna hi bekaar h.. Samne wala khud bhool jayega woh kiske paksh me thha...
AK: Arre paksh ki baat hi nahi hai... Dekho.. Mera maan na hai ki ek safal shaadi wohi hai jisme dono pati qlaur patni barabar ke saathi ho.. Au wo shaadi hi tik sakta hai jisme pati patni saath milkar aage badhe.. Ab humare golu ko bhi ye sab samaj aa jayega...
KK: Hmm.. Sahi kaha...

In Rams chacha chachis room... Cha & chi ill call them.. Poora type karne pakta hai..
Cha: Arre yaar... Kya kar rhi ho Prema.. Idhar aao na..
chi: aayi.. Ek min..
She came & sat next to him on the bed..
Chi: kahiye... Kya hua..
Cha: mai soch rha thha Ram aur Priya kya kar rahe honge iss waqt!!
Chi: Hawww... Kya aap bhi...
Cha: Tumhe humare din yaad hai..
Chi: Hmmm...
Cha: Kaise mai cycle chalake tumhare ghar ke chakkar kaat ta thha...
Chi: Ekdum pasine me dooba hua...
Cha: Aur merii nazar dhundte hua.. Prema kidr h.. Prema kidr h...
Chi: Aur wo shadi ke ek din pehle yaad hai aapne kya kia thha...
Cha: Arre of course... Putle ki tarah aakar tumhare terrace pe khada ho gya thha... Aur tum darr ke maare bodyguard ko le aayi thhi mujhe marne..
Chi: Sab pata hai mujhe kitna chidate thhe...
Cha: Accha... Par suno na.. Kitna accha hota agar uss zamane me bhi mobile vagera hota.. Mai tumhe msg karta.. Mai aa rha hu... Aur tum mere lie tayyar khadi rehti...
Chi: Haan... Apne saiyyan ke intezaar me...
Cha: Accha batao na.. Humare suhaagraat pe kya hua thha...
Chi: Aiyya... Yaad nhi.. And she blushed...
Cha: Batao na...
Chachi blushed further and went off to sleep pulling the duvet over her face...
Back to Ram & Priya...
RaYa were sitting on the bed facing each other... Ram Eating the papad they picked from the bed.. And priya with her apple...
Ram: Priya.. Ek baat puchu..
Priya: Hmm...
Ram: Tumhe ata hai ki humne contract marriage kia hai.. Matlab 6 mahine baad hum alag ho jayenge aur tum apne ghar wapas chali jaogi..
Priya: Of course.. Pata hai..
Ram: Toh phir tum itna royi kyu!!!
Priya: mai royi kyu.. Hmm.. Mai isiliye royi kyuki mere papa roo rahe thhe... Mai unhe dukhi nahi delh sakti.. Aur agar wo mere wajah se dukhi hai toh mujhse bilkul bardaasht nahi hota.. Aur mere sahdi ke mamle me yehi hoo raha thha... Mai har baar ladke nakarti thhi aur unhe dukh hota thha.. Pata hai roz subh uth ke mujhse kya bolte thhe.. Bolte thhe beta.. Beta shadi kar.. Mujhe sapne aate hai ki mai marne wala hu.. Shaadi kar le... Par unka bhi sahi thha bolo.. 71 ladke reject kiye hai maine...
Ram: Haan i underatand.. Maine nahi kya 63 ladkiyon ko reject kia... Pata hai.. Dadi toh har baar yamdoot ko khada kar deti thhi.. Haha...
Priya: Pata hai.. Maine papa ko kitni baar samjahya ki ye ghar sansar chalane wali types nhi hu mai.. Mera temprament hi nahi hai iss sab k lie...
Ram smirked.. Priya stared at him and cotinued..
Priya: Apart from that.. Wo boht akele hai.. Boht miss karte hai wo maa ko.. Kabhi kehte nahi hai.. But i know na.. Aise me agar mai apne ghar sansar me busy ho gayi toh unka dhyaan kon rakhega...
Ram: Sahi kaha...
And he started playing with the decorations... Priya smiled looking at him..
Priya: Ab ram.. Mai aapse ek baat puchu..
Ram: Haan haan... Bolo...
Priya: Aap ne.. Like.. Aapko shadi se kya problem hai.. Aap toh total complete family man types lagte hai mujhe.. U know.. Inn sabke baare me boht kuch jante hai aap..
Ram: Sirf pata hi hai yaar.. Matlab.. Ab itne bade se parivaar ka hissa hone par kisiko bhi ye saari baatrin pata hoti hai...
Priya: Ohhh...
Ram: But ek baat mujhe boht acche se pata hai.. I wanna go to the US.. Mai ek software engineer hu.. Mujhe apne calibre ka kaam karna hai.. And my thing is in the US... mujhe pata hai mai apni family ko ditch kar raha hu.. Dhokha de raha hu.. Par din me 10 -10 baar man hi man maafi bhi mangta hu sabse...
Priya: I understand Ram.. Sabke sapne hote hai... Aap ke bhi hai...
Ram: Ek baat batao.. Mai jab US jaunga tab bhi tum aise hi roogi?? Hmm.
Priya: Shee ram.. Mai rotlu nahi hu... Wo bas emotional hoti hu tab rona aata hai...
And their conversation took off.. They sat there teasing and mimicking each other... In sometime.. Ram changed into his tracks and tee.. Priya was in the changing room...
Ram: Arre yaar... Suhaagraat wale din naye dulhe ka laptop kyu chupate hai log.. Ye kya baat hui...
And he started looking for his laptop... And finally found it in his bookshelf.. He animatedly hugged his laptop amd sat with it on his beanbag next to the bed.. Priya came out of the changing room in her pyjamas and her saree neatly folded and kept on the hanger... She walked towards Ram..
Priya: Ram...
Ram: Kya hai... Mai kaam kar raha hu..
Priya: arre bas itna puchna thha ki yeh saari kaha rakhu..
Ram looked around the room & pointed to the chair.. Whan daal do... Maine dala hai wahaa...
Priya turned around and saw where ram was pointing... Rams kurta pyjama were lying on the chair as if they were thrown..
Priya: Thanks for the help...
She went back to the changing room and neatly hung up her saree.. She then came back to the room and picked up Rams thrown pyjamas...
Priya: Ram aap isse neatly nahi rakh sakte kya??
Ram: Arre neatly hi toh rakha hai.. Dekho.. Raat ko agar koi aa gaya tohh kya i kapde hanger se nikalte rahunga.. Rakho usse udar..
Priya kept it back in a huff... Se picked up her suitcase and sat on the bed..
Priya: ram mujhe raat me padne ki aadat hi.. Chalega naa..
Ram: Haan Haan.. Bas man hi man padna...mujhe kaam ke waqt shanti lagti hai...
Priya: Ok.. Sure...
She was scanning her suitcase for books... Suddenly there was a scream...
Ram: Yayyy.. Yayyy... Level 31 cross.. Yes...
Priya: Ram mujhe laga aap kaam kar rahe hai.. Aap game kyu khel rahe hai..
Ram: Dekho Priya.. Ek baat mai clear kar raha hu.. Mujhe pasand nahi koi agar mujhe baat baat pe bataye kya karna hai aur kya nahi... Mujhe pata hai.. Samjhi..
Priya: ok...
She went back to scanning her books... Picking up a book, she sighed...
Priya: Arre yaar... Kya padhu..
Ram looked up at her.. Arre wo jo motti si kitaab hai tumhate haath me.. Padlo...
Priya: Yeh... Ho gaya padke..
Ram: Toh lekar kyu aai ho??
Priya: Ye meri collection hai Ram...
Ram:Oh...
Priya: Lagta hai mere baki ke booke bahr wale suitcase ma hai.. Mai le aati hu..
She was walking to the door when Ram stopped her...
Priya: Ram mujhe bhi pasand nahi jab koi bolte rehta hai kya karna hai kya nahi... Mujhe pata hai..
Ram: Thik hai jao... Agar kisi ne pucha ke suhaagraat me tum pyjama pehne bahr kyu ghum rahi ho toh jawab khud dena...
Priya sat back looking bored...
Priya: Aap baat toh kar sakte ai mere sath..
Ram did not respond... Suddenly his phone beeped... He read the msg and typed... Saale chintu.. Kal baat karta hu...
Priya kept staring at him... Ram saw her and gave her the WHAT IS IT LOOK...
Priya: Aap apne chintu aur pintu ko msg kar sakte hai... Mujhse baat nahi kar sakte...
Ram shut his laptop and sat facing Priya... Bolo...
Priya: Its ok.. Waise bhi mujhe neend aa rahi hai...
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Part 16 continued...

She slowly moved back and was about to lie down on the bed when Ram shouted.. Ruko ..
Priya was startled and sat up..
Ram: Tum yahaan sone wali ho??
Priya: Haan aur kya??
Ram: Toh mai kahan sounga..
Priya: Yahaan pe kahin gaadi dalkar so jaiye.. Nahi toh couch pe..
Ram: Arre.. Kya zabardasti hai.. Ye gar mera.. Room mera.. Bed mera.. Pichle kahin saalon se mai yaahaan sota aaya hu... Ab tum aa gayi toh sab tume de du...
Priya: Haan toh... Mai aapke ghr me guest hu.. Aap mere ghar aaye hote toh mai bolti ki aap bed par so jaiye mai neeche soti hu...
Ram: Rehne do.. Shadi se pehle ek raat raha thha mai udhar.. Poori raat sofe pe soya thha hall me..
Priya: Par mai ladki hu ram...
Ram: Alllellle... Toh ... Arre tum har baat me equal ho na.. Toh...
Priya: Wo sab toh mai ab bhi bolungi.. Par jo kaam aap karne ko tayar nahi wo mai karu aisi apeksha hai aapki...
Ram: Haan...
Priya: Dekhiye Ram.. Ab mai hu isiliye aap jo jee me aya bolte jaa rahe hai... Meri jgh koi aur hoti toh app usse suhagraat k din bolte couch pe sone ko?? Nahi na... Toh fir..
And she was abt to sleep...
Ram: ek minute... Ha ha... Tumhari jgh koi aur ladki Hoti na toh ye naubat hi nahi aati... Kyuki agar tumhare jagah koi aur hoti na toh hum natak nahi kar rahe hote aur hum aadha suhaagraat mana chuke hote...
And suddenly it struck him what he was blabbering... both became silent.. Ram sat down on the bed his back towards Priya...
Ram: Yaar.. Ye serious problem hai... Shaadi ke baad ke compromises nahi chaiye isiliye humne shadi ki.. Ab hum b compromise hi kar rahe hai toh fayda kya...
Priya: Toh kya.. Shadi cancel... Aise bhi toh nahi bol sakte na ram.. Shadi toh ho chuka hai...
Ram: Meri galti hai.. Mujhe ye sab sochna chaiye thha..
Priya: Maine bhhi... Par sun na chahe toh hai ek solution mere paas...
Ram: bolo...
Priya: ek kaam karte hai.. Ek din aap bed pe soo jaiye.. Ek din mai...
Ram: Haan...ye accha hai... Chlalega..
Priya: Toh even days pe mai.. Odd days pe aap...
Ram: Haha... Na.. Even days pr mai odd days pe tum..
Priya: Ok..
Ram: Toh couch pe soo jao.. Aaj even day hai...
Saying so.. Ram laid down on the bed.. Priya picked up her phone and smirked...
Priya: Ram uthiye... Jake couch pe soo jaiye..
Ram: Ab no cheating haan.. Decide ho ga hai..
Priya: Exactly... 12 baj gaye hai.. Odd day start... My turn... Haha...
Ram got up in a huff.. Picked his pillow and threw it on the couch.. He then went into the changing room to get the duvet.. Meanwhile Priya increased the AC temprature.. Ram came out and snatched the rwmote from her...
Priya: Temprature kam mat kijiye na.. Mujhe neend nahi aati thand me..
Ram: Mujhe garami me neend nahi aati..
Priya: Toh kya ab hum ek din low aur ek fin high me rakhenge?
Ram: Haan aur aaj low hoga...

In a few minutes, as soon as they were able to catch some sleep.. Priyas phone beeped..
Ram: Kya yaar.. Kaise contacts h tumhare.. Suhaagraat m aadhi raat ko msg karte h tumhe...
Priya read the msgand made a face of disgust...
Priya: Aise log ko na police m report karna chaiye... Kisi b anjaan ladki ko aadhi raat me nv msg bhejte hai.. Upar se dekho.. Naam b likha hai... CHINTAN KALRA...
Ram: Dikhao...
Priya gave him the phone... He read the msg and smirked... Ye chintu b na..
Priya: Kaun... Chintu... Matlab te aap ka dost hai... Issne mere phn pe msg kyu kia h?
Ram: Mera phn bandh h na.. Isiliye..
Priya: Aur uss janab ke paas mera no aaya kaha se..
Ram: Maine dia.. Sorry...
Priya gave him a small lecture on that...
Priya: Ab jo ho gya wo jane dijiye.. Uss chintu ko bol dijiye ki mere phn pe aage semsg na bheje...
Ram was just abt to sleep when..
Priya: Aap kharrate nahi lete na.. Please.. Ab utna toh kasht mat dijiye..
Ram made a sad innocemt face and slept.. Priya went off to sleep too...

In a few hours.. Ram woke up to some disturbance...
Ram: Priya... Priya utho... Priya... Aye..
Priya who was still in sleep...
Papa... Kya hai.. Kyu jaga rahe h raat me..
Ram: Mai papa.nahi ram.hu..
Priya: Papa Ram aaye h kya.. Mujhe unki awaz kyu sunai de rhi h..
Ram: Mai ram hi hu.. Humari shadi ho gayi hai.. Tum mer ghr me ho.. Aur tum mere sarh mere bed par ho...
And that made priya wake up witha start..
Priya: Ram aap yahaan.. Papa kahaan hai.. Aap kab aaye..
Ram: Arr yaar.. Aas paas dekho.. Tum mere ghr m ho.. Shadi ho chuki hai...
Priya looke around the decorated room & then at her mangalsutra...
Priya: Toh yeh bolne k lie aap ne mujhe aadhi rat me jagaaya..
Ram: Tum kharaate le rhi ho..
Priya: Huh.. Kuch bhi...
Ram: Nxt time na record kar ke dikhaunga..
Priya: Sach me.. Papa bhi bolte hai.. Par ye roz nhi hota haan.. Jab boht thak jati hu na.. Tab hota hai... I promise... Aaj shayad boht thand h.. Isiliye. .
Ram gave her. Stare and put up the AC temprature...
Priya: Thanks Ram...

Soon both drifted off to sleep...

PRECAP:
WEDDING GIFT FROM THE FAMILY...
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Posted: 11 years ago
 
U WRITE REALLY WELL I LOVE RAYA CONV๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: viny_queen


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Thanks sweety... Love ua animation as always...
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Posted: 11 years ago
priya and kharate.. love it..  then ... when comes next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
that was too good๐Ÿ˜›
wedding gift from family๐Ÿ˜‰...hope its what i think it is๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 11 years ago
too gud yaar..n priya karate..lol..continue sooon