such a beautiful peice of writing & you managed to convey the emotions, feelings, the angst, the pain from both the characters so beautifully! bravoo for that. your writings are always a pleasure to read and ive mentioned that soo many times lol but again, i absolutely admired and loved how they both know that they cant live without each other, yet the circumstances are what are keeping them apart...sacrifices, sigh.
but but the last line about hope still being there is what ended off it nicely that with a new day, they both will come together...eventually :)
again, wonderful OS!!
- Dee
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