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tanu_arsha

@tanu_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Heya peeps...!

Ah me back to pakaofy u all with a new SS 😛

So ab baith ke mereko jhelo

Pehle hi bata rahi hun maine apni saari bhadaas is SS mein nikaali hai

Phir mat bolna ki ye itna sad aur cute scenes ka mix up kyun hai

i just luv dis style of writing

well according to d size of mah updates there can be 8-10 chapters in it 😆

ab jo love happens once padhte hain very well knew d size of my updates 😛 . . . 🤣

well prologue neeche hai

P.s. - continuation after d footloose finale

meko nahi pata kaun jeetega. just imagine ki weaklings jeet gaye 😳

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tanu_arsha

@tanu_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Prologue

*Rehersal hall*

vishakha - finally we won wohoo!

simmi - congrats guys

neha - neha soo happy finally we winning the competition

amar - haan yaal phinally bhe won!

bharat - haan lekin ye swayam kahan hai?

vicky - ye toh humein bhi nahi pata

rey - wait ill will call him.

rey tried to call him but everytym when he dials it comes to b busy

rey - ye busy kyun aa raha hai? taani tumhe kuch pata hai kya?

taani finally coming out of her dreamland - na..nahi toh

oh gosh bhai kyun kar rahe ho ye sab aap. please aisa mat karo unke liye please...

neha - what happening toh taani is?

taani - kuch nahi neha wo bas...

the peon entered the RH.

peon - aap sabko rdx sir ne apne cabin mein bulaaya hai (rdx joined d college again and is now d princi of d coll.)

all nodded and left for rdx's cabin

all - can we come in sir.

rdx - oh ya come in guys

all came in

rdx - congrats to weaklings. finally you all won.

weaklings - thanx sir (taani bhi 🤢 )

rdx - where's swayam?

taani - paata nahi sir. bhai just vanished after coming back to the college

rdx - ok. if u meet him tell him to come to my cabin. i want to talk about something important.

taani - ok sir.

all left the cabin.

*FE*

boy on phone - angel angel angel calm down! i remember my promise ok? im coming back. back to my home... back to newyork kkk???

girl - really? bro u d best. luv you

boy - luv u too. chal bye.

girl - bye.

*outside FE*

sharon was just passing through the corridor when she listened someone saying "luv u too". she was just rooted to her place. she very well knew who's voice was it and she felt her heart crushing into numerous small pieces...

she was shattered.

ab iska kya faaida sharon? he loves someone else. he dont love u anymore... he is over with u! for god's sake he moved on! leave it sharon u dont deserve it...specially after what u did to him!

she left that place crying

while the boy inside FE came out. he directly went to his home not even saying a single word to his friends who were asking him to stop...! He packed his stuff and left for NY

Phew. finally finished

aap logon ki expectations se zayaada bada de diya kya?

well yehi lagta hai mujhe

Do leave ur precious comments

As d title says broken hearts

bahut saare dil todne waali hun main

get ready for dat

P.s. sorry if it matches with someone's FF/SS/OS. no intention to copy 😳

please tell if u all want a CS

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tanu_arsha

@tanu_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 11 years ago

res

unres

yippie first one to comment

ek aur

mumma bachaao mujhe

iski stories padh-2 ke pak gayi hun main

aur pakaayegi toh ped se tut kar neeche gir jaaungi

specially with those chindi se updates

huh

achh-2 ghur mat prologue pe aati hun

yippie weaklings won!!!!!

kriya ne jo banaayi thi...jeetni toh thi hi 😉

ye taani kya soching

swayam aisa kya karne waala hai???

haye inna confusing

haaw dont tell me dat boy in FE is swayam

if it is like dis den im gonna kill u for sure

jaldi update kar

and itne dil todne mein tennu ki mazaa aave hai?

well bhadaas nikaalni hai?

nikaal

but meko achhe updates chaiiyein

sending d pms mera hi kaam hai rite?

bhejti hun ruk

p.s. - expectation se bada tha 😛
Edited by abhiyakreya - 11 years ago

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

its awesome start...loved it very much

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vaishali

@-Vaish-

IF-Stunnerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

looks ineteresting...

plz update soon...

do add me to pm list..

a lil prob with like tab

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

awesome prologue...waisa swayum college kyu chod raha hai??????angel kriya hi haina??? kya taani ko sab pata hai????weaklings won...dazzlers ko bhi jeetena chahiye...eagerly waiting 4 next part...

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

bang on...

another awesome story!!!!!

continue soon and pm me

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

amazing concept cant wait to read more

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tanu_arsha

@tanu_arsha

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

@ cutiepie -

samajh gayi na???

@ rhu - umm not its not kriya 🤔 ye toh koi aur hai 😈. swayam college kyun chod raha hai u will noe it soon 😳

@ deetha - thanx dear. will continue soon 😃

@ born2dance - arey unres toh kardo please 😳

@ luv_arsha - thanx

@ kriyaansh24 - sure dear 😃

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