Enchanted hearts SS SaLekh,ReeVan,VaNda,MaiHarsh,ReNeet

Posted: 4 months ago

Enchanted hearts Part 1

 Thank you  ingenuity_phoenix for the lovely cover pages.





I thank my friend ingenuity_phoenix for suggesting title for this SS. I dedicate this story to  ingenuity_phoenix who suggested me to take inspiration from the Malayalam movie Sufiyum Sujatayum for Shrenu’s track and Tu jhoothi main makkar for Adnan Jennifer’s track.

MY DEAR FRIEND TIFFANYVAYCHILINGUM HAD GIVEN  ME A LIST OF A FEW ACTORS TO CAST ONE OF THEM OPPOSITE JENNIFER IN THIS SS.BUT I WAS CONFUSED WHICH ACTOR TO BE CHOSEN.SO I THANK INGENUITY_PHOENIX FORSUGGESTING ADNAN KHAN OPPOSITE JENNIFER FOR THIS SS.I DEDICATE THIS STORYTO TIFFANYVAYCHILINGUM WHO WANTS ADNAN JENNIFER JODI.

VIVAAN-REEMA TRACK IS SLIGHTLY INSPIRED FROM THE PARALLEL TRACK OF TU JHOOTHI MAIN MAKKAR.



A wedding was going on.

The couple was Alekh and Sadhana.

Sadhana's sisters Genda and Reeva embraced her happily.

Reeva:We are so happy for you Sadhana di.

Genda:I am glad that you could marry the person you love unlike me.No one should have my fate.

They all felt sad for Genda.

Genda's husband Varun got hurt overhearing it.

Sadhana:Genda...you are talking as if I am deeply in love with Alekh.It's an arranged marriage.We have not even talked to each other.

Genda:But you were in a dream world after seeing his photograph.

Reeva:That's true.That shows that you are crazily in love with Alekh jeeju.

Sadhana blushed.




After reaching home,Varun talked to Genda.

Varun:I heard you talk to your sister that she is lucky to marry the person she loved unlike you.Does that mean you are unlucky to marry me?

Genda was silent.

Varun blasted at her:Then why did you marry me?You could have married your ex-lover.

Genda's eyes got filled up with tears.

Genda:I would not have married you if I had a choice.I was forced to marry you.

Varun felt sad and walked out of the room.He burst into tears.

Genda remembered her past moment.




Flash back...

Genda was walking on the road.A car passed by.Mud water got splashed at her.

Genda got irritated.

Genda:What a pathetic driver!

The car got stopped and a man came out of the car.

He:I am sorry.

Suddenly he noticed that she was completely drenched with dirty water.He burst into laughter.Genda got irritated.

Genda:Because of you,I am in this condition.But you are making fun of me?How dare you?

He:I am really sorry.Suddenly I lost my control and laughed.I won't repeat it.Again I am sorry.

Genda:You keep your 'sorry' with you.

Genda walked away angrily.He just smiled.




Present....

Sadhana entered the bedroom.

Alekh smiled at her.Sadhana blushed.

Alekh:Come...sit near me Sadhu.

Sadhana was surprised as he called her 'Sadhu'.

Sadhana:Sadhu?

Alekh:Ya...you did'nt like it?

Sadhana:I loved it.

Alekh:You look so cute that I felt like calling you by a cute nickname.

Sadhana blushed.

Alekh:Come near me.

Sadhana sat near him shyly.

Alekh:You tell me which toy you like.I have many toys.We will play with your favourite toys today.

Sadhana was stunned.

Sadhana:Playing with toys?Why?

Alekh:Maa said that if I get married I will get a friend to play with.Won't you play with me?

Sadhana was shocked and upset.She did not know how to react.

Sadhana thought:That means Alekh is mentally retarded.Such a big betrayal from his family.

Seeing Alekh's sad face she felt sad for him.

Sadhana:I will play with you.

Alekh became very happy.

They both played with toys.





Sadhana went near Alekh's mother Vasundara.

Sadhana:Mummiji,I want to talk to you.

Vasundara:I know what you want to tell me.You understood Alekh's condition.Right?

Sadhana:Yes.Why did you betray us?Why did you hide the truth from us?

Vasundara:Because if I had told you the truth,you would not have married him.The doctor said that a good wife can cure my son.That's why I wanted this wedding to happen.

Sadhana:But it's cheating.I cannot tolerate cheating.I am leaving.

Vasundara was shocked.

Vasundara:I can provide all kinds of comforts to you.If you leave,you will lose all your comforts.You are from a middle class family.I can even harm your parents and sisters.Don't forget that.

Sadhana got angry:You got me married to you mentally retarded son through cheating and now you are blackmailing me?You think I give value to a luxurious life?I want only a normal married life.If I don't get it,I don't need to stay here.

Vasundara:Then remember that your parents will be harmed.

Sadhana was shocked.

Vasudara walked away smirking.

Sadhana thought:I can't tell this to my family.They all are happy for me.If they know the truth,they will be shattered.




The frustrated Sadhana went to the nearby Shiv temple.

Sadhana:Hey Shivji....that evil woman has put me in a difficult situation.Please give me the strength to punish her.

She started doing thandav there.

She turned into a Naagin.

Sadhana:Vasundara....you threatened me that you will harm my family.I will not leave you.




A couple was having coffee together with a smile.They were Vivaan and Reema.

Their friend Puneet smiled at them.

Puneet:I am a break up consultant.I have helped many couples to break up.But I always look upto Vivaan and Reema as role models in love.They are a couple who does not need break up.




Vivaan went near Puneet.

Vivaan:Puneet...I need your help.

Puneet:Tell yaar.

Vivaan:Please help me to break up with Reema.

Puneet was shocked.

Puneet:What did you say?

Vivaan:You heard it right.I want to break up with Reema.

Puneet:But why?I considered you both as an ideal couple.You both love each other a lot.

Vivaan:But love is not enough for a relationship.

Puneet:But I can't do this break uo.

Vivaan:You are helping everyone else to break up.Then why can't you help your own friend?

Puneet:Because I break only the couples who don't love each other.

Vivaan:Please try to understand.Reema is too bubbly and childish for a serious guy like me.We are not a good match.

Puneet:Then why don't you directly break up with her?

Vivaan:Because I can't hurt her.She herself has to break up with me.

Puneet:You want a break up without hurting her.That means you love her.

Vivaan was silent.

Puneet:This break up is strange.Tell Reema that your parents won't give you the share of property.She may back out.

Vivaan:Good idea.




Vivaan met Reema.

Vivaan:Reema....my parents are giving all the properties to my sister.They are very partial towards her.If you live with me,you will suffer from poverty.So you can escape from my family.You can cancel this wedding.

Reema felt sad.

Reema looked at him emotionally.

Reema:Do you think that I value your property more than you?No Vivaan.I love you and not your property.

Vivaan looked at her emotionally in disbelief.

Reema:There is a dance party in the evening.Come for the party.Ok?

Vivaan nodded.

Reema:We will be staying in a resort.So pack your bags and come.

Vivaan:Ok.




Vivaan told everything to Puneet.

Vivaan:Your plan became a flop.

Puneet:Reema proved that she really loves you.Why do you want to break up with her Vivaan?

You said you want to break up with Reema because of her childish nature.But she was so mature when you told her about the property issue.Not only that.You are a detective who has many enemies because of your profession.Reema could have left you for her safety.Still she chose to be with you.That shows her maturity.Tell me Vivaan.Is this the real reason for wanting a break up with her?

Vivaan became dull.

He said in his mind:I can't tell you the reason Puneet.But even you will take the same decision if you were in my place.

Vivaan:Puneet..just shut up and help me.

Puneet nodded.




Vivaan and Puneet went for the dance party.

Reema introduced a girl to Puneet.

Reema:This is my best friend Reeva.Reeva...this is Vivaan's best friend Puneet.

Reeva:Hi!

Puneet was lost in Reeva.

Puneet:Hi!

Everyone started dancing.

Reeva was dancing joyfully.Puneet was mesmerized by her dance.

Raat Ye Karamjali Raat
Ye Sanak Chadhi Raat
Besharam Badi Hai

Aaj Karegi Mere Saath
Ye Koyi Khurafaat
Peechhe Hi Padhi Hai

Ow Raat Ye Karamjali Raat
Ye Sanak Chadhi Raat
Besharam Badi Hai

Aaj Karegi Mere Saath
Ye Koyi Khurafaat
Peechhe Hi Padhi Hai







Honi To Koyi
Ghalat Baat

Pakki Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Vivaan and Reema were dancing.

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine

Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Ghalti Hai Mauke Ki
Mera Dosh Nahi Hai
Kitni Tikayi Hai Mujhe
Hosh Nahi Hai

Hona Kya Hona Kya
Hona Ab 90 Ml Se
Litreon Mein Pike Bhi
Santosh Nahi Hai

Sakhi Aur Pilane Ko
Mare Jaa Rahe Ladke
Capacity Ke Mamle
Mein Saare Hain Kadke

Pi Ke Bhi Pi Ke Bhi
Pi Ke Bhi Jo Tika Raha
Saath Le Jaaungi
Girebaan Pakad Ke



Par Yeh Inayat Kal Subah
Tak Ki Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Puneet also started dancing.

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Jis Bar Mein Pairon Ki
Tere Dhool Padi Naa
Daaru Wahan Ki
Piyakkadon Ko Chadhi Naa

Waise To Maikhanon Ka
Main Bhi Hoon Farishta
To Fir How Come Meri
Nazar Kabhi Tujhse Ladi Naa

Aaj Ki Pehli Mulaqaat
Se Chhidi Hai Jo Baat
Dilchasp Badi Hai

Ki Saari Khurafaat
Ho Jaaye Lage Haath
Kya Soch Rahi Hai

Lagta Hai Dono
Ki Yeh Raat
Lucky Hai

Maine Bhi Maine Bhi
Maine Bhi
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai

Rajj Ke Aaj Maine
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai
Mainee Pi Rakhi Hai
Maine Pi Rakhi Hai(
Tu Jhoothi Main Makkaar).

 

They took rooms in the sea resort.


Puneet knocked at the door of Reeva.Reeva opened the door.

Puneet was mesmerized by her wet curls.Her hair was wet as she had just taken bath.

Puneet:Good morning!

Reeva:Good morning!

Puneet:I came here to ask you something.Are you single or in a relationship?

Reeva:I am single.

Puneet became very happy.

Puneet:I am so glad that you are single.

Reeva:Why?

Puneet:Because I fell for you at the first sight itself.

Reeva was surprised.

Reeva asked him with a smile:What?Don't you think that you are too fast?

Puneet:Maybe.But in this case I prefer to be fast.Because I don't want to lose you to someone else by becoming slow.

Reeva smiled:Crazy!

Reeva closed the door.Puneet just smiled.

Puneet:Crazy for you.

.

I dedicate this SS to my friend Salley145 who wanted an Alekh-Sadhana story about a mentally retarded boy and a normal  girl.


Edited by jasminerahul - 4 months ago
Posted: 4 months ago

Very interesting start dear

Just loved it 🤗

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗

Posted: 4 months ago

Congrats on the SS

thanks for the pm


Part 1

Lovely update... well written

Posted: 4 months ago

Sadhana getting married to Alekh and her sisters congratulatingthem was nice and Genda saying Sadhana has a good fate unlike her was sad. Varunblasting at Genda that she should have married her ex lover instead of her and shesaying she didn’t have a choice was shocking. The person in the fb is her ex loveror Varun? Sad that Alekh is mentally unstable, I thought this one is the ff whereTanya sharma is a naagin. Vasu blackmailing Sadhana was sad. I hated Vasu in theserial as well. Haha here Sadhana is a naagin like she was in ssk? Cool. I haveread about tu jhooti main makaar story and I was thinking about it to write on RaSiya.Reema saying that she values him more than his property was nice. Wonder what’sthe real reason for break up. Dance was so cute and romantic. Reeva Puneet scenewas funny. Thnx for dedication. Perfect pics, waiting for next. 

Posted: 4 months ago

Thank u very much.

The person in the flash back is not Varun,but Genda's ex lover.

I am surprised that u are planning to write Tu jhooti on RaSiya.Go ahead.



Originally posted by salley145


Sadhana getting married to Alekh and her sisters congratulatingthem was nice and Genda saying Sadhana has a good fate unlike her was sad. Varunblasting at Genda that she should have married her ex lover instead of her and shesaying she didn’t have a choice was shocking. The person in the fb is her ex loveror Varun? Sad that Alekh is mentally unstable, I thought this one is the ff whereTanya sharma is a naagin. Vasu blackmailing Sadhana was sad. I hated Vasu in theserial as well. Haha here Sadhana is a naagin like she was in ssk? Cool. I haveread about tu jhooti main makaar story and I was thinking about it to write on RaSiya.Reema saying that she values him more than his property was nice. Wonder what’sthe real reason for break up. Dance was so cute and romantic. Reeva Puneet scenewas funny. Thnx for dedication. Perfect pics, waiting for next. 

Posted: 4 months ago

What is Genda so upset about? Her comment suggests she is not happy in her married life.

Posted: 4 months ago

How can a wife cure a person? The family played with a girl's life. That was not fair.

Posted: 4 months ago

Vasundara actually threatened to hurt people just to keep her son married under false pretense. That's just shameful.



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