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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow๐Ÿ˜›

nice update๐Ÿ˜‰

little sweet, cute, naughty, and romantic ๐Ÿ˜ณ


Thanks I love your comments keep commenting. You are one of the really great ppz frm the readers, thanks a lot <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Part 7:

Yuvi moves forward and more forward but Suvi puts her hand in between. Yuvi moves back.
Suvi: yuvraj k...ya tum Sab k..o bula sakte ho mere paoon mein bohot dard...
Yuvi realising his mistake: h...Han...haan

Yuvi shouts: kahan mar Gaye Sab ke Sab!! 
Everyone: aa rahe hain!!!
Yuvi looks at Suvi: aa rahe hain...

Everyone comes and asks Suvi what happend but Suvi doesn't know who to answer so she is looking at everyone's faces blankly.

Yuvi: oye, kuch zyaada nahi bas paoon toot Gaya.
Suvi: bas paoon toot Gaya hai ๐Ÿ˜•

Yuvi: Yaheen rehna Charon Kahin mat jaana mein isse doctor ke pas le kar jaata hoon.
Yuvi picks Suvi up and Suvi doesn't have any eye contact with her but yuvi is just looking at her and the song abhi kuch dino se starts playing.

He makes her sit in the car and does her belt.
Suvi is trying to say something but hesitates.
Yuvi looks at her plight and says: your welcome...

Theyo to the doctor and suvis on crutches.
Yuvi has his hands on Suvi so she doesn't fall.
Yuvi looks at Suvi, Suvi looks away.
Yuvi: topper mujhe hamare beech ye awkwardness achi nahi lag rahi, I'm sorry.
Suvi doesn't reply.
Yuvi goes in front of her down on his knees: I'm sorry 
And holds his ears.

Suvi: yuvraj kya kar rahe ho Sab dekh rahe hain.
Yuvi: tu jab tak sachi ka it's okai nahi bole gi tab tak mein nahi uthoon ga.

After another 5 mins...

Their is a crowd surrounding yuvreen, and telling Suvi to forgive yuvi. 
Yuvi smirking... 
Yuvi to himself: ab to tujhe mujhe maaf karna hi pare ga top...suvreen!!

What say?!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
lovely yaar 
the sorry part is tooo filmy
after all our hero is not less than any filmy hero
What say
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
lovely dear๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
cont soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ 
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

lovely yaar 

the sorry part is tooo filmy
after all our hero is not less than any filmy hero
What say


Agreed!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Please containu thiss!! Im loving it!!! Will add me to buddy list plzzz!! Xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
I just read part 1 - 7 and it effing amazinggg!!!! I totally love ittt!!!! Im loving Yuvreen romancing and arguing!!!!

Make the updates longer plzz and dont leave it at cliff hangerss plzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Part 8:

Suvi staring at everyone and yuvi smirking.
Suvi: BAS!!!! SAB KE SAB CHUP!!
Everyone gets quiet. Yuvi gets a bit scared but stays in his place; on the floor๐Ÿ˜†

Suvi: tumhe alag se invitation dena pare ga kya?! Uthooo!
Yuvi: tu mujhe maaf nahi kare gi.
Suvi: kya farak parta hai, tum apni harkaton se baaz ane se rahe...
Yuvi: tu jo Kahe gi mein woh karoon ga
Suvi looks at yuvi, getting lost in his eyes, yuvi already lost in suvi's.
Yuvi: tujhe jo chaahiye maang Lekin mujhse moon mat pher, tujhe pata hai tujhse baat kiye bina 2 min...nahi...2 sec...nahi...2 mini second bhi raha hoon kya!
Suvi: nahi...par...to kya jab tak mein tumhe maaf nahi karoon gi tum road par Bethe raho ge.
Yuvi innocently nods his head in a 'yes'.
Yuvi: abhi mere liye sirf tera 'it's okay' zaroori hai.
Suvi: it's okay, theek hai...khush!!!
Yuvi: haan
And hugs her, Suvi is surprised and then yuvi breaks the hug.

Yuvi: ab chal...Teri tooti hui taang bhi to Sab ko dikhani hai.
Suvi: shut up
She tries to hit him but yuvi moves back, Suvi lands in yuvi's arms.
He has her crutches in on hand and Suvi in the other.
Yuvi: dhyaan se...
He helps her into the car and they drive back to the college.

Rathi: kya baat hai taang turwali!?
Suvi: chup kar rathi
Yuvi: haan chup kar Yaar chot lagi hai bichari ko
Annie: awwr dekho yuvreen ek dusre ko kaise defend karte hain.
Yuvi: to agar agar ab tum logon me yuvreen keh hi diya hai to ek dusre ko defend to kar hi sakte hain.
Suvi: (murmuring) mujhe lagta ek yehi meri side pe hai, yehi Sab se Nara duffer nikla
Yuvi goes near Suvi and whispers to her: ab dekhna mera kamaal!!!
Yuvi: haina mannie and nathi!!! (smirk)
Rathi: nahi
Mannu: nahi
Rathi: rannie
Mannu: aur manaro
Naro and Annie surprised at them.

Yuvi: mujhe au tum logo ki Juliet ko to pyaar nahi hua, Lekin lagta hai real life mein sheeri farhan aur Laila majnu me dobara janam le liya
Suvi starts to laugh really hard with yuvi and other four get awkward!!

I'll update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
AMAZINGGG..!!!
 
But the part where Yuvi asking Suvi to forgive him that was too filmy and aur Cheetah isn't filmy...
 
Beautiful update..!!!
 
Will u make an Index page on the first post pleaseee???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: -Jennifer-

AMAZINGGG..!!!

 
But the part where Yuvi asking Suvi to forgive him that was too filmy and aur Cheetah isn't filmy...
 
Beautiful update..!!!
 
Will u make an Index page on the first post pleaseee???


Our cheetah is very filmy Yaar
Ishq vishq scene his idea
DDLJ scene his idea

He's really filmy per my view