~Mi Amore~ Dil Dosti Dance SS#2 Ch 13 Pg 115 - Page 17

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

Upi the one woman army... 😛

lol

Update jldi se na di...kyu hum pyaare pyaare...massom se bachon ko tadpa rhi ho...??😭

Bwahahhaah vaishu lol tu b na!!! 🤣 😉

Update 😭 .. i"ll be off fr this week .. aaj jaldi se update dede .. 😭 ..

Alrighty then, Its a festival today, so in between cousins and aunties, I am here to keep my promise... The thing is, I have written this in between many breaks, couldn't help it with relatives all over the house.. So, things didn't go as much as I planned to squeeze into one update... I am breaking this one.. The rest of the part will be updated when I feel like... But most probably before monday... Feel free to hit me with joote chappal.. I ll meet you at the end then..

okay...

so me first... me first!!!!!!!!!!!

yippee!!!!!!!!!!

accha toh aapne bomb nhi foda...

looks like ki aap aur baarud daalne wale ho ismein...

viha... always the sweet and simple one... u know no complications.. i just love the fact abt viha... u know straight and simple...

swaron: have a feeling... shivam??? lekin nhi i don't think so as i know u won't include him so cancel that... but disgust???? so has to be someone else... let me guess swayam coming to save sharon from that person if that person is not swayam which i believe is true...

so kriyansh less!!!!!!! actually rey less... kria toh thi hi nhi
well kind of expected that... since pehle majority updates mein kriyansh tha plus i was kinda scared ki kahin bomb mein kam na ho jaye kriyansh...

ab i can demand my kriyansh for the next update... u know no guilt ki baaki kam kiya (mujhe aata bhi nhi lekin u see i think a lot so aa hi jata finally)
okay toh back to kriyansh... loved how u describe rey's pov... while reading first chapter of today's thread i was thinking to make a request for rey's pov over the kisses... apne yhan de diya... glad he understands what kria is going thru and what is she expecting... so sweet of him to take caare of her everything... plus the irony he is the one person there who gives her the greatest pleasure and greatest sadness... all the turmoil is relted to him only... and seeing him they vanish too... u know like the valley of flowers for her... but i wud like to read what his feelings are for the kiss... not thinking abt kriya's feelings.. u know his own feelings, his worries, his happinss... what it meant for him abt her giving in...
waiting for grand proposal but yet the sweet and simple one u know having a grandeur in itself...

ab pehle yeh batao di... aap kaunsi dictionary isteml karte ho... inne saare flower ke baare mein bhi pata hai... aap toh yeh batao ki aapko kya nhi pata... u have such a wide ranging knowledge... love it.. really di admire u for that.. genuinely...

so jaldi se isse line mein ucchal ke lao and update this one pehle plzzz...

and haan awesome update... 4got to say it...

kyun di????????

kyun !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

unhappy wala update kyun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yeh toh sarasar anyaay hai...

abhi toh sb theek huya tha... well swaron mein toh woh bhi nhi tha lekin fir bhi...

bechare swaron aur viha!!!!!!!!!

nd over all mere bechaare kriyansh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

mujhe aaj subah se pata nhi feel aa rh tha kimain update padh ke royunga jahan tak...

u know sort of intuition...

looks like sahi ho gaya...

*Mummy*

*and didi...*😭

bacche ko rulva rhe ho...

woh second reply maine pehle hi maar diy tha.. even before u updated... based on ur note...

mujhe bdi maza aaying yeh sab karne mein...

i bet there's gonna be a huge MU on the way as some1 else lands on the second building thinking kisi aur ne kiya and fir thanking some1 else while the other one is left wondering what happened and the other one is saying ki y it happened... and crying away...

aisa hi hota hai