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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CoffeeAddict

You put up all characters so true to the real ones yet so intriguing and mysterious!!


Amazing!!

Can't wait!


Yup, mostly all of their's personality is same as real one's. Just the events and things shaping up will be different in my way 😳

Will continue shortly!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: DamonCrazy_D3

Kiya: The Singing Diva of the college whom every boy falls for. She likes the attention from everyone BUT one person. And unfortunately, she's bound to him all day long! And even night. Just when she thought her life couldn't get any worse, it does!?????Pls update soon Khushi!!!!Getting more n more excited.


Hahaha the blue excites you na? You'll know about it soon 😃

Was about to update.. But now spam page 20 so the prologue goes on fresh page 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..


Hahaha the blue excites you na? You'll know about it soon 😃

Was about to update.. But now spam page 20 so the prologue goes on fresh page 😳

Of course it excites me!!!!All day and all night!!!!Aisa kya hua hai.I'm so waiting for it.BTW...love the name.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haha, wait and wait 😉 You'll love it (I hope)

and name as in name of FF? 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
6th post :P 2 more to go..
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Posted: 13 years ago
last one!! Update comes on next page 😃
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The lady in her early 40's exited the airport while talking on the phone. "Don't worry Aanya. I have reached India. I promise to be at your music launch in no time. You can count on that honey!" With that, she ended the call and dialed another number. It was none other than of Kiya's.

Kiya was just about to enter school premises when she stopped hearing her cell buzz. "Yes mom? Yes' I remember Mom' I'll be there' But mom listen' No I understand' The launch is more important'" And another heart break for Kiya!

Sometimes hearing her mother always pay more attention to Aanya, she felt low. Why was it that she was always put last on her mother's list? She wanted some attention from her as well! It couldn't always be about Aanya after all. Even today, it was her first performance as a member of the band and her mom thought it wasn't important. Why is she never here when I need her? She thought and wiped the tear flowing down her cheek before anyone would notice.

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While coming out of the airport, the lady stopped to put her cell back in the purse after taking to Kiya. Just then, a passerby grabbed her purse and took off running. She screamed for help. "Help, please help. Thief' thief' someone catch him! My purse!"

No one would listen to her and instead only kept looking at her like she was crazy. Robbery happened around air-port area a lot and none of them were that worried. They were too busy attending the friends and relatives they were meeting after a long time! Yet, there was one teen there who was least interested in waiting for the person he was here to pick up.

Hearing the shrills, he looked at the lady and then at the thief. He took off running at once to catch that bloody person! The thief was of no match to his speed and he caught up with him in no time. Grabbing him by the collar of his shirt, he dragged him back to the lady and made him give her purse back with respect. Giving a slap on the cheek, he released the boy, warning him to never do the same again. If he wanted money, there were honest ways to earn it.

The person who helped was none other than KD. Once the thief left, the lady thanked him. "Thank you bte." KD simply gave a nod and murmured sarcastically to himself.

"Bade logo ki badi problems."

She asked, "Did you say something?" KD shook his head and she noticed his outfit. It was same as of Kiya's school uniform.

"So you go to Royal Academy as well? What's your name? My daughter goes there as well. Maybe you know her?" KD gave an eye-roll as he was least interested in knowing who the daughter was. He simply gave his name.

"Mera naam KD hai. And right now, I need to leave. Apni cheezo ka dhyan rakha kijiye." She was taken aback by his harshness.

"Ye vohi ladka hai na jisne abhi mere madad ki thi?" She asked herself to make sure as she watched him disappear in the crowd. Not able to understand the teens of the generation, she shook her head.

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"Ranveer!!" came the yelling voice as the girl entered the room. A sleepy Ranveer moaned in displease and replied back, "Go away moti. Let me sleep!"

"Nonu, enough okay? You've been sleeping since 15 hours now! You didn't even have dinner last night and went to sleep early. Now wake up! It's time for school."

"Moti, I said na. Go away!" Panchi grinned to herself as a plan formed in her head.

"Acha? Okay, I'll go and tell Sonia to go to school alone. She was so looking forward to riding with you on your new bike!" Hearing that, Ranveer woke up in an instant! Panchi laughed her butt of! Realizing the trap, Ranveer got angry and get out of bed to run after Panchi who rushed downstairs to escape.

Going out the door, she yelled back at him to inform. "See you at school!"

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-Khushi.



Edited by ..first.rain.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res

*unres*

First to comment..that too without a PM..Yayy :P
soo You Finally Updated. COMEON Khushi ! Itna b wait mt krwaya kr re :P

coming to the Prologue !

It Surely ws Great !

Kiya...Awww..The Poor One ! SHE has it All But Yes ! LIFE without Friends..Without someone to Care..Without Someone To Love..It Probably is Nothing !

KIYA'S MOM..Uffo ! Kaisi Mumma hai ? Tera ff padne k baad toh mujhe pura yakeen h v hv the Best Mothers..haha :P
n then! WHAT WAS THAT ? KD helping Kiya's Mother..samajh hi ni aa ra mujko Kuch bt what he did ! I m Sure there's still lil Insaniyat left in the world..well ! ATLEAST IN STORIES :P

n then comes My RaHi ! OMG..They are just soo Cute..soo Adorable !
How Panchi knows his Nonu so well.Sonia might b waiting..hahahah ! RoFL ! :D
Their Friendship is Simply soo Pure soo Magical !

As a Whole..THE starting itself is Awesome !

Waiting for More..Update Soon :)
n Keep Up the Good Work Darls..U knw I Love How You Write ! =)

Its 12:45 A.M. N mai kya kr ri thi..??
Stalking on the Forum..Waiting for Someone to give an update..n there You Were..like an Angel..lol :D
Thanks :)
Edited by kittu_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
wil unres in morning..now gonna sleep...

Sorry dear..

unres

Sorry could not wait...

Actually urs works make me go crazy..
Is achan ki mai so nahi pati felt better pad le..And he read it..

Superb intro..

Khushi dear u changing style kya..

Sorrry but Sadja,IJD ka effect nahi aaya is mai..

Shayad u kept cliff hangers to minimal in prologue...

KD love his attitude..Toug guys..Perfect one to reply back to Kia's mom..

And moti's way of eaking up nono.She knows all his weekness nah😳

Wonderful update..

Thanks for pm..
P.S:Bhulo mat we reply together and I love doing it..Agar Casper nahi tho mujhe bhul mat jao.I'm available here dear..

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Look at despo me, stalking the thread🤣
Thanx for posting the prologue.So Mrs Gujral and KD meet each other.Hmm...I am starting to get an idea as to how KD n Kiya are gonna be together all the time.RaHi was cute.So typical of Ranveer to wake up at the prospect of pataofying a new girl.LOL!!!!Update soon😊

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