OS: Breaking the Ice - Page 7

really touchung

beautifully written...gosh amazingly mesmerizing...tears welling up my throat...u protrayed the pain of seperation mixed with a tinge of redemption that finally dawned on arnav's mind brilliantly...hope someday they unite and have their happily ever after!

As always, very touching & beautifully written 😊

Very well written and very realistic too! No out of this world declarations, no running into each other's arms but a sense of hope, a sense of dream. :)

That was just fantastic...the pain on both sides was so well depicted.

finally written something after a long..loved it sooo

Very well
Continue soon nd do pm me

OMG this is just stupendously fantastic 🤗

Loved it👏👏👏👏

You wrote again after such a looong time!!!

You have written it beautifully!